Na Ja Mitran Ton Door- OS (MG version)~Updated 18th Sept 2017

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Nice OS dear with different concept

Loved it!! Well penned !

Geet and dev are married and their martial life hit rough note. Geet once a college diva is now struck with a couch potato. She sees a song on TV and identifies the pop star as Maan. Geet rejected Maan for being a simple janitor and choose dev over him. She regrets her decision now but alas it's too late. Maan proved thyself to be a worthy person and moved forward in his life and geet was sulking with household chores.

Nice song dear

Thanks for the pm !

:))

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Hehehe funny os iptida geet was married to a man who only eats and poor geet has to just cook and cook she is married to dev maan was a peon who had proposed geet but madam geet insult his love coz of his position as a peon but maan vowed to be successful and he is while as maan had said that geet will repenting just making rotis for rest of life and bot it was true dev is a self centered jerk who doesn't even cares for his wife self respect dear care to make it a ss

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Sad geet left maan for dev...
But now she is struck with a jerk...

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AYAZU12

@AYAZU12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

awesome os dear...geet rejected maan back then as he was a sweeper and married dev and now regretting seeing maan as a singer and she stuck with her stupid husband dev who treats her as a servant...hehe she threw the roti on his face...funny os...thnx for the pm...

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: swapna.p
Congrats for new os..
Waiting for update..

Updated dear!😳

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
outstanding OS! thanks 4 da pm! wonderfully written! Geet rejected Maan 4 Dev! she is nw stuck with this grumpy fat man! she sees a song on TV n realises its Maan! She regrets what she did 2 Maan! its 2 late now! love the end when Dev got a flying roti on his face! nice song!

Haha thanks a lot dearie... Tried something different for a change out of my romantic patterns! 😳

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: solaceMG
Wow. Awesome concept. Beautiful experiment I must say. So Geet is married to Dev and Their married life has got super dull. Dev doesn't like her. Nor does she likes him, real life mein aise bohot log honge jo aise bina pyaar ke shadi ko niva rahe honge.
Maan popstar baan gaya hain aur Geet aab chulha ghistey huwe uski Geet sunn rahi hain aur apne kismat ko kos rahi hain. LoL ha ha ha
Dukh bhi hain hansi bhi aa rahin hai
The song is very catchy indeed.
Awesome OS.
Waise I love the way you write everything but today I am surprised with your versaitility. Super.
Waiting for naja part 2. Wink wink

Aww thank you so much hun.

Am so happy that someone is in support with my experimental writings as well.

Thanks for your beautiful comments dearie🤗