Bhoot Aaya S#3/Note/pg64/12 jan

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: priyanshi15
story is interesting
mirror break
maaneet ka cute lovely romance
i loved it di
so much

thanks for pm

then shaadi
adi bechara bhoot ke chakkar me fas gya
oops geet ya bhut

.
and last part is amazing
i laughing holding stomach

😆

its superb funny

phle scary laga
par end is best

can't imagine wo scene actually jaha dono karib the
poor maan

thank u so much dear

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@jssood

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#132

oh to bhoot adi main ghus gya

that is why he act different

waiting for next

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Akku

@akkub.92

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#133

unexpected suspense it was maan dream about manisha cant stop laughing...😃😃

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kavita

@kavitha_r

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#134

Please send me the link if you are writing in fb

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#135

Nice update dear !!

Liked it!!

It was Maan's dream about the ghost . He imagined Manisha as ghost and Manisha's endurance and affection for him scared the hell out of him that poor Maan had to dreamt Manisha as ghost. Nice twist and ending dear .

Thanks for the pm !

:))

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#136

awesome update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...so Maan was dreaming all along...😎...He dreamed of Manisha coming close to him by entering in Geet's body and calling him hottie...😉...He was about to kiss him...🤣...hearing this Geet laughed like anything making Maan angry...😛😆...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#137

Thanks for posting in blog.

Who is after maan and Geet. Geet I s starting to behave weirdly. Maan knows something is wrong but not what.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#138

thanks 4 da pm! LP - hilarious update! well written! omg it was all his dream! he tells Geet abt it and she is amused n teases him! Maan has this dream all thanks 2 Manish-a! nice end