MG FF - HOW TO NAME IT? - UPDATED PART 11 & 12 PG 83 Dt. 23rd August.

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Lakshmi

@Vaidhumom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Khushibloom
Me 2nd 😛

Hi Khushi...How are you? Where are you? Not to be seen these days...All fine?...

Edited by Vaidhumom - 8 years ago

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Lakshmi

@Vaidhumom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: jasbirkaur85197
Vry vry vry beautiful update yaar. ...nd pleeease don't say sorry for anything. ...I luved maaneet's eye lock nd maan inharofying of geet. ...aur geet is scare going alone with maan. ...well done. .eagerly waiting for nxt update

WOW...THANKS A LOT MY DEAR🤗

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Beautiful Chapter

Oh the song just fabulous I loved it always did

Ria something is wrong with her and I do hope Geet finds out soon , if she was a bubbly person and now seems like a careless emotionless person then there is certainly some storm brewing

I like that Maan waited for Geet and he was all excited too everything about her interest him and it seems like he is falling for her

I just loved that both could speak about their grand mothers that was indeed very endearing

Geet hestating to go with Maan and I suppose its something thats natural with girls especially if its their first ride with a guy the nervousness the negative imaginations all was there

coming to the resturant Geet is awed and the atmosphere the enviroment is beautiful and she admires that while Maan admires her thats so cute yet it gives off such a ticklish feeling

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Mg13

@Mg13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

It's just awesome update di..😃 I love maneet scenes very much in want now there kiss😳 which was going to happen in this update but maan didn't becs of trust which he is building in her mind about himself.😳😆

Update next soon di...😃

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

terrific update! superbly written! loved Geet n Rabecca's friendship! Ria calls Geet! Hope Geet manages 2 Geet Ria to talk abt her problem! Geet is so sweet n caring! Ria lucky 2 have her! Its so sweet that Maan was waiting 4 Geet! she is surprised but refuses dinner! Maan pleads as he didn't eat and she agrees! she is scared of gng alone with him in his care! Silly Maan didn't understand her! Geet's dadi is wonderful! they have a wonderful bond! Maaneet talk abt their respective dadis. its ncie that Maan and Geet like the same music! Maan again lies 2 Geet! update soon. nice learning some Tamil!!

Edited by khwaishfan - 8 years ago

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fict

@fict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Fantastic update. Geet's worry of going alone with Maan was so natural. Loved their car ride and their talks about grandmothers. Maan is completely mesmerized by her and she too feels the attraction. Worried for Ria though. Something has happened and she is coping with it by blocking every emotion. waiting for next and thanks for pm.

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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Such a sweet update. Its really fresh. Geet and ria share a special bond which is clear from their conversation and also how Geet felt about it in her mind about the past. She was ready for another call from ria about good. That is the level of her understanding... And about Geet going out with Maan I should say you have done a wonderful job. That is how a girl feels when suddenly asked out without knowing much about him. And MSK lying about car and music and everything is very funny. Loved the update

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

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Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Awesome update!!

Loved it.

Very beautifully written.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks for d pm:)

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Hi Khushi...How are you? Where are you? Not to be seen these days...All fine?...

yes akka everything is fine 😊
Its just that my phone is troubling me that's why i am quite inactive these days.

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

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Posted: 8 years ago

#170

Part 3
It was very beautiful part
Rebecca was so nervous and geet was all the time with her to comfort her and even to tease her 😉
Their bond is beautifully explained.
Finally maaneet meet again and both are so shocked and surprised with this
After the dance both are so lost in each other 😳
Aww so sweet of maan just because geet din't have anything he too dint have his dinner that too his favourite 😃
Sorry for being late 😛

Edited by Khushibloom - 8 years ago