mannet ss- sympathy or love? ~ new thrd link updated~ - Page 29

Nice update dear

Lovely update maan woke up in hospital he warned doctor not to tell he can walk as he has a plan and this time he will make shiv dance on his tunes he was lost in past when his mom abandoned him cursing maan saying no woman can love him when maan reached home hearing about geet he was stunned how she cares for him

Really like the story...
Maan have a painful past...
Hope so geet don't break his trust and loved how their story is going...

very nice.i am happy for maan

It was good...but why so small update...why not long update

Maan can walk now but he wants it to be kept secret. He doesn't want his family know about it. He was remembering his past as well. Yash informed maan about geet's state and he was surprised to know about it as they have decided to give a chance.

nice update

Originally posted by: Rpian

Flashback


" who are u VIKRAM KHURANA ?? none but only a person who is about to destroy !!!
I can't live my life like this a failed person and a handicap son ! " - Priya khurana say to her husband Vikram khurana while pionting toward his 12 yrs old son MAAN who now lost his capability to walk
M- mom what are u saying ? U are joking na ??
While jerking her son hand priya say
P- i'm not joking ! I want a good life but both of u just ruined my life .
NO GIRL WANT TO LIVE LIFE WITH A POOR MAN & NO GIRL WANT HER PARTNER TO BE A HANDICAP !

V- it's not true priya plz understand . I promise i'll do everything to save ourself . We will built everything again . We will start from starting !

But their words fell on deaf ears .priya pick her bags and leaving behind her broken husband and son ! With a smirk on her face knowing verywell she is reason of destruction.
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M- IT'S MINE TURN NOW!
AB KHEL MERA HOGA , BAZZI MERI HOGI AUR KATPUTLI TUM HOGE

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Hi all

Well i was trying my best but the low responce is so DISCOURAGING . I DON'T THINK IT TAKE TOO MUCH TIME TO NICE / BAD / ANY OTHER WORDS . I Never said i like appriciating comments .
I'll always look forward for critizms too . But if it continue like this then i can assure u that the update will no more be frequent (BUT I DON'T THINK ANYONE CARE(: )

I'm not gonaa update untill/unless condition won't fulfilled . THANX:)

Hello this is the 2nd time i am commenting on this story particulerly on d note u have put. Dont take me wrong but see every reader has their own choice nd taste. 4 example i only follow a few writers nd i make sure 2 like comment on their stories. I know writers r putting a lot of effort to write and writing takes so much time as well.
But u have to take a few things in consideration, 1st u r completely new, 2nd this forum is a little inactive 3rd readers intrst
Dun b dishearten just keep patience nd da way readers cant force writers a writer cant also force readers to gv responses, right?
I have seen ur likes at other stories but not a single comment on other stories or may be i have missed that is possible too.
So basically my point is thats fine cause its ur own wish. I am clueless why do u think u r not getting good responses while your updates are too small. Although I appreciate your effort of updating regularly but dear dont u think expectations hurt?
all i want to say is this types of notes sometimes are a bit sad to see. I hope i didn't hurt you , i am extremely sorry if u dun agree or feel bad but i am being brutally honest since u asked for it.
I am hoping you will take my opinion positively and give bigger updates also dont totally rely upon resonses if writing is ur passion do persue it without thinking of getting validated. If ur content is good enough it will get good views, just giv a litl time.

All the best.

awesome ud

Nice update..