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Posted: 7 years ago
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" who are u VIKRAM KHURANA ?? none but only a person who is about to destroy !!!
I can't live my life like this a failed person and a handicap son ! " - Priya khurana say to her husband Vikram khurana while pionting toward his 12 yrs old son MAAN who now lost his capability to walk
M- mom what are u saying ? U are joking na ??
While jerking her son hand priya say
P- i'm not joking ! I want a good life but both of u just ruined my life .
NO GIRL WANT TO LIVE LIFE WITH A POOR MAN & NO GIRL WANT HER PARTNER TO BE A HANDICAP !

V- it's not true priya plz understand . I promise i'll do everything to save ourself . We will built everything again . We will start from starting !

But their words fell on deaf ears .priya pick her bags and leaving behind her broken husband and son ! With a smirk on her face knowing verywell she is reason of destruction.
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M- IT'S MINE TURN NOW!
AB KHEL MERA HOGA , BAZZI MERI HOGI AUR KATPUTLI TUM HOGE

...

Hi all

Well i was trying my best but the low responce is so DISCOURAGING . I DON'T THINK IT TAKE TOO MUCH TIME TO NICE / BAD / ANY OTHER WORDS . I Never said i like appriciating comments .
I'll always look forward for critizms too . But if it continue like this then i can assure u that the update will no more be frequent (BUT I DON'T THINK ANYONE CARE(: )

I'm not gonaa update untill/unless condition won't fulfilled . THANX:)
Edited by Rpian - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Maan can walk again


Poor Geet. Everyone is so worried for maan


Thank you for the update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting teaser dear
Waiting for the update
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update
Maan is safe and able to stand in his leg and that also in front of his rival shiv mittal
Waiting for next update to know how maan come out of this situation
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely teaser 👍🏼
Priya 😡
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Posted: 7 years ago
Super teaser
Omg how can Priya do this
Poor maan

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update and tease. Mann can walk now
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Posted: 7 years ago
so much interesting story i m reading it but
i can't comment nowadays bz my in law's r here fr month i have to read chupke chupke toady i read ur' s
from pt 9 to 19
geet saw maan power wen daadi being attacked she afraid of him
vikram told his son to give chance to his marriage geet told y ahe married him he
honestly told hr it's up to hr if she want this
relation or want freedom from this forced relation but she want to continue now
maan told yash to take care of kavya treatment
geet getting comfortable around maan but she uncomfortable in presence of yash
maan console hr wen she remembering hr parents maan get hyper web he heard about shiv his own maa is wiwith him geet get scared of his anger but maan make hr relaxed
but maan met accident and was missing vikram yash was worried geet also she fainted
maan was safe he knows it's shiv's plans

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Posted: 7 years ago

Chapter20


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Maan open his eyes and find himself in hospital when he hear doctor voice from outside who enter with Raghu ( maan's trustworthy bodyguard who was throughhout connected with maan without anyone knowiing)
Doctor come and greet him with a smile . But maan show not a single trace of hapiness.
D- congrats Mr. Khurana it's not less than miracle finally ur hardwork paid.
now u can wa...
M- DARE U DOCTOR DARE U TO COMPLETE WORDS .devaro k bhi kaan hote hain
Doctor look at him confused isn't he happy
When Maan whisper in low voice
M jab tak main nhi chahta y baat kisi ko pata nhi chalegi . Forgot everything u saw.

Doctor nodded his head in yes . Needed no more words further as he was very well aware of maan temper .


M- now excuse us .
Doctor nodded and left
When raghu come forward and say
R- I'm so sorry sir . It was my fault if i have taken more precaution then u'll not get injured
M- does Dcp reached on time? and he informed anyone about my plan?
R- yes sir & all childrens too get saved because of u . Yash sir contact Dcp but he hasn't reveled about ur plan .
M- Good ! But my driver?
R- sir he was seriously injured as the goons caught him but now he is safe . But i get information that Shiv mittal soon try to reach u as he was succesful running again this time .
Maan clenched his fist
M- his plan was good to kill me but in all this he forget WITH WHOM HE IS MESSING THIS TIME .
Go & inform my family that u find me and
R- i know sir. It will remain a secret i promise.
M- tell him we are coming and arrange a wheel chair fast

He nodded & left . While maan close his eyes unaware that how much pain his absense of few hours installed in a soul.
...
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" who are u VIKRAM KHURANA ?? none but only a person who is about to destroy !!!
I can't live my life like this a failed person and a handicap son ! " - Priya khurana say to her husband Vikram khurana while pionting toward his 12 yrs old son MAAN who now lost his capability to walk
M- mom what are u saying ? U are joking na ??
While jerking her son hand priya say
P- i'm not joking ! I want a good life but both of u just ruined my life .

GIRL WANT TO LIVE LIFE WITH A POOR MAN & NO GIRL WANT HER PARTNER TO BE A HANDICAP !

V- it's not true priya plz understand . I promise i'll do everything to save ourself . We will built everything again . We will start from starting !

But their words fell on deaf ears .priya pick her bags and leaving behind her broken husband and son ! With a smirk on her face knowing verywell she is reason of destruction.

...

Maan open his eyes due to sudden jerk

M- BE PREPARED SHIV IT'S MINE TURN NOW!
AB KHEL MERA HOGA , BAZZI MERI HOGI AUR KATPUTLI TUM HOGE!

Adi & yash both was on mantion door waiting for maan . As soon car arive yash immidatly run toward maan and hug him causing maan to give a small smile

Y- u scared me u know and look u get how much injured
M- relax ! I'm fine u are getting worried as if u are my wife
Y- DON'T just don't give me that stupid smirk of ur now . Do u even know how much e get scared and bhabhi she get unconsious and doctors give her injections to calm her down .
Maan look toward him not knowing if he hear correct?
Why she get so scared?

They are giving a chance but he hasn't expected to hear this .

But before he think further vikram engulf him finally taking a breath of releif
V- thank god u are safe maan u scared us
M- i'm fine dad it was just an accident and just some robbers attacked me . But i'm fine .

Yash immidatly look at maan knowing it was a complete lie . The securing is so strict that none reach him if he hasn't allowed himself but decided to stay quite for now.
...
Vikram guide maan to his room where his eyes fell on geet who was sleeping due to seductive .
V- do u know maan u most scared this soul ur wife . She get so panicked that doctors give her seductive to calm her down.
V- u take rest son now .
Maan once look at her then his thoughts drifted to past

NO GIRL WANT TO LIVE LIFE WITH A POOR MAN & NO GIRL WANT HER PARTNER TO BE A HANDICAP !


As soon vikram closed door maan get up and went toward her .

He sit beside her and whisper
M- i hope geet u won't do something that break my trust . I gave u one chance . But if it break then i won't be able to give second chance.

Saying so he caresses her forehead and place a kiss on it
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Edited by Rpian - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Good, now maan is able to walk

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