mannet ss- sympathy or love? ~ new thrd link updated~

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Prologue


Relations , family & friends the most simplest words with most difficult meaning more we try to understand more we get confused. Each & every person in this world have different opinion about these words . WORDS is it correct to call them only WORDS for some yes and for some they are not just words it is their life a base for making home .
Some say that they are nothing but just some burden who trap us . They give nothing but PAIN because they make u weak . They never by ur side when u needed them most . They only know how to hurt u & how to give u pain. They are just names with no meaning.
on otherside for some it's more important then their life . Life seems incomplete without them when u are sad family & ur friends make u laugh in most difficult situations they hold u and protect u so that u can't fall.

This story is about 2person with different thought on these words or more than words ..

For him it nothing for her it's everything

One is ready to destroy everything for himself and other is ready to destroy herself for her loved once .


For him help means sympathy and for help means love .


He is as cold as ice and she is as warm as fire .

Fire & ice
Fire who give us warmth by burning herself & dry ice as cold ready to burn everything .


Story of a 30 years bussiness tycoon & 22 years old middle class girl .

Two person whose meaning are different for relation , family & friends .

But how their life turn up when they bounded by his father with nothing more than a DEAL .

A deal of her loveonce happines with her whole life

She is bounded by him for her whole life a person who unable to walk .
A person who forced to do this marriage a ruthless, arrogant person who hate any helping hand which remind him his weakness . He hate when people show sympatthy to him ..

Only for his dad sake he is doing this marriage but this relation is nothing but just a forced burden for him .

A story from his sympathy to her love ...
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Hi it's a new one WILL CONTINUE ONLY IF I GET SOME RESPONCE

Secondly i've written it bfr too in Ragna version but that story is incomplete
I'M SOLE OWNER OF THIS STORY ANY INCIDENT /SCENE MATCH WITH ANY OTHER FF/SS
IS PURELY A COINCIDENCE

I repeat i've written it's Ragna version .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Edited by Ramjanki - 6 years ago
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congrats on the new SS! sympathy or love - amazing prologue! awaiting updates!
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please do continue! please post cs
Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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i read it but this was incomplete pls this time complete pls
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Congrats for the new story !
Interesting prologue
Looking forward to the story line
Update soon
:))
Edited by anu5 - 7 years ago
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Chapter 1


Khurana mantion was decorated beautifully everyone is in awe by looking this place which is looking not less than any palace royally decorated . Mr. Vikram khurana ( father of maan's father) finally have some hope that now onwards thinking of his son change regarding relations . Today his son finally get married to a girl who know value of relations very well . He is guilty as he trap geet in a deal but he have no option say him greedy but for his son only , A person who hate females and Relations , family & friends hold no meaning for him .

Vikram know very well that their journey not going to be like normal couples but still he beleive that his only son change for good .

He hope that maan accept geet and atleast give her a chance but he himself tensed how he is going to behave with her .

Maan is 25 year old one of most succesful bussines tycoon but he hate weakness and he hate himself as he is weak he can't walk and his thoughts are same regarding relations thry only make a men WEAK.

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Maan bedroom


His room was decorated beautifully for starting a new relation a girl was sitting middle on bed nervous & scared . As how her life going to start she do this marriage for her family without even once meeting him . She hear his name but never intrested in reading about him . He is known to be cold & arrogant but for geet none of the person is arrogant bcoz she believe every person have heart even if it refuse but still she is scared now what??

She is bounded in this relation for full life. She believe in making relation and spending her whole life living them a girl who know only to put her heart & soul in her every relation may be it's a deal but now it's her duty to make this relation work.


She clutch her lehanga immidatly as she sense someone entering inside room . It's her husband


Maan enter inside his room on his wheel chair irritated by all rituals which he forced by his dad to complete neither he is intrested in marriage nor in any girl . His irritation increase as he enter inside his room and see the same girl whom he married some hours ago sitting on His BED.

That's enough for him

M- WHAT ARE U DOING HERE??

( he yell causing her to jump in fear)

Her nervousness is now totally changed into fear seeing his red eyes boiling in air . She make herself prepare before for him but she never thought it's his first word.


M- GET UP
Get up from by bed & leave from my room noe itself .
( his voice showing determination & his anger)

She get up immidatly but she don't know what now ?
How he behave with her life that ? And where she go !!
M- Are u deaf ? Just go

G- b b.. U t

M- i'm forcefully tied to u .
NEVER TRY TO INTERFARE IN MY LIFE SO JUST GET THE HELL OUT OF MY ROOM.

G - her small hope shattered
Is he really behaving with her like that even she did this for her parents & family but how he say like that.


M- HOW MEAN U ARE ??
Still standing here .


He grab her hand and push her outside his room
M- go

She was trying to understand what just happen .

M- Dad
( maan yell )

M- dad


As vikram hear his voice he immidatly step toward his room
When he see geet standing outside his room .

It's not difficult for him to understand that maan did this .

M- Dad what is she doing here?
Didn't i made it clear that i'm doing this for ur happiness and she will not interfare in my life .


V- maan why she is standing outside??
It's her room also & she will stay here only !!!!


M- IT'S MINE ROOM .
and she didn't stay here.


V- u are married now and she only stay here .


M- but


V- i think i made myself clear Maan and if u have some respect for me then u didn't utter a word after that

M- fine then i'm leaving this place.


V- fine then i thought that i mean nothing to u !!


M- bu

V- decision is ur's .


Maan enter in his room

Vikram put an assuring hand on her shoulder who was stunned by witnessing this

V- beta give him time . I'm sure he will accept u soon.

Saying so vikram leave from their
Leaving behind her who is going to enter in a new world his world .


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Edited by Ramjanki - 6 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update dear
Liked it!!
Vikram was in guilt for bounding Geet in scared bond with Maan inspite of knowing maan's thinking towards relationship. He was greedy and wanted Geet to change maan's prespective and fill his heart with warmth and love.
Geet was knitting her dreams with her husband but Maan within seconds broke her dream through his act and words. Vikram gave ultimatum for Maan to respect or contempt his words and relationship
Thanks for the update !
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanks 4 updating! lovely update, well written. Maaneet married! But Maan angry n rude 2 Geet! he chases her out of the room. Is Maan like this cos he is in a wheelchair? Feeling 4 Geet! Maan refuses 2 accept her as he was forced! His dad shouts him! Vikram feels guilty but he wanted Geet to change Maan! it is deal but Geet want to make her marriage work! Vikram warns Maan! update soon n do pm. please change Raghav to Maan! thanks
Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Nice one
Maan father force Maan to marry Geet,feel sad for Maan n Geet too.
Hope you don't make Maan devil in future😕
Update soon.

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