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Character sketch


Prince Maan Singh Khurana- prince of Raipur but Live in delhi with his family , 25 yrs old . Md of khurana construction india's no 1 construction company .

Metali khurana - wife of maan died . ( her death is a mystry ) . Loved maan too much to do anything for him and so as maan .

Manyta khurana - just one month old . Daughter of maan & metali .
Geet handa - now lost herself loved her mom a way too much , 19 yrs old .

Savitiri devi- maan grandmother.

Vikrant khurana - RECENTLY his father

Parvati khurana- RECENTLY his mother

Chapter 6



Banging his hand on nearby table vikram shout
V- one more failure ...
Throwing everything from table he murmur ..
V- once more he destroy my plan ... Even after years i'm king for name sake just bcoz of him , and he was giving me glares ...
If in place of that metali maan was died life bcom so much easy for me ...

JAB BHI USSE MARNA CHAHTA HU KOI N KOI AA JATA HAIN USKI JAAN BACHANE ...

AUR AB TOH USE MAAR BHI NHI SKTA JAB TK USKA BETA NA HO MERE PASS!!!

Aur ab ek bhoj bhi toh badh gya uski beti ..
Once more he try to lash his anger on non living things ...

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Savitri devi soon come to know about geet she went to meet her in her room.

S- we are sorry for ur's this condition beta .

G- but u have no need to be sorry mam , i must thank you and especially prince for saving me .

The conversation doesn't last long as savitri come to know about maan leaving palace in anger she got worried and say

Pta nhi kya likha h inki kismat main ...
Kabhi kabhi lgta h . He is in real cursed . Cursed to never have a peaceful life .

Unknown to the fact that wanting or not but geet whole consentration was on her since she was informed about prince. She was curious want to know if he is back or not . Safe or not??
...

Maid help geet to settle down on her bed. But she was not at piece , unknown to even herself all she was thinking about the man she meet and look like her whole world turn upside down . Giving a sense of security to her . But how is it possible??

Jo khud itna bechan h , vo kisi ko kaise aisa ehsaas kaise d skta h ??
Is he in actual or her imagination?? Is he real or fake? Is it true or lie??

She know he belong to someone but still her heart admire him . First man in her life who actualy haven't talked harshly .
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U are cursed maan , cursed. U will never get someone u belong to u . A bad omen u are . Since the day u came we lost everything . Someone shout at a 8 year old boy , who was sitting in corner of a room . Trying to hide from everyone not wanting to hear a single word more .

No!!!

he shout
Waking up in midnight near a deserted area . He wipe sweat formimg on his head breaathing heavily . The memories trying to haaunt him again...

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Maan father wants to kill him
Is he not his own son
Loved geet maturity for her ahe

Lovely update Vikram wanted to kill maan but metali died instead poor maan he will be devastated to know his own father trying to kill him he doesn't want to lose his throne on which he is just a namesake geet worried for maan she knows he madly loves his wife but still heart wants what heart wants here maan woke up from a nightmare to find himself in a deserted place

Chapter 7


It take some time for maan to completely get relax then he rember last night event how in anger he left palace and come here where he & metali come oftenly whenever he was upset .

Resting his hand on his head he cursed himself for breaking like this . He need to control himself.

Taking some deep breath he calm himself . He need to go back . Somethings need to sort out...

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Palace

V- i'm not getting it what the hell is happening here!
Vikram shout on his PA who inform him that he doubt one more project they are going to lose as someone leaking informations ...

V- enough is enough . I don't want further lose !!
He said with finality in his voice . I want culprit in front of me !!
Listing his high voice all servent and members came toward him and geet also look at the scene in front of her...
When she noticed HIM ,
G- he look tired
She thought ..

Saying so he cut call and look at maan who at same time enteted in palace and going toward his room

V- stop PRINCE!!

Causing maan to stop in his tracks . He look toward vikram with boring expressions knowing what he want to say..

V- vo deal
Maan raise his one hand . Letting him know to stop . In a calm yet strict tone he say
M- u have no need to worry about kc . I know how to handle it .
Regarding that govt project we are NOT GOING TO LOSE IT .
V- and how that possible
Vikram say greeting his teeth
M- that is mine department And i know how to handle it ..
The culprit is already caught , SO NOW EXCUSE ME AND DON'T GATHER CROWD IN PALACE .

Saying so he start to move upward when he hear him saying
V- i don't want to lose anything now Maan bcoz of u...

But as metali say him oftenly ,try to pay on heed to him he left to his room to change .

Where HIS eyes meet with HER ...
But without stopping he just disaaper in his room

When geet hear another scream of vikram
V- look maa how he is behaving . He don't have much manner that how to behave ...

Geet averted her gaze from vikram toward HIS direction
G- kya h ye??
She thought...

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Some minutes pass and everyone left to do his/ her work . But her gaze was only in that direction where he dissaper i.e. toward his room ...


When she say pallavi running in the adjacent room that belong to manyta that's when she actualy heard her cries ..

Hesitatinly she enter in manyta room on wheelchair , where pallavi was trying hard with maids to try to calm her down.

She knocked causing pallavi to look toward her
P- aap ander aa skti h beta..

Geet enter inside and say

G- i if iff u allow may i try ?

Pallavi was surprised but shrugging her thoughts aside she take manyta in her arms that's when she saw her first actually .

Her eyes were just like HIM , HER PRINCE..
and she look nothing less than An angel.
At that instant she connected with the little angel bcoz she was his part !!

Manyta slowly calm down and went in sweet slumber feelimg a different yet a known feeling . Not knowing how much metali carved to hold her daughter . Who was there with both of them yet so far...

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Note

Hi all !!
This note is just to inform u all that i know the story is moving slow ..
But girls this is gonna continue in same speed . As maybe Geet feel something for maan like love at first sight but for man like maan here scene is different . So it will take time and + his insecurities...

2)- regarding metali . So girls u are going to have her many scene but that will be not so long and not like that i added ghost in this story . Just trying to show that soul of manyta is still connected with maan . Till he won't free her she will be their whever he want to guide him + she is a mother so try to understand .

Sry if i am going illogical