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very nice update

Hoo maan meeting Manyata
Maan is missing Murali

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Chapter 8



A month passed by and everything just changed in her life . Her mom she lost her in darkness ...

Despite the fact she start walking as doctors already stated before but she lost her single relation almost .

As per maan order Aditya come within three days with news of her mom but she is in coma . They find her in critical condition till he reached their she was sinking that time .

But it all this two best things that happen with her
1) her & her mom culprits are behind the bars now.
2) Manyta & her bond that was growing day by day and her growing feelings for maan.

Maan seeing her taking care of manyta decided that she live in palace for manyta now, and that was the first & last time she hear about something for manyta from his mouth.
But the thing that she doesn't even understand a bit that how is he cursed?
His family always taunt him & make him responcable for almost everything dadi sometimes take his side but never try to talk with him & all other were just good for nothing and the other thing is His acceptence . Always listen but never ever answered back once . Almost lost but still taking care of everything and slowly it starting hurting her .

It was past midnight


Geet slowly closed door of manyta room & went toward his room to see him once just begore sleeping that was her routine now a days . But she found none , she is now worried but she have no right to enquire. Has she?

Dismissing her thoughts aside she went in hall with the thought as soon he came she will left from there .

Some seconds passed by some minutes and the 4 hours

She fell asleep there itself in his wait .

A sudden voice of breaking something break her sleep.
Then she was him fumbling with his steps.

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Life is testing his patince a month passed by a MONTH and he is still here living as a life less soul without her .

He has lost his metali . The only pillar of his strenght on base of which he was living till now .


Varna toh duniya n use todne main koi kasar nhi chodi thi...


Was is his fault that he was not enough lucky to find love in his life?
What he did? WHAT WAS HIS FAULT ?
he want to shout & ask from the creator why him?
WHY?

What he snatch from anyone that EVERY SINGLE SOUL THAT LOVE HIM LEFT HIM ALONE .
IS HE REALLY A CURSED? A CURSED FOR HIS LOVED ONCE!
why just can't he pick his daughter up for once without any fear . Why just all for once not try to understand him and what punishment metali give him that she left him alone . WHY JUST HE CAN'T END ALL HIS ALGONY IN A MOMENT ?

AJ USSE AUR BARDASH NHI HUA!

This pain is too much to bear he want to lost himself . He want to leave his fame, nam e aside and went so far that none reach him . He wanted to get consumed in that darkness that none try to more harm his already wounded heart.

He decided that today he will go in a different world if possible just for few moments he want to forget everything so he consumed alcohol for the first time in his life .

Fumbuling with his steps he enter in palace where he know none was waiting for him NONE. USKI METALI BHI NHI AB TOH..

He want to laught . Laugh out so loud on this world . He has evrything that world carve for but not the thing he carved for...


He was just going to fall when two hands support him .
He fell her presence again...


But it was short lived as he hear geet worried voice .
G- aap thik toh h na?
M- m main?
He say pointing toward himself
When she nodded in yes
M- main toh thik hu par tum dur raho mujse
He whisper in a child like manner distancing himself from her

G- aap chaliya kamre main

M- maine kha na dur raho
He said

Seeing her almost crying he whisper in a low voice
M- tum nhi janti mere pass aaogi na toh tumhe bhi kuch ho jayega .phir meri manyta ko koun sambhalega ?
Bolo bolo
G- hume kuch nhi hoga aap chaliye plz
She pleaded almost unable to bear his this condition
M- nhi ho jayega !
Tumhe nhi pata ?
Meri dadi bhi mujhse dur rehti h . Unhe bhi mujhse jyada apne s pyar h !
G- dekhiye aap abhi hosh main nhi h plz

When maan didn't move she say
G- acha suniye . Aap jabse mujhse mile h aapne mujhe bachaya h na?

M- nhi tum bhi mar jati us din meri vajah s
G- shayad main us din mar jati agar aap nhi hote toh vo gunde mujhe maar dalte . Toh aap cursed kaise ?

Maan look toward her confused but didn't budge from his place

G- aapko manyta ki kasam plz chaliye
Hmm he noded then she guide him in his room
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So from here start this story . But i don't know if it will continue as lack if comments discourage . I was not supposed to post this part . But it was last time i'm posting if i won't get encouraging comments may be i'll not continue further.
Thanks

Awesome update life was changing for geet she started taking care of manyta and her feelings for geet increased everyday she was confused why his own dad hated him so much he called him a curse man though gave Justice to geet but still he was lost in his own agony geet was waiting for him to come home but he was drunk geet somehow took to his room but her heart pained to see him in pain

Awesome part. He firmly believes that he is cursed for others and he doesn't deserve any love. Nice work