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Posted: 7 years ago
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This story is removed due to lack of responce


But i will come up with a new one 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Removed 😛
Edited by Rpian - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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congrats on the new FF! lovely start! update soon! do continue
Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Welcome
And best of luck
Do continue
Interesting story line
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 1


Soon maan reach nearst hospital with injured geet in his arms where aditya was waiting for him . Aditya was confused with his sudden call but neither dare to question prince nor informed anyone as per his order . He called best dr there itself as he can't delay further . Soon geet was taken to ICU .
Aditya was first hesitated but thenhe call him
A- prince
M- hmm
A- prince u need to leave
M- i can't now leave her in this position as i'm responsible for her this condition .
A - but prince u need to leave from here soon if media come to now and the chairman want to meet
Cutting him in middle he say him in no nonsense tone
M- I'm not a coward to run from here further i've not hired all of u informing me all this .and handle him himself make sure he won't open his mouth. U know how to handle all that so just leave from here NOW!!!

A- y yes prince
Saying so he leave
Maan sit on nearest chair and closed his eyes in frustration he was supposed to end himself but bcoz of him someone was strulling b/w his life or death.
Prince or not but no one understand better than him the pain of losing ur dearest . Neither he is heart less to let her die .

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Khurana palace Delhi


Vikrant - what the hell adi, what Prince was doing there still. inform him i want him here now!!
and throw that phone in frustration..
Virant khurana shout on phone after coming to know about accident through his sources

Savitiri - what kind of behaviour is this vikrant !! U must not behave like that ...

V- enough maaa i don't want to hear a single word . Only bcoz of u all he is so irresponsible do u know how many croces we face loss?? Just bcoz he at last moment decide to not attend the confrence andl there he was doing just nothing and dealing with a charity case if anyone come to know then??

S- aap chahte kya he unse??
( what do u want from him??)
S-mithali ko gye 1 mahina bhi nhi hua!! Do u even realize how much broken he is?? He hasn't even seen his daughter face till now and u want him to attend that stupid confrence of yours!

V- than what i do mourn over his dead wife???
He need to understand he is a Prince and soon gonna be a King . He need to understand!!
S- aap bhul rhe h, he is the one bcoz of that ur empire is now at this posittion

V- and if it continue like that then he goona be the reason of downfall of khurana empire!!

savitri devi took a long breath and leave from there she know there is no profit to talk with him. He never gonna understand Prince ...

Parvati was a silent witness of all this . She can't raise her voice bcoz she is bound to follow her husband but still her heart comes out for her son & his daughter ...
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8 hrs later
Hospital

Aditya wake up sleeping maan keeping his eyes low he say

A- prince vo sir want u in Delhi .

M- what about that girl ??

A- sir doctors want to meet u regarding this case .
M- hmm , Call then and say i want to meet them and collect details about this girl as soon as possible .

Some minutes later

M- so what u want to tell??
D- prince vo , the girl yesterday that meet with accident was tortured before she meet with an accident . We get many marks on her body that proves that she was tortured since a long time..
Maan was shocked first but remain silant as doctors continued further

D- we done her tests that claims that she was tortured but not abused but
M- but what??
D- we stop her bleeding but we can't say much about her condtion as she get head injuries so we need to wait for 1/2 hrs more till she gain consiousness..
Saying so he left leaving a numb maan behind .


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Thankyou
Plz ignore grametical errors
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations for the new story dear!
Interesting prologue
The person wants to end his pain and agony and decided to commit suicide but before he could take extreme step he knocked a girl down .
Fab CS
Looking forward to the story!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update dear
Love Maan in prince avatar
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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hi thanks 4 updating! superb update! well written! So Maan doesn't to leave Geet alone! his family is worried! why was Maan was gng to kill himself? update soon n do pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start dear
Loved it!!
Keeping his thoughts aside Prince was set out to take the responsibility of the person he knocked down and was concerned abt her.
On other hand his dad seems to avaricious and money grubbing person. He couldn't understand his son's state of mind and was taunting him.
Doctor revealed abt the lady being abused to prince
Thanks for the update !
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice concept, though Maan is a prince and very successful businessman he seems like a kind hearted and emotional person, if he is ready to end his life to get away the pain of losing his wife then his love must be very deep...Geet indirectly savedhim on right time and now Maan is going to save her from abuse.,..eager to know how Geet will enter Maan's daughter's life...

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