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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Superb one
Maan apologize to Geet and he is searching her mom too
hayee my hero is so sweet
Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Nice update dear
Liked it!!
Geet was restless and wanted to geet discharged vowing to money issue.
Maan assures her by his words and tells her that he will help her out.
He wants to know abt geet's past.
Thanks for the update !
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Thanks for the note!
Glad that u r not discontinuing it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 4


M- my mens are searching for ur mother but i need ur help . U need to tell us what happen with u?

She was hesitated but say him all

He was quite and calm , she look toward him trying to judge him but nothing after pausse of some minutes he replied u'll soon get justice .

She looked confused with the way he is behaving but her all confusion vanished as Adi enter in room and adresss maan as prince .

Schok was an understatement for her .
Before he went she heard him saying u are coming with us to delhi till u're not completely fine .

...


To say he is angry it was just an understatement he was fuming ready to blast his fist clenched eyes turning blood red he take deep breath to calm down himselfbut nothing was working .
But he can't do that he promised her that he will never say a word in anger just once he want to break promise but he can't . He love a way too much to forget even a single word said by her . But what he will do now??
Standing at door of palace followed by a no. Of servant and geet who was on wheel chair. He greeted by sight of princess Tara and her parents , who was here for engagment..

and then he feel her

Metali hold his hand causing him to relax his muscules immidatly . Cupping his cheek she come in front of him making him look in her eyes...

Me- Aapko pta h na Aap MAAN H HUMARA??
aur vaise bhi gusse mai aap ache nhi lgte .

Causing him to frown
Resting her hand on his heart she continued ,
Me- u know na that i never want any one to raise even a single fingure on my maan ?
He nodded in yes lost in her eyes
M- what i do now??
Me- how do i know that??
M- ab main kya karu?
Me- y sbse behtar aap jante h, hme barosa h aap par PRINCE she teases

He immidatly trap her in his arms
M- NEVER CALL ME THAT I'M ONLY UR MAAN no prince
Me- sry baba saying that she kissed his cheeks
M- I love u

P- Prince
Parvati said ..
As he was standing since 15 minutes on door with his eyes closed
Vikrant seeing no response from him raise his voice , causing maan to immidatly open his eyes that was surprising very calm too calm to be savitiri devi & vikram to get scared .

Maan came inside and greeted them and say
M- Princess Tara i can't marry u!!
He say with finality in his voice
V- PRINCE
maan raise his hand immidetaly and now all know he don't want anyone to cut him .
All the while geet was a silant suspector of all this feeling scared and odd , and all was too busy with prince too even notice her for she was thankful.


T- but prince
M- i apolozige but i can't marry ANYONE .
Metali was my soul and still remain in my breath . This life & nxt seven life of MAAN SINGH KHURANA belongs to only my wife and if u marry me u will get nothing except the tag of khurana .
T- i'm sorry Prince from our side too . I respect ur feelings . U know even after knowing u love ur side i'm agree to marry u . Even knowing i can't get anything , i would love to lead my life with u . But more than this i admire u for sating truth and i don't want to hurt u . Even if that means losing a great opputunity get as a life partner .
Chalo koi nhi life partner nhi toh kya hume aapki dosti mil skti h??
He nooded his head in yes saying so they shake their hand when she continued
T- ur wife was lucky to have u in her life
M- no i'm lucky to have her in my life .
T-k need to leave now . chale dad ??
Her dad nodded in yes blessing maan they left .
All other members of his family didn't dare to say anything not even vikram not able to understand his way too calm behaviour and it scared him a bit so he preferred to remain silant for now BUT NOT FOR TOO LONG.

Maan then turn and say maids to a guest room for geet and left to his no their room . When savitri devi try to talk to him

S- prince
M- ABHI NHI DADIMAA HUM BAAD MAIN BAAT KARENGE!!!!

Geet was mute suspector all the while like all she was confused too . Agree that she was 19 only but she faces a lot more than anyone can face ,causing her to get mature more than her age . Thinking only that -" is it possible for a man to love his wife upto this extent?" . At the very moment she start admiring him not even realizing where this path may lead her life.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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very interesting story...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Awesome update
Again I love Maan and his wife scene so beautifuli remember PV where Yash love arpita just like this ❤️
Geet in Maan mansion
And Maan and Tara is now friends
Waiting for next part now.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update dear
Loved it!!
Geet opened up abt her past and Maan was determined to get her justice
Geet realised that Maan is actually a prince after Adi addressing Maan.
Loved little scene between Maan and his wife.
Glad that Tara understood maan's words and adores him .
Tara extended her hands for friendship with Maan . Well geet started to adore and respect maan from her heart.
Thanks for updating!
:))
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice update! well written! Geet tells Maan abt her past! Maan will help her! she gets 2 know Mana is a Prince! Maan refuses 2 marry Tara! his dad is angry! Maan cannot get over his wife! Tara seems nice! Geet respects Maan! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Updating ...



But chapter six only after 15 likes and some comments
Edited by Rpian - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 5


As he marched toward his room he heard her crying in the adjacent room . His breath almost stopped and guilt start building up inside him . Do he really desrve her?? Isn't he is responsible for this condition of his daughter?

Isn't he supposed to be dead by now??
But why life always save him with the cost of an another life !

Her crying were incresing continuisly and so was Maan losing his courage .

But never he tried to take a single step toward her . She need to be away from him , so far that even his shadow can't reach her . His pain is already too much to bear but not anymore now he can't tolrate more of it .

He take steps back one , two , three and turn immidatly and leave from palace.

Parvati was silant witness of all this . She immidatly wipe her tears and went in room of manyta , trying to console her . After some time she is succesful to console that little soul but what about her son?? Is there any way to console him?

But there was two more pair of eyes who witness this . Geet and a maid , geet was cofused and maid was silant .

As parvati rush inside that room . Geet ask maid

G- who live in that room?
Maid was hesitant first but then replied

M- that room belongs to 1 month old daughter of prince maan .
G- but why prince left then??
M- mam hume yha s chalna chahiye , U need rest .
That was enough for geet to understand that she is not going to answer further and then she too remain mum knowing she have no rights to interfare in his personal life ..

maid is not supposed to open her mouth . Bcoz she know however calm may be Prince but that doesn't mean it's a good idea to mess with him .


and geet is a different case the man who is ready to confess his mistake even it was not properly his fault . He is ready to take her responsiblity even if he nvr need to do so and even ready to help her in finding her mother , he was not consoling a child?

Some moments before who was ready to do anything for his wife not even ready to console his own daughter? How it could be possible ...


...

Near a deserted lake

Laying his head on metali lap maan say
M- u need to be here with me tonight i can't sleep without u beside me .

Me- hum yhi h maan aap so jaiye .
M- promise me u won't leave tonight??
Me- i promise .

Caressing her cheeks he say

M- mujhse aur bardash nhi hota ...
Mujhe nhi rehna yha ...
Caressing his head that is laying on her lap she say
Me- aap so jaye maan aap thake hue h . U need to rest ...


and she start murmuring nothing but sweet words causing him to close his eyes ...
She know this peace not gonna be for long but her soul is bounded with him how she leave him alone??
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