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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 2


Ignoring call from palace maan remain in hospital . Day turn into night and he went outside lost in his thoughts . When he felt two hands wrapped around his waist and then he heard her voice metali he whisper

Me- maan aap itne preshan kyun h ??
( maan why are u so tensed ??)
Resting her head on his shoulders she ask ..
Englufing her in his arms he say
M- tum jo nhi ho
Me- i'm here always besidr u !!
M- i can't understand anything . I don't want to stay here i want to come to u .
Me- and run from ur responsibilties ??
Breaking hug she rest her hand on his cheeks
Me- do u know why i love u so much??
He nodded his head in no
Me- bcoz i know u are different from everyone .
Hume barosa h aap par aap ab sambhal lenge.

A- prince

Gaining no response aditya first hesitated but then call him in a loud voice
A- P PRINCE

Causing him to open his eyes immidatly he look around but find none except adi

A- prince

Gaining composure he replied
M- yes aditya any improvment?
A- doctors said that she will gain her counsiousness anytime so
M- hmm i'm coming .

Saying so he went inside but then he rember something and say

M- Aditya i want all details about this girl . Doctors said that she was tortured since a long and before losing his consiousness she was murmuring to save her motther . I want all details immidatly and make sure u'll find her mother .
A- yes prince.
...

Palace

V- parvati i want everything ready by tomorrow , make sure everything was perfect .
Parvati nodded her head in yes but was scared of prince reaction she know he can't allow all this .
Savitri who was silant witness of all this finally ask
S- who is coming tomorrow?
V- princess tara with her parents to meet Prince for their engagment.

Schok was an understatement for savitri.
But before she say something vikrant cut her

V- i don't want any argument on this prince is going to marry again . Wheather he wish or not i want a heir for this empire and vaise bhi kb tak vo metali ki maut k shook manate rhe ge !!
..

Sometime later at hospital

Doctor came to meet Maan who was busy in his phone
D- prince

Maan look up in his direction and say

M- hmm

D- that girl is gaining consiousness
Maan got up and went inside her room with doctor to meet her ..

Soon they open the door and saw geet struggling with nurse to let go of her trying to get up but of no use her legs were numb but before she fall caught by nurse on time

M- YEH HO KYA RHA H

Seeing two males at door she immidatly stop and her body went cold gripping the hand of same nurse she say

G- pl plz hum hume maat marro hh h
M- dekho meri baat suno
Nodding her head in no she try to move back but her body not even supporting her an inch to move
Doctor immidetly went to her to check her but she throw pillow and anything that she get to save herself
G- m me mere baba ko m maar di dia pl plz maat maaro hume
saying no other way and see her distracted toward doctor maan reach her and hold her hand to stop her but she start strugling more

M- listen to me once
He say in a high tone causing her to struggle more hard when he listen doctor's voice that she is panicked and thinking that we want to harm her .

Keeping her in a firm grip he rest his hand on her cheek to make her attantion toward him
M- listen ur mom

and she stop hearing her mom name
G- uu unhe ma mmaat m maaro pp
M- suno he say in a calm voice noticing her to get scared with his loud voice

M- we will not harm u

and he feel her getting relaxed but still she was tensed making her look in his eyes he say

M- u meet with an accident by my car . We will not harm u just relax

He was unsure if she was even listing to him or not

But she nodeed her head in yes

Something was their in his eyes his aura is like that . That assure her she was safe but her eyes again fill up and she say maa

M- my informers are searching about ur mom soon she will be with u i promise

G- p p paaka??

He nodded his head in yes causing her to hold him immidatly and cry while sobbing she say
G- p plz unhe bacho lo unhe bhi maar dalenge
Murmuring this she again closed her eyes

Before he inquire anything he fell her weight on his
and doctors
immidatly handle her ...

Sometime later

M- why she was unable to walk ?? I saw her strugling to walk
D- prince she get temorary paralysed . Her nervous are not supporting her legs but it's temporary she can walk again but she need to heal first .
M- till when she get coinsiosness??
D- in few hours it's neccary for her to take rest..
As soon doctors left Aditya came there
A- prince sir want u in palace till morning .
M- but aditya
A- prince plz it's urgent ..
M- k but u'll remain here and will come delhi with her mom .
A- but prince??
M- but her condition and talk . I think her life is in danger and she can't walk also so i'm going to take her palace with me . BUT I WANT U TO SOLVE ALL THIS WITH IN 3 days

Aditya immidatly nodded in yes as he know as despite of maan being polite he is capable to do anything it's not that Maan uses his powers to destroy anyone or to satistfy his ego unlike his dad but still once decided his aura is like that , that no one deny him . He is calm person but once his once glance is enough for anyone to shut his/her mouth ..


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Edited by Rpian - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Superb update
Love Maan n his wife scene.
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Nice update dear
Loved it!!
Maan was concerned for Geet and his thoughts were preoccupied thinking abt his deceased wife.
Loved the little scene between Maan and his wife. Hope his wife turns out to be and guardian angel and pursue him to live his life.
Geet was in trauma after getting concious back but Maan's words gave her solace and assurance for her mother's safety. He handled geet's responsibility to Adi.
On other hand his father is planning for Maan's engagement without maan's acknowledgement.
Thanks for the update!
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Nice one yaa ... Just now read both the parts ... Very interesting ...maan is prince ... He lost his wife and gonna commit suicide ... His family wants him to get married ... Now he is taking geet to his home ... Continue soon ...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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terrific update! well written! Maan imagines his wife! he loves her so much! his family want him 2 get remarried! he is unaware about this! Geet has suffered so much! Maan tries 2 calm her! he is worried abt her safety! he decides 2 take her to the palace! update soon n do pm, thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 3


Hospital


Geet get consiousness after some time she was scared but composed too she cried too knowing that she unable to walk but then doctors make her understand that it's temporary .

Maan soon come to meet her again to apologize when he hear her
G- doctor plz let me go from here
D- i'm sry ms. but u are not completely healed
Trying to stop her tears she lower her head and say
G- hamare pass paise nhi h plz hum yha aur nhi rh skte
before doctors answer her maan say
M- u have no need to worry about that
D- prince
He raise his hand that enogh for doctor to understand that prince want to talk to her alone
D- i'm sorry prince and they leave them alone.

Then maan continued

M- dekho , i'm here to say sorry . I know my sorry is not enough and neither it erase ur pain but still i'm ready for whatever u decide.

Geet was surprised and then raise her head to meet her teary eyes with his chocolate brown once.
First time ever she seen a male who was accepting his mistake . She and her mother were tortured since her father murder but even she never hear her father saying sorry .

When he continued

M- my mens are searching for ur mother but i need ur help . U need to tell us what happen with u?




If the story is not intrested or u find it boring or any other fault plz inform 😊

and sry i won't send pm's as i'm new here and don't know anyone so feel odd
No hard feelings 😊
Edited by Rpian - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey plzzz dont leave this ... Its very interesting ... Do continue ...
😊 geet ask doctor to discharge her as she has no money but maan assure her that he will take care of it ... He even said that he will help to locate his mother ... Maan appears to be sincere person ... Update next part soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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lovely update, well written! Geet has no money n wants 2 be discharged! Maan assures Geet that eh is there 4 her n will help her! its really unfair to the readers that you have left this story incomplete! please continue
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi i've not left it incomplete .
I'm continuing this story but just want some support
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rpian

Hi i've not left it incomplete .
I'm continuing this story but just want some support


thanks for the note!

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