With This Taveez (5) ch 38 and NOTE pg 141 - Page 103

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Posted: 7 years ago
why wrapping the story
it is going on right pace
love the way you elaborates each n every character that come in maaneet's life .
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

THAP THAP for teaser😆

An tavern pehna dya geet ne.. Waiting for Maan to make her mangalsutra😆😳


😃 haan aur phir story khatam 😃
itni jaldi hai na tujhe 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Great update
I was eagerly waiting for sona and tejinders story 😉
So this how they met where she fell in love with him the instance she saw him ❤️
And he used to ignore her but how did they ended up being together.
Sona is gonna have hard time in facing him again and again
Its good that dev has started to play smart lets see if he is finds the real culprit
So sweet maan keeps teasing her and she ends up shying all the time 😳
So finally taveez apni sahi jagah agaya 😉
Always love maan and his parents playful nature and teasings
Geet is really happy to be a part of them
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for the pm dear and sorry for being late 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 38 - Sona was tensed to see teji in front of eyes. She scared that he will take their daughter with him. He came to her with poonam, tara and their father as a doctor. He was not at all deterred or worried for their daughter. He was acting all cool and that angered her more. If she was not at all noticeable how teji fell for her. Would like to read about them too. He almost challenged her to take the responsibility as a doctor and treat poonam alongwith teji. I think she should accept the challenge.

So dev got the all tapes and photos of poonam's marriage to get out any clue to find out who was behind all this.

Loving the progress bet maan & geet. maan could not stop to express his love and touch her freely but she was still shy and not used to such things. But still she agreed to make him happy. So here it was taveez part. She gave him as a token of their love which will always keep him safe.

Raj & kiran were enjoying maan & geet's plight. They were interrogating them like a cop. Geet was scared to catch red handed by maan's parents. But maan was all cool and asked to stop their police-giri and not to scare geet. But b'coss of this geet shoved him out of her room and shut door on his face. Maan was not less in teasing. He called his dad Senior citizen. Lol. Raj & maan share a unique relationship. They were friends more and dad-son less.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Just awesome update👏🤗
Sonakshi so angry in teji n he deserved it... Waiting to know what mu happened between them
Maan asked geet not to leave him... He is scared... Why is he not saying her about pari... Hope they will face the situation together when rasika brings storm in their lives
Coming to Maaneet... Taveez part was so dreamy
Raj n kiran... Pulling Maaneet's legs 😃
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: fict

Interesting part. Sonakshi is obviously not happy with Teji's involvement in the case. Would love to know their story. Dev is smart as there might be a clue to their enemy in those pics. Maan and Geet part was super. He is rightly fearful of losing his love and was reassured by Geet with that Taveez. Best was the end though. I'm a big fan of Raj-Kiran in this story . They are super cute and as Geet said naughty too😆Spying on Maan and Geet and then embarrassing them😆Loved it👏Thanks for pm.


@underlined: 😃 Thank u. I like that I created them for this one 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Have I reached a hat trick in delayed comments yet? Can't even say sorry for it now.
Would you trust me if I said I have been waiting for this part since the beginning? Well, if you recall, I asked about the connected with the title of the story and you said it'll come later on. Now, it fits well.

Teji Sona story seems interesting. It feels like a battle of egos since they first met.. I wonder what equation the mother daughter duo have with each other, especially regarding the father.

I don't quite understand Dev's need to keep his action under wraps. Because he doubts their enemy is tracing them or something?

Maan Geet portion was, as everybody probably agrees, blissful. Maan's uncertainty regarding her and her reassurance were both so well penned. The best part, however, was Raj and Kiran. Oh, I just love this couple and their antics. They have become sort of ideals for me. It is because of the happy couple that Maan is such a joyful person and I just love it.

Great update. Enjoyed it so much and apologies for disappearing time and again. Be assured, though, that I'm still reading and enjoying the story and I won't give up on it even if I don't show up for days on end.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice part..Dev get Poonam & Chandan marriage photo & video.for clue..Sona not knows that Teji come with his patient..Sona realize that love for him still has..Maan not want to leave Geet..Geet gave him her Darli blessing to him..to protect him..She going to stay with..Maan parents are really nice..

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