With This Taveez (5) ch 38 and NOTE pg 141

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#1031

Amazing update
Loved Maaneet's cute moments and their teasing
Loved Kiran and Raj's teasing
They are like friends with Maan
Haa haa Maan became detective
Beautifully written
Loved it 👏

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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#1032

Originally posted by: mayyo
Have I reached a hat trick in delayed comments yet?Can't even say sorry for it now.
Would you trust me if I said I have been waiting for this part since the beginning? Well, if you recall, I asked about the connected with the title of the story and you said it'll come later on. Now, it fits well.

Teji Sona story seems interesting. It feels like a battle of egos since they first met.. I wonder what equation the mother daughter duo have with each other, especially regarding the father.

I don't quite understand Dev's need to keep his action under wraps. Because he doubts their enemy is tracing them or something?

Maan Geet portion was, as everybody probably agrees, blissful. Maan's uncertainty regarding her and her reassurance were both so well penned. The best part, however, was Raj and Kiran. Oh, I just love this couple and their antics. They have become sort of ideals for me. It is because of the happy couple that Maan is such a joyful person and I just love it.

Great update. Enjoyed it so much and apologies for disappearing time and again. Be assured, though, that I'm still reading and enjoying the story and I won't give up on it even if I don't show up for days on end.

no worries Mari
I know you are busy 😃
how was the party?
was she surprised?
hope you had lots of fun too 😃

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Aditi.kesari

@Aditi.kesari

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#1033

Wonderful update

Awesome way of writing . Sorry for the late comments i m away for few days can u please give pw to 38 chapter

For the update i can't describe how good it is

Edited by Aditi.kesari - 8 years ago

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mayyo

@mayyo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#1034

Party was great! Surprising her wasn't possible so she took part in preparations and was excited about the whole of it. Now, she wants to celebrate her birthday all over again. 😃

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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#1035

Originally posted by: mayyo
Party was great! Surprising her wasn't possible so she took part in preparations and was excited about the whole of it. Now, she wants to celebrate her birthday all over again.😃

😆
that is so cute
lots of love to her
May God grant her a long and wonderful life 🤗

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#1036

Lovvely confession. Dreamy one indeed. I was hoping n praying that this confession would end well. Glad that it happened so. Raj n kiran beimg soo positive about maaneets relation is atreat to watch.

Edited by honeygrape - 8 years ago

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1037

such a superb part oh maaneet romace ow ginally maan parentss gt to lnow both r dating
cute geet hriw maan out if the room n raj also in same positin n maan poor embraced infront of his dad
nice part n thnks fr pw di