MG STORY BAWRA MAN PART 25,26,27- PAGE 34,35 25MAY2020 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Nice update dear
Loved it!!
Maan was possessive for his parents and dadima. He was jealous of geet seeing his family pampering her. Maan's dad made him to understand the situation whilst the ladies were admiring Geet
Is Geet adopted daughter of Mohi n Rano!? Is this the reason behind Devki's hostile behaviour towards Geet!? Devki wants brij to stay away from geet and her presence.
Geet was scared of maan after their little act yesterday but glad that after listening to elders Maan included Geet to play with him and brij and offered hands for friendship. The trio enjoyed their time with each other.
Thanks for the pm dear !
Will be waiting for the next update
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Edited by anu5 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Beautiful story
Young maan and geet are living together
Wondering how there love story will start
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
lovely update anjali and dadi absolutely adored geet they were amazed how geet looked neither like her parents yet sghe was sweet angel sent in their life maan jealous of geet but dadi made him understand that she is small and was scred devki dosent really likes geet and wanted away from brij but geet is really attached to brij and scared of maan which is so cute maan ttired to make friends with geet as brij wont leave her alone maan and brij both enjoyed with each other and even geet had fun i think geet is adopted thats why devki dosent likes her and brij is so protective for geet maan thisnk geet as a snowwhite but i think his parents already decided who will be geets prince
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
nice pt
maan is only son of amar
mohi and his family came to
live in OH children loved to play
maan daadi talk was cute about geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 4
Days were passing . Brij and Maan friendship was getting stronger day by day. Both Maan and Brij were in 10th standard. Both of them decided though they are in different school. But they will take admission in same junior college.
Geet was in 6 th standard .Day by day she sensed Devki's behaviour towards her was not same like she is with Brij. She understand when Brij and Maan are together then she dont want her to be with them. Mohinder always controlled situation regarding Geet when it happened before him. Rano tried to handle situations nicely in absense of Mohinder. Between all this one thing was good she was pampered by Anjali , Savitri and Amar. And obviously Maan also liked her. Though they sometime feel Devki's cold behaviour but brushed off thoughts thinking may be she is from Hoshiarpur so this is her thinking about Geet.
On sunday
Maan in his thoughts" Aaj kal snowwhite mujhse baat hi nahi karti. Na hi Brij ke piche aati hai waise to veerji veerji karti rehti hain."
Brij came to meet maan
Brij: Good morning Maan.
Maan: Good morning Brij. Geet nahi aayi tumhare sath waise to tumhare aage piche ghumti rehti hai.
Brij: Meri gudiya ke bare me aisa mat bolo.
Maan: Sorry.
Brij: Wo Gudiya Maa papaji ke sath niche hai. Waise Aaj hame maths ki padhai karni hai.
Maan: Haa.par thodi der me , chalo neeche chalte hai
Brij : Ok
In Hall,
Rano, Mohinder greeted Savitri, Amar and Anjali.
Mohinder: Wo hum bahar ja rahe hai. Tab tak Brij
Just then Brij and Maan came.
Rano: Beta hum Geet ke sath bahar jaa rahe hain. Kuchh ghanto me aa jayenge.
Amar: Ye bhi kehne ki baat hai kya. Dono bache hai sath me.
Maan was watching Geet
Maan: Uncle aunty hum bhi chalte hain.
Anjali: Maan...
Brij: Chalo hame maths padhna hai kal test hain.
Mohinder Rano and Geet tooleft.
Amar: Kitni pyari hai Geet
Anjali:Kash Geet ki tarah meri bhi beti hoti.
Savitri: To kya hua anjali bete Geet hai na
Anjal: Haa maa isliye to khush rehti hoon.
After returning Rano took Geet with her to room
Devki: Aa gaye. Samajhte kyun nahi ho Mohinder
Mohinder: Mujhe kuch nahi sochna. Waise bhi ab hum Delhi main hain mujhe kuch nahi sochna.
After having lunch Geet slept. Mohinder and Rano in their room started discussion.
Rano: Aisa kab tak chalega. Geet mujhse sawal puchti rehti hai, "Dadi mujhse pyar kyun nahi karti main jaise taise sambhal leti hun hamari bachi ko. Aur Brij ko jab
pata chalega to kya hoga ji .
Mohinder: Brij umar ke hisab se boht samajhdar hain. Sahi waqt aane par hum use bata denge. Maa ki chhodo wo nahi samajh payegi. Hum dono ka pyar Geet ke liye kafi hai
Rano: Aur Brij ka bhi. Wo sabse acha bhai hai.
Rano and Mohinder smiled.
Mohinder: Waise Brij lauta nahi.
Rano: Maan ke sath hai. Sham se pehle to nahi lautega.
Mohinder: Maan bhi boht samjhdar bacha hai.
Rano: Jis ghar ke sanskar itne ache hai. To wo to acha hoga na. Chaliye ji aap thodi der aaram kar lijiye.
Mohinder: Haa
As we say Time flies so fast.
Maan and Brij did the way they decided. Not only junior college but also they took admission in same college too. Maan and Brij took admission for architecture.
Geet was busy with her studies. And as always tried to avoid when both Brij and Maan were together
In college ,
Girls always tried to hit on Maan, Brij was always followed by one girl. But Brij always avoided her.
Maan: Kya yar Brij , Sakshi tumhe pasand karti hain. Kam se kam friendship to karlo. Bechari pichle tin sal se tere piche ghum rahi hai. Itne handsome ho.
Brij: Ye main tere bare me bhi bol sakta hun. Itni sari ladkiyan MSK ke piche pagal hai. Tu to kisi ko bhav nahi deta.
Maan: Wo mujhe abhi career par concentrate karna hai. Warna papa ka to tujhe pata hai na.
Brij: Main bhi yahi keh sakta hun. Mujhe bhi career par concentrate karna hai. Aur ek baat she is Sakshi Singhania. Uske papa boht bade businessman hai. Just like you eklauti waris hai. Waise she is perfect match for you. Mujhe meri haisiyat ke hisab se rehna hai.
Maan was taken aback with his comment.
Maan: No. Wo bas meri dost hain. Papa aur uske papa friends hain.
Brij: Haa haa pata hai.
Maan in his thoughts " Mujhe to bas meri snow white meri Geet hi achi lagti hai. "
Brij: Kaha kho gaya.
Maan: Kuch nahi agla sal hamara last year hai na.
Brij: Wow. Very nice
Maan: Isme very nice?
Brij: Meri Gudiya bhi agle sal yahi admission legi. I must say Maan. My gudiya is very talented.Wo padhai puri kar legi. Bas aur ek sapna hai uske liye
While drinking water, Maan asked
Maan: Aur kya sapne hai tere Geet ke liye? Waise bhi to tu sare sapne uske liye dekhta hai.
To himself" pata nahi mere liye kuch chhodega ki nahi jo main Geet ke liye karu".
Brij: Kya badbada raha hai
Maan: Kuch nahi kya sapna hai tera Geet ke liye?
Brij: Yahi Ek achhe ladke ke sath, ek achhe se ghar me Geet ki shadi karwakar use vida karna hai.
Maan who was drinking water coughed it.
Brij: Dheere maan. Aram se piyo.
Maan: Ek sawal puchu.
Brij: Puch naa
Maan: Ek achha ladka aur ek acha ghar ki defination kya hai tere liye jo tuze teri gudiya ke liye chahiye?
Brij: chal canteen main baithte hai.
Maan: Haa chal.
Brij: Haa to mujhe Gudiya ke liye aisa ladka chahiye jo use boht pyar kare.
Maan to himself "Main bhi karta hun"
Brij: Use khush rakhe
Maan to himself" Hamesha khush rakhunga"
Brij: Ek achi si job karta ho . Aur khud ka ghar ho bhale hi chhota kyu na ho. In short I want a guy from good middle class family.
Maan: Tumhara kehne ka matlab main acha nahi hun. Bas middle class family ke ladke ache hote hain.
Brij: Are gussa kyun ho rahe ho. Main tumhe nahi bol raha. You are very nice.
Maan: Wo to main hun
Brij: Chalo ghar chalte hain.
Maan left with Brij .
Part 5 pg 6
Edited by priyal12 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks 4 da pm! beautiful update! well written! Brij n Maan best friends! Geet now a bit older n she understands Devki doesn;t like her and near Brij! Khuranas pamper Geet! Love Geet n Brij's bond! Feeling 4 Geet! Maan has fallen 4 Geet! Maan n Brij in college! Brij talks 2 Maan abt the dreams he has 4 Geet incl her marriage! Maan upset when Brij says he wants a middle class guy 4 her! hope he confesses soon! eagerly awaiting next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow ... Awesome update ... Maan is in love with his snow white ... He want to spend more time with geet but because of dadi geet is avoiding brij and maan ... Wat is the reason behind the coldness of dadi towards geet ??? poor geet... Haha brij ka explaination is the best ... He wants his geet to marry a middle class boy ... He is differentiating between high class and middle class ... He is even not considering the feelings of sakshi ... Maan is trying to make him understand ... 😳 here hamara maan wants to marry his snow white 😃 update soon dear ... Waiting for next .. Want to know the pov of geet abt maan ... Does she feels the same way as maan feels for her ??? I think she is very much small to think abt all these things ... Update soon yaar
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update... Maan n brij together from childhood... Maan loves geet but didnt confessed with anyone.. its cute but didn't have any scene of them together... Why her ddi treated her like this... Where her parents took her alone...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update finally they have grown up maan and brij friendship is more strong now but maan wanted to spend his time with geet too who always avoids him he has fallen for his snow-white he loves how his family adores geet and Pampers her brij definition that he wants middle class guy for geet upsets maan making brij confused I have a feeling geet isn't mohindar real daughter that's why devki doesn't likes geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update dear
Liked it!!
Maan and brij are grown up and shares strong friendly bond . Maan wants to spend time with Geet as well and has fallen for his snow white. with time Geet understands that Devki doesn't like her and dislikes her spending time with Brij and Maan. Khurana s love and pampers geet to the core. Rano and Mohinder are hidding something abt geet . Brij shares his thoughts and dream abt geet's future with Maan. Brij say he wants middle class boy for Geet which angers and upsets Maan. Hope Maan confesses his feelings for Geet .
Thanks for the pm !
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