MG STORY BAWRA MAN PART 25,26,27- PAGE 34,35 25MAY2020 - Page 2

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#11
congrats for new story
very interesting
so maan n geet will be together from childhood
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Wonderful beginning 👏
Handa's moving to outhouse of KM👍🏼
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Nice character sketch ...and awesome part dear ...
Waiting for next
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congratulation for new story
waiting fro cute love story too

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story name and starting both are good
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PART 2
Days were passing. Mohinder handled office work very well. Finally day arrived when Mohinder have to go to Hoshiarpur to come back to Delhi with family. Mohinder already told Rano to do all packing to avoid mess. Mohinder asked for leave to Amar.
Mohinder arrived at Handa House. Kids were happy as they saw Mohinder. Geet and Brij ran to him and hugged him.
Devki: Arre safar se aaya hai. Jara aram se baithne to do.
Mohinder: Nahi Maa rehne dijiye itne dino bad dekh raha hun aankhe taras gayi thi inhe dekhne ke liye
Rano brought water for him.
Rano: Aapki nayi naukri kaisi hai koi pareshani to nahi hogi naa ji ?
Devki: Chup kar aisi bate na kar sab thik hoga.
Mohinder: Aap dono bhi chinta na karo. Boht acha office hain aur ghar bhi.
Brij: Papa ji ghar bada hai kya is ghar se bhi.
Mohinder: Haa bada hai boht jyada nahi par hai. Tumhe achha lagega.
Brij: Par gudiya ko achha nahi laga na to hum waha nahi rahenge.
Rano: Jao dono andar. Papa ko aram karne do.
Devki: Hamesha gudiya gudiya ka jap chalta rehta hai, kya jadoo kar rakha hai. Bas gudiya ye gudiya wo .
Mohinder: vinti hai aapse aap mat shuru ho jao. 6 sal ki bachi hai. Masoom hai. Kuch mat kahiye. Aur aap ko ek baat bata du. Hum jaha rehne wale hai wo mere sahab ka hi ghar hai. To dhyan rakhiye. Main aram karna chahunga ab.
Devki: Keh deti hun Rano ek din ye jo masoom si bachi hai na lekar dubegi sabko.
Rano kept quite. Went to talk with Mohinder.
Mohinder: Puri tayyari kar li na ham kal hi nikal rahe hai. Tum maa ki bato ki chinta mat karo. Wo to aisi hi hain
Rano: Nahi jee. Mujhe maa ji ki bato ka bura nahi laga. Bas Brij ke samne agar unhone ne Geet ko kuch bol diya. To kahi ulta jawab na de de.
Mohinder: Aisa kuch nahi hoga Brij boht samjhdar hai bas Geet ko lekar...waise acha hi hai na hamre alawa bhi use koi itna pyar karta hai. Ye ladki hai na Rano nasib lekar aayi hai. Jisse bhi milti hai rishta jod leti hai.
Rano: Haa. Aap kuch der me niche aa jana main khana laga deti hun.
All of them gathered for dinner. Rano served food to them. All started eating.
Brij: Gudiya tum kha kyun nahi rahi?
Geet: Veer ji ye garam hai.
Rano made her eat food.
Devki was about to say something but kept quite because of Mohinder.
All of them finished their dinner. Rano took kids to room and made them sleep.
Next day,
They started their journey to Delhi. As they reached to KM. Devki asked.
Devki: Beta ji pata to sahi hai na.
Rano: Haa ji kahi kuch galat to nahi hua na.
Geet: Veerji ye to boht bada hai.
Brij: Haa
Mohinder: Sab sahi hai.
Guard allowed them in. Mohinder took them to outhouse. Mohinder told kids to keep quite and devki to take rest.
Mohinder discussed with Rano about things she need .
Mohinder: Main Ramesh ko bula leta hun wo madat kar dega.
Geet: Maa mujhe bahar jana hai. Yaha acha nahi lag raha.
Rano : Geet abhi thodi der hi hui hai tumhe acha lagega.
Brij: Main Gudiya ko bahar le jata hun.
Devki: Nahi ghar me raho. Koi jarurat nahi. Waise bhi itni badi haweli ke pas rehna padega wo bhi ajib lag raha hai.
Rano never talked much infront of Devki.
Rano: Brij Geet Chalo mere sath Dadi ko aram karne do.
Rano gave fruits to both. Just then Ramesh came with things Mohinder asked him. To kids surprise Pinki was also with him.
Ramesh took Devki's blessing. And greeted Rano
Ramesh: Sach me tumhe achi jagah mil gayi rehne ke liye.
Mohinder: Sab tumhari wajah se . Tumne boht madad ki hamari.
Ramesh: Main chalta hun. Thoda jaldi me hun. Chalo pinki .
They left. Mohinder told Rano.
Mohinder: Main sir se milkar aata hun. Kal se office jana hai.
Rano: Jee. Main kya keh rahi hun dekho na bache kitne udas lag rahe hai.
Mohinder: Unko bhi sambhal lunga. Pehle Sir se milkar aa jau.
Mohinder went to KM. But servant told no one is at home.
Servant: Sir aaj Sunday hai. Amar sir sabke sath bahar gaye hai sham ko lautenge.
Mohinder: Sir se bol dijiye ga ki main aa gaya hun.
Servant: Aap ko koi cheej ki jarurat ho to bata dena.
Mohinder: Thank you.
Mohinder came home.
Brij: Papa ji mujhe yaha bor ho raha hai.
Mohinder: Chalo ghoom ke aate hai. Rano main bacho ko garden me le ja raha hun.
Rano: Jee. Geet Brij papa ko tang mat karna.
Devki: Main bhi aati hun thoda tahal lungi bagiche me.
Rano got busy with her work. Four of them come to garden.
Devki and Mohinder sat on bench. Brij and Geet started running. Geet tried to catch Brij.
Devki: Mohinder tere malik ne itna bada ghar hame de diya rehne ke liye . Ajib nahi lagta.
Mohinder: Lagta hai na maa. Par main mana bhi nahi kar paya. Sir hai hi itne ache. Aap to kehti hai na aap kisi bhi insan ko ek najar me jan lete ho. Jab aap miloge to aap hi batana main sahi hun ya galat.
Devki: Thik hai beta. Delhi me hame itna kuch mila yahi boht hai.
Geet and Brij were still running.
Mohinder : Main abhi aaya shayad rano ko kuch kam ho. Main abhi aaya 5 min me. Please Geet ko kuch bhi bolna mat.
Devki: Nahi bolungi.
Mohinder went to outhouse. He saw everything arranged.
Mohinder: Tum ghar ka kam kitne ache se sambhalti ho.
Rano: Sab ho gaya. Bas ye chije rakh ni hai
Mohinder : Thik hai ye nipta lete hai phir tum bhi chalo bahar. Bache abhi khush lag rahe hai.
Mohinder started helping Rano.
In garden
Geet: Maine aap ko pakad liya abhi aap mujhe pakdo .
Devki: Dheere khelo lag jayegi.
Geet was naughty . She moved out of garden .Devki saw them going out of garden she too started walking behind both.
Devki: He babaji ye ladki na.
She started running Brij was running behind her and just then Geet collided with Maan and fell on ground ,who was with Amar Anjali and dadi.
Brij: Gudiya utho. Papa ne bola tha na garden me khelna hai.
Maan saw her.
Maan: Aise koi daudta hai kya. Ye koi race track hai kya?
Geet hugged Brij listening Maan's scolding. Brij hold her
Mohinder Rano saw them. Went there in hurry. Devki said.
Devki: Kaha tha dheere.( kind of angry on Geet)
Listening to Devki Geet clinged more to Brij.
Mohinder saw situation. And intervened
Mohinder: Maan beta aap ko lagi to nahi naa.
Amar: Are nahi
Brij: Lagi to Gudiya ko hai phir bhi ulta gudiya ko daant raha hai ye ladka.
Mohinder: Say sorry Brij.
Brij: Sorry.
Amar: you too say sorry.
Anjali: Haa beta dekho wo chhoti hai na galti ho gayi.
Maan: Am sorry.
Brij: Mujhe nahi Gudiya ko sorry bolo.
Maan: Sorry Gudiya.
Geet listened and went near Rano.
Brij : Ise sirf main Gudiya bolta hun. Meri gudiya ka naam Geet hain.
Brij: Now say Sorry Geet.
Mohinder: Boht hua brij chup raho
Three of them were amazed seeing Brij's behaviour.
Devki: Jee maaf karna bacha hai na
Savitri: Nahi hame to hairani hai itna pyar hai Dono main.
Mohinder introduced Rano and Devki to them. Anjali said Maan to greet Devki and Rano. Devki gave blessing to Maan.
Anjali : Ek dusre se dosti karo ab.
Mohinder: Brij
They shake hands with each other.
Amar: Geet beta idhar aao.
Rano said her to go. Amar lifted her in his arms
Amar: Baby aap ka naam kya hai?
Geet: Geet mohinder Handa.
Listening only her voice savitri and anjali delighted. Anjali took her from Amar.
Anjali: Aapko pata hai aap pariyon jaisi dikhti ho. Beautiful chhoti pari.
Geet only smiled. Maan thought "mom, dad, dadi maa mujhe ignore kar rahe hai."
Just then Anjali saw half moon shaped pendant with urdu calligraphy in black thread tied around her neck.
Anjali: Dekhiye Maa ye kitna sundar hai ? Hai na?
Savitri : Haa Rano ye bohot sundar hai.
Before they could say more Rano said.
Rano: Wo dargah gaye the tab pehnaya tha .
Savitri : Chalo maan ye chocolate do and be friend with her.
Maan gave her chocolate and they shake hand with each other .
Devki: Khade khade baate ho gayi aur waqt ka pata bhi nahi chala.
Savitri: Maan bete abhi vacation hai na to tum Brij ko invite nahi karoge to play with you.
Maan: Kal se main football khelunga . Tum kheloge?
Brij smiled to him and said yes.
Amar: Mohinder jao sab aaram kar lo hum kal milenge office me. Waise kam jyada hai kal ok
Mohinder: Jee Sir. And gave smile.
They moved to their respective places.
While walking Devki said.
Devki: Bhale log hain.
PART3
Edited by priyal12 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
thanks 4 da pm n superb update! wonderfully written! I dnt like Devki! happy Mohinder told her to keep quiet! Brij n Geet share a wonderful bond! Geet is so cute! they all arrive in Delhi! Geet collides into Maan n he is angry! he shouts Geet! she is scared! Brij upset! Mohinder n Amar intervene! Dadi n Anjali like Geet! Maan feels ignored! Brij n Maan nw friends! hope Geet n Maan become friends as well!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Nice storyline dear !
Lovely character sketch
Loved the updates
@ Chapter 1
Mohinder was jobless due to sudden closure of his company and decided to move for Delhi in search of job and livelihood. Pinky's dad helped mohi in his difficult times and assisted him to find Job.
Amar Khurana liked mohi's honesty and appointed him to work in KC . Amar was impressed with mohi's work and dedication. He offered Mohi a place to stay and his family treated him with respect.

@chapter 2
Loved brij and geet's bond. Handas shifted to Delhi.
Geet bumped with Maan and he was angry on Geet for her act. Anjali and dadi adores geet lookslike Anjali yearns for girl child. Devki seems to be too strict towards Geet.

Thanks for the update!
:))
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cute update mohinder told abt his job and the place they will be living mohindar mom dosent really like geet maybe she thinks her as a burden but maohindar and brij always supports geet maybe thats why she is always so quite they finally shift to khuaran outhoyuse devki feels weird that they have to live in such a big place brij and geet were [playing when geet bums into maan he scolds her maans family adores geet who is looking likw an angel brij love for geetsurprises all maan and brij becomes friends lets see how good friends they become
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PART 3
In KM
Maan sat quitely on Sofa .
Anjali: Maan beta
Amar: Beta kya hua aap chup kyun ho?
Savitri: Bolo na
Maan spoke finally.
Maan: Dad Aap ne Geet ko kyun uthaya? Aur mom apne bhi?
Anjali laughed.
Anjali: Achha ye baat hai.
Amar: Ek bat batao humne Brij ko uthaya ?nahi na.
Anjali: Beta Geet bohot chhoti hai. 6 sal ki hai na
Amar: Aur aap ne dekha na wo kitna dar gayi thi
Maan nodded.
Savitri: Now happy.
Maan: Haa dadi maa.
Savitri: Jao room me change kar lo.
Anjali : Ye Maan bhi na kabhi kabhi.
Amar: Phir bhi samajhdar hai.
Anjali: Amar Geet kitni beautiful hai. Like a doll . Hairani ki baat hai wo naa hi Rano ki tarah dikhti hai naa hi mohinder bhai sahab ki tarah.
Savitri: Haa aur gale me jo chand pehna tha na usse to aur bhi achhi mano chand ka tukda ho.
Amar: Ye bat to sahi hai. Naa hi maa jaisi na hi pita jaisi dikhti hai. Mohinder aur uski patni hai hi itne ache isliye bhagwan ne unke yaha pari bhej di. Mohinder ke aankho ki sachayi dekhkar hi maine use outhouse de diya rehne ke liye.
Savitri: Aur ye sahi faisla tha.
Anjali: Aur agar unhone ye jagah badlni chahi to , nahi mujhe ye padosi nahi khone.
Savitri: Aisa kuch nahi hoga.
Servant: Khana laga diya hai .
In outhouse,
Rano served them.
Mohinder: Is tarah tej nahi daudte Geet.
Geet : Sorry papa
Brij: Main dhyan rakhunga papa ji.
Kids finished dinner went to room
Devki thought" Shayad ye naye dost Maan ke sath khelega to Geet se dhyan to hatega"
Mohinder: Kya soch rahe ho maa?
Devki: Ye jo Geet ke gale me pehnaya hai na use utar kyun nahi dete.
Mohinder: Maa mujhe neend aa rahi hai. Rano dekh lo bache so gaye ya nahi
Rano: Jee .
Rano went to their room and saw sleeping peacefully prayed " Babaji mere bacho ko khush rakhna. Mujhe Brij se jyada Geet ki chinta hai" and left from there.
Next morning
In KM
Anjali: Maa hum Geet ko ghar me bula lete hai aaj. Mujhe use milne ka man kar raha hai.
Savitri smiled
Savitri: Kyun nahi hum chandu se keh denge
Anjali: Main Maan ko utha deti hun tab tak.
Rano prepared Breakfast Mohinder had it.
Mohinder: Bache uthe nahi.
Rano: Gehri neend me so rahe hai. Kuch der bad uthaungi.
Mohinder left for office.
Rano: Maa ji aap bhi nashta kar lo.
Devki: Haa thodi der me kar lungi.
Rano went to Kids room.
Rano: Brij utho Geet beta utho .
Both wake up lazily. Rano made them ready. Geet wore simple sky blue colour frock. Looking like small angel. Rano brought both of them to hall.
Rano was about to serve breakfast. Just then Chandu come.
Chandu: Anjali mam ne Geet baby Aur Brij ko bulaya hai .
Rano saw Devki. Devki thought" acha hai kam se kam Brij maan ke sath khelega "nodded yes looking to Rano.
Chandu: Chalo beta
Chandu took both with him to mansion. Brij and Geet entered.
Geet started looking here and there.
Chandu: Chalo bacho breakfast karne ke liye.
Savitri: Are bacho aao baitho nashta karo.
Geet saw Maan and clinged to Brij. Anjali and savitri smiled
Anjali: Brij aap baitho. Geet beta idhar aao mere pas .
Brij and maan started eating. Brij smiled looking Geet eating from Anjali's hand
Maan took Brij to his room. Started talking.
Maan: sham ko football khelna hai. Bhoolna mat.
Brij: Haa.
Anjali and dadi were too much involved with Geet and her sweet talk.
Geet: Veer ji kaha hai? Veer ji veer ji
Brij: Gudiya mujhe bula rahi hai.
Brij ran out and went to Geet .Maan too followed him.
Brij: Kya hua Gudiya?
Geet held his hand
Geet: Ghar chalo ghar chalo.
Brij: Maan hum sham ko sath me khelenge. Main jaa raha hun.
Maan: Chala gaya. Ab main kya karu. Firse bor ho jaunga.
Savitri: Sham ko khelne wale ho na
Maan: Haa dadi maa. Par fir Geet aa jayegi wo chala jayega
Anjali: To tum use sath le lo khelne ke liye. Wo tum se darti hain.
Savitri: Wo chhoti hain. Aap aur Brij sath me kheloge to use akela lagega na
Maan: Haa dadi maa.
In evening,
Brij come with Geet. Geet tried to hide behind Brij
Brij: Are gudiya daro mat.
Maan: Ab hum bhi to friends hai na
Geet nodded.
Three of them started playing. It was late Rano called Brij and Geet in. Maan too went to mansion.
Maan: Dadi maa aaj boht maja aaya.
Anjali: Aap ne geet se achhe se baat ki na ?
Maan: Haa mom
Anjali: Jao clean yourself aur khana khane aa jao. Papa thodi der me aate hi honge.
In outhouse
Brij: Dadi aaj boht maja aaya.
Dadi: Are wah
Geet : Haa dadi maa
But Devki didnt respond.
Mohinder saw it luckily he just arrived and listened convo.
Mohinder: Jara hame bhi batao kitna maja aaya.
Geet ran to him.Brij and Geet started their talk that how they spent their day.
They had dinner.
In KM
Maan: Hello papa
Amar: Hello beta. Kaisa raha din aap sabka?
While having dinner they discussed.
Maan went to his room after dinner. After sometime Savitri came with glass of milk.
Savitri: Aaj aap ne boht enjoy kiya na?
Maan: Haa Brij ke sath mujhe boht maja aaya
Savitri: Aapne Geet ko daraya to nahi.
Maan: Maine use nahi daraya. Wo hi darti thi. Par aaj maine baat ki maine bola ki hum friends hai.
Savitri: Good boy. Geet bhi good girl hain.
Maan: Dadi maa
Savitri: Haa
Maan: Aap ne mujhe wo story padhkar sunayi thi na snowwhite. Mujhe lagta hai geet snowwhite jaisi hai. Nahi phir prince kaun hoga? Nahi wo snow white nahi hai.
Savitri: Haa wo snow white jaisi sundar hai. Prince tab aaya na story me jab snow white badi ho gayi. Geet abhi chhoti snow white hai.
Maan didnt bothered much.
Maan: Hmmm, Dijiye
He took glass and finished it.
Maan: Mujhe neend aa rahi hai. Good night dadi.
Savitri: Good night beta.
PART4 PG5



Edited by priyal12 - 8 years ago
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thanks 4 da pm n marvelous update, well written! Maan j of Geet! Anjali comments that Geet doesn't look like Rano or Mohinder! Devki hates Geet! she wants 2 keep Brij away from Geet! Geet n Brij go 2 KM! Geet scared of Maan! Dadi n Anjali are engrossed with Geet! Geet calls 4 Brij! Anjali suggests Maan play with Geet as well! the kids play soccer! Maan n dadi talk abt snow white and Geet! I think Geet is not Rano and Mohinder's daughter! update soon

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