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PART6

After some days, , Geet and Pinki started going to college. Maan was happy he will get chance to see her daily. Some bad boys tried to rag Geet and Pinki.

First boy: Hello freshers?Naam?

Pinki: Haa. Pinki

Second boy: Tumhe alag se puchna padega?

Geet: Geet

First boy: oho Geet. Sangeet. Sing a song.

Geet and pinki feeling scared.

Pinki: Hame jaane do please.

Second: Aise kaise abhi to fun start hua hai?

Geet: Please ham late ho jayenge

He started to go near her and touch her. He was about to touch her

Maan who just arrived saw Geet and Pinki talking and saw guy trying to touch her. Maan got hold on his hand

Maan: Ye kya chal raha hai

First boy: Tumse matlab jaanta hun you are so cool guy MSK . but dont interfere.

Maan hold his collar,

Maan: Interfere to main karunga. Tumhe kisi bhi ladki ko is tarah pareshan karne ka haq nahi hai. Ye college hai tumhari private property nahi tum jo chahe karo.

Second boy: Apna bhashan band karo. Freshers hai simple rag hai.

Maan: Just shut up. Simple rag hai. Ye to jan lo kis ki rag kar rahe ho. Naam pucha na tumhe ise said pointing toward geet)

Batao iska naam

Boy scared.

First boy: Geet sangeet whatever

Maan: Pura naam main bolunga. Geet Handa naam hai iska. Agar Brij ko pata chala na tumne uski behen ko hat lagane ki koshish ki hai. Haat tod dega. Mera bhi yahi man kar raha hai. Kher abhi college start hua hai main koi tamasha nahi chahta isliye warning de kar chod raha hun. Now leave.

Maan left his collar. They both went

Pinki: Thank you .

Maan: Chalo main tum dono ko class tak chhod deta hun.

Geet: Nahi hum chale jayenge.

Geet pulled Pinki and left in hurry.

While watching toward her when she was going Maan in his mind" Kaise ehsaas dilau Geet that I love you so much. Dil aur dimag par is kadar chha gayi ho ki bas tum hi najar aati ho"

Just then Brij came.

Brij: Kya dekh rahe ho.

Maan: Chalo late ho jayenge class ke liye.

In classroom

Geet: Ye sab aise kyun shor kar rahe hai

Girl: Sir nahi aaye . So masti time. Sab baate kar rahe hai.

Pinki: Acha hai. Main thoda kha leti hun.

Geet: Tu aur tera khana

Pinki: Ek baat bolu.

Geet: Jaise main mana karungi to chup rehne wali hai tu.

Pinki: Maan is so handsome. Kya body hain. Haaye dhak dhak. Tujhe pata hain mujhe pata chala hain sab use DD kehte hain

Girl: Talking about Maan. Wo kitna handsome hai. Kash wo mujhe apni girlfriend bana le. Ek baar bol de main to aise hi lattu hun.

She went someone called her.

Pinki: Ye gayi. Tu bata Maan tujhe kaisa lagta hai.

Geet: Ache hai.

Pinki : Sirf ache hain. Aur Geet ye kya tum maan ko wo , aap aise kyun bolti ho.

Geet: Tu janti hai pinki. Wo Amar uncle ke bete hai. Ab ise aage mujhe kuch nahi kehna.

Pinki: Tujhe use dekh kar kuch kuch hota nahi .

Geet: Nahi hota apni bakwas band kar. Mere liye Maan bas Brij veer ji ke dost hain. Now close topic.

Breaktime

In canteen.

Pinki and Geet were sitting. As always pinki eating and Geet was waiting to finish.

Brij and Maan too arrived.

Brij: Gudiya.

Geet: Veer ji

Brij: Tu bhi kuch kha le.

Pinki: Main bhi yahi bol rahi hun. Sunti hi nahi.

Geet: Tu kha tujhe maine mana kiya kya.

Brij: Mujhe pata hai tujhe kya khana hai. I am sorry gudiya maine tujhe daant diya na subah subah. Ye le.

Geet: Golgappe. Thank you Veer ji.

Maan smiled seeing her joy.

Geet started eating. She coughed while eating.

Brij : Are Gudiya main pani lata hun.

Brij went

Maan saw one guy going with glass of water. He snatched it and made her drink.

Maan: Drink it.Tumhe theek lag raha haina?

Brij saw it when he came back with water ,Maan saw Brij .

Maan: Wo Brij use jyada khasi aa rahi thi to maine...

Brij: Thank you yar. Tujhe pata hai mujhse Gudiya ki pareshani dekhi nahi jaati

Pinki: Chal Geet class chalte hai. Bye

Brij: Bye pinki. Lets go Maan

Maan to himself" Jab Brij best friend hain to dar nahi lagta but jab Geet ka bhai hain to dar lagta hain kya hoga mera"

Brij: Chal maan.

Maan: Haa chal

Seniors were going to arrange freshers party.

Maan: Brij you know har sal ki tarah is sal bhi party rocking honi chahiye.

Brij: Haa Maan hum dono koi kaam kare aur success na mile aisa ho nahi sakta.

Sakshi: Hello Mr. Handa. I am also part of your team. Main sahi keh rahi hu na maan. Mere ideas ke siva arrangements nahi hoti.

Brij: Oh really ?

Sakshi was about to reply then see Geet and pinki.

Sakshi: Hey Geet come here.

Geet and pinki walk toward them

Geet: Ha di .

Sakshi: Geet pinki tumhe pata hai na freshers hai.

Pinki: Haa main to boht excited hun.

Brij: Ye bolne ke liye tumne gudiya ko bulaya she know about party

Sakshi: Geet tumhare bhai ko bolo kam gussa kiya kare.

Maan: Shut up you both. In dono ko tumne ladai dekhne ke liye bulaya tha.

Sakshi: Maine ye kehne ke liye bulaya tha dress theme ko lekar tumhe koi problem ho to mujhe bolo.Kya hai na Brij kuch ulta seedha hua to tum mujhe hi bologe.

Brij: Haa tumhari harkate hoti hi aisi hai.

Geet: Nahi di mujhe koi problem nahi hai.

Sakshi: Dont worry Main tum dono ki help karungi. Cause main janti hun, Geet you are really Gudiya. Beautiful Doll.

Brij: Pehli baar samajhdari wali baat ki hai. My Gudiya is very beautiful.

Pinki: Aur main?

Brij: You are cute teddy Pinki dear.

Pinki: I know am golu molu as teddy.

All smiled.

Day before fresher's party.

Brij: Ye Sakshi kaha hai maan.

Maan: Kya hua

Sakshi: Main yaha hoon

Brij: Are you mad? Couple dance? Bad idea.

Sakshi: Har sal hota hai. Tab to kuch nahi bola. Is sal tumhe itni problem kyun ho rahi hai

Brij: Ye bakwas idea hai bas.

Sakshi: Oh ab main samjhi Overprotective brother jag gaye hai.

Brij: Haa ek to couple dance main on time chit main jo naam aate hain wo sath mein dance karte hain.Gudiya aise kisi ke bhi sath dance nahi kar sakti.

Maan:You are thinking too much. Is wajah se tum use party bhi enjoy nahi karne doge.

Brij: Nahi Maan. Par

Sakshi: Ok I have an idea. Kyun na Maan aur Geet dance kare phir to tumhe koi problem nahi hogi na Brij.

Maan: Are you mad? Aise kaise ho sakta hai

Brij: Idea is good. But how?

Sakshi: pehle bolo Tumhe koi problem hai?

Brij: Mujhe nahi par Maan ko puchh lun ?Maan ?

Maan: If you guys think its right then no problem.

Sakshi: I will set everything. Ok bye.

They went home.

part7

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Edited by priyal12 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I AM SO SORRY for not giving update. I am busy with study. sorry once again cause am not giving update regularly. Thanks for likes and comments which shows your support for my writing.
Edited by priyal12 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanks 4 updating! fasicntaing update! well wtitten! Maan saves Geet and Pinly from ragging! Geet oblivious 2 Maan;s feelings! how will he make her realise he loves her? Geet comments that Maan is hot! Geet sees Maan as her bro's friend! liked when Maan got water 4 Geet! she was chocking! Sakshi suggests that Maan and Geet for the couple's dance! Maan shocked! but agrees! update soon
Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanx for an excellent update plz ab ghaib mat hona continuous update dena.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update dear
Liked it!!
Maan helped Geet and pinky out from getting ragged by seniors and warns them. Maan was in dilemma and was in thoughts how to make Geet realise his feelings. Pinky asks Geet about her thoughts on Maan, Geet considers Maan as her brother's best friend. Sakshi suggests Maan's name as Geet's dance partner shocking Maan. Maan reluctantly agreed. Guess unknowingly Sakshi is helping Maaneet to get closer.
Thanks for the pm !
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Posted: 7 years ago
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update ur other stories too waiting lovely update
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thanks for update
very nice update

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Maan toh totally flat on Geet, n Geet bound with culture and upbringing not allowing to think maan as her love or life partner...
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nice pt
maan want geet to know he loves hr
so maan going to dance with geet
dekhtey hain geet ko kuch ehssas
ho ga ya nahi
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PART 7

They went home.

In KM, Maan's room

Maan: Pehli bar koi dhang ki baat kari hai sakshi ne. But main konsa outfit pehnu.

Maan spread his whole clothes on bed.

Just then Brij come

Brij: Maan ye tu kya kar raha hai? Kapde almari me rakhne ke liye hote hai bed par nahin.

Maan: Kal ki party ke liye kapde dhundh raha hun?

To himself" Oh shit maine kya keh diya"

Brij: Are you ok Maan? Tujhe bukhar to nahi hai? Aaj se pehle to tu kabhi itna confuse nahi tha?Dont tell kahi koi ladki to pasand nahi aa gayi.

Maan gave shock expression

Maan: Nahi Brij. Wo yeh final hai na to is sal main har moment memorable banana chahta hun.

Brij: baat to teri sahi hai, kitni ajib baat hai na aisa lagta hai kal hi to college jana start kiya tha. Anyways Maan ye sakshi koi gadbad to nahi karegi na

Maan: I don't think so. Wo confident thi. Sab thik hoga.

Brij: Sabko lagta hai main over react karta hun Gudiya ko lekar. Tu to janta hai na Maan college mein kis kis tarah ke ladke hote hai.

Maan: Yaa you are right main samajh sakta hun.

Brij: Tum par mujhe pura trust hai. Thats why I said yes to Sakshi. Par wo koi gadbad na kare. Chalo main help kar deta hun for cloths.

Maan: Haa please.

Brij: This one

Maan: Are you sure?Red

Brij: Haa maan. Trust me. You will look more handsome with this combination.

Maan: Ok. Waise tujhe kuch aur kam tha kya.

Brij: Nahi yahi tension hai ki ye sakshi koi gadbad na kare.

Maan: Nahi karegi. Use pata hain warna tu uski jaan le lega.

Brij: Maan you know Gudiya is so innocent. Bachpana gaya nahi uska.

Maan: Dont be panic. Everything will go smoothly. Kuch nahi hoga.

Brij: Acha main chalta hun

Maan: Bye Brij.

Maan to himself " I cant belive mujhe aajkal Brij se baat karte waqt ajib lagta hai. But one thing main aur snowwhite will dance together. Brij trust me a lot. Main kehna chahta hun geet tumse that I love you.

On day of freshers party,

Maan and Brij reach to college to see arrangements

Maan wore dark red shirt with black waistcoat.

Brij: Wow Maan it really looks good you.

Maan: Dont you think red colour is quite odd.

Brij: Aaju baju dekho sab ladkiya tumhe ghoor rahi hai. Fairytale wale prince lag rahe ho.

Geet was at Pinki's place.

Geet: Pinki mujhe nahi aana party mein. Tujhe pata hai mujhe jyada shor nahi pasand Ek kam kar tu jaa main nahi aaungi

Pinki: yar tu aise mat kar. Brij Veer ji ko kya bolungi main.

Geet:Keh de na meri tabiyat thik nahi hai.

Pinki: Faltu idea hai. Veer ji na daude daude tere pas aa jayenge. Party ke Arrangements wo dekh rahe hai. Aur pareshan ho jayenge.

Geet: Thik hain par hum jaldi lautenge

In party hall

Maan to himself "Geet kyun nahi aayi ab tak.Pagal ho haya hai maan tu party start hone me time hai."

Sakshi called maan to check arrangements.

Maan: Tum mujhe order de rahi ho

Sakshi: Help mang rahi hun. Brij se kuch kaho to wo meri kaha sunta hai.

Maan: Ok ok.

Maan was checking music arrangements. Just then a girl come.

Sasha: Hi Maan.

Maan: hi sasha

Sasha kept hand on his shoulder.

Sasha: Maan you looking so handsome.

She tried to go close to him. Maan removed her hand

Maan: Look sasha tum na mujhse dur rahkar baat kiya karo. Mujhe aisi harkate pasand nahi.

Sasha: Maan whats your problem every boy wants me as girlfriend. But you

Just then Brij see Sasha with Maan.

Brij: Yaar ye ladki phir se shuru ho gayi, jabardasti Maan ke piche padi rehti hai

He goes fastly .

Brij: Excuse us sasha. Mujhe maan se baat karni hai. Too important

Sasha leaves

Brij: Phir se irritate kiya?

Maan: Haa leave it. I dont care. sakshi ke kehne par Main yaha music arrangement check karne aaya tha. Aur ye sasha such irritating. She know am not interested.

Brij: I think Sakshi is far better than her.

Maan:Ye tu keh raha hai.

Brij: Haa. Jo Sach hai so sach hai. At least she have manners how to behave. Chal na thodi der baith jate hai. Party start hone mein time hai.

Maan: Haa chal.

Brij: Ek baat bolna chahta hun maan. You are very nice. Look mera matlab tum Khurana khandan ke waris. KC ke malik. Phir bhi no attitude. I never felt difference.

Maan: Aaj tarif karne ke mood me ho kya. Pehle Sakshi ki phir meri.

Brij: My friend ye tarif nahi sachai hai. Aur ek baat tum ek boht ache bete ho, ek ache pote ho. Aur main janta hun ek boht ache husband bhi banoge.

Maan: Ab please ye shadi tak mat pohch.

Brij: Kyun kuch problem hai kya waisa wala ? Shadi nahi karoge kya.

Maan: Shut up bakwas mat kar.

Brij: Sorry yar. But really tumse jis ladki ki shadi hogi na khush naseeb hogi woh.

Maan:Yahi main nahi chahta cause ladkiya mujhe isliye pasand karti hai kyun ki main Khurana hun. mujhe aisi ladki chahiye jise milne ke baad mujhe ye lage ki am lucky because she is in my life.

Just then Maan and Brij see Geet entered with pinki.

Maan: Aisi ladki , jise dekhte hi dil ki dhadkan tej ho jaye.

Brij: Gudiya aa gayi.

Brij went toward her. Maan walks behind him

Maan was so lost in her. Geet wore red colour full sleeves gown with silver colour simple embroidery.

Maan whispered " Beautiful. Kahi meri najar na lag jaaye Snowwhite

Brij:Gudiya kitni sundar lag rahi ho. My princess.

Party Begins ,

Brij: Sakshi host kon kar raha hai.

Sakshi: Mr. Handa those are second year students. Ek tum aur ek Maan. Kuch nahi ho sakta she leaves.

Geet: Chal pinki baki friends se milte hai. Veer ji hum jaye?

Brij: Ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai. Enjoy. Maan gudiya is looking like princess.Maan: Haa

Maan's eyes were only on Geet. Lost in thoughts

Maan: Snowwhite ,princess, pari, Gudiya ye sab words too small tumhari tarif ke liye. Tumse najar nahi hat rahi.

Brij: Kaha kho gaye.

PART 8 PG 10


Edited by priyal12 - 7 years ago

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