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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 55:
Haan...I came to know everything... On my Birthday treat in Trident Square, you and Geet planned to dance together so that you can make me feel jealous...hmm?
Yash rubs his temple and not able to control his smile...At the same time, Maan breaks the glass which he was holding in his hand with a deep shock with what he just heard from Meera.

Geet got to see it and also got to see that Maan has hurt his hand by doing so and she shivers seeing blood in his hand. She's not able to take it.

Maan bangs his (Same) hand on the Bar table...So, this was the reason behind Geet-Yash to dance on that day...and I had assumed so many things...and what all followed is all because of that day...He is rolling his eyes and closes it again hating himself.

All that happened on that Friday and Sunday is my reaction towards that day I saw Geet with Yash...and as the result I poured her with all those abusive and harsh words and...

Geet runs to him and holds his hand...she's shivering with fear in seeing the blood...

Maan is not having the courage to even look at her. And when she came to my home for the first time, I didnt even care to allow her to drink even a glass of water...instead I hurt her and threw her out...because all that time I was in this state of mind thinking about Yash and Geet. His head dipped in shame.

Get me Ice...and please arrange for a bandaid...She requests the bar attender.

She applies ice on the wound and plasters the bandaid on the effected area in the hand... and she's still going restless...

Sir...what is this? Why are you doing all this? Tell me what are you upto?

He slowly turns to look at her...

I know you care a damn about other's feelings...but I never knew you have the same attitude towards yourself!

He just looks at her...with a blank note...

Is this the way you behave yourself? You first break the glass and hurt your hand and with the same hand you bang the table...and...she stops for a while...See, how much you are hurting yourself...

He holds her hand...Geet...this is nothing in front of the pain of your hidden wounds...

They both have a emotional eyelock...She slowly frees her hold on his hand when she sees Dev and NT rush to the place.

Bro..what happened? Are you Alright?

I'm fine Dev...This glass broke by me and this caused small wound in my hand..

Geet slowly moves from there. She's still not completely out of her shell... To her she feels Maan doesnt like any of the employees to be involved in his family matters...she leaves from there as she didnt want to be inbetween his family...Idhu avaroda kudumbam...naan yen talaiidanum? (Its his family...why should I interfare?)

She comes back and joins Yash and Meera...

Geet...All fine na?

She's still lost in someother world...

GEET!

Hun..haan Meera...

What happened? Why are you so lost? Is everything fine with your boss?

Hmm..

Maybe he broke the glass accidently...Forget it...lets dance! Yash insists

Hey...you people carry on...I have some important work to finish and then join you in 5 mins. And Meera leaves from there

Yash notices Geet is still not in her form...he wants to cheer her up.

Geet...come lets dance...

Yash...you carry on...

Oh Geet...Dont worry about Meera. She'll not mind it any more hmm? Yash drags her to the dance floor and they dance together.

Yash talk to her while dancing...

Geet...Is everything all right at your end? I have been observing you all this while and you dont seem to be fine to me.

Yash...I told you right I had a busy day ...that's why.

Maan turns around to see every where and finally, he gets to see Geet dancing with Yash. This time he is not restless seeing her dancing wtih Yash. He has been working hard to make up to her and looking for every possible opportunity to patch up.

Maan slowly moves towards the dance floor. By then Yash and Geet take a break to have a soft drink. Maan happens to hear them talk.

Geet...Thank You so much...I am so excited today...All my dreams came true...You know something, My parents are behind me for the last 2 years asking me to get married and they will be so happy to know about Meera. I want to take her home...but silly thoughts come to my mind

What silly thoughts?

Will she like my home? Till yesterday I felt its big enough but why do I feel all of a sudden that I am living in a small place.

Yash...May I say something? No girl will ever see how big is your home...she will see how much love, affection, care and respect she gets from the people living there. What's the point if you are even living in a palace with out these elements...hmm? Geet smiles weakly with moist eyes remembering all what happened on Sunday.

So, treat her with what care she deserves...I am sure she will love your place.
Yash was amazed with her words but also could see some pain behind it. Maan heard all what she said and knows what she meant.
Yash...I have something to finish...Continue your dance with Meera hmm?
She turns around and wipes her tears trying to hide from Yash but not from Maan. Maan standing just behind her. She leaves from there and rushes towards the washroom to cryout in peace and wipes her tears.

When she gets back to the event floor, she gets to see Meera dancing with Yash, Pinky dancing with Aadi and many other people were on to the dance floor. She smiles at them and turns to leave from there when she sees Maan standing again right behind her. She passes by Maan and Maan suddently holds her hand...She is fighting with herself to not givein for a dance with him...slowly his hands runs thro her slender waist and pulls her towards him for a dance.

She turns around and looks at him and again tries to move out but he pulled her back for a dance.

He combines his fingers with hers making sure she doesnt escape this time.
She slowly gives in to the dance and gets fully involved in it. Both dance lost in each other's eyes as if the world doesnt mean anything to them...simply lost in each other in that brief moment.

People around are talking with each other looking at them...

Yash-Meera...Meera, dont you see something cooking between them? They look perfect together.

Meera gulping her saliva...doesnt know what to answer as she knows about Geet's past well. But also not able to relate what's going on and definetly she finds Maan and Geet's dance to be much more than what it seems.

Mr. Ravi-Mr. Hegde...Sir I could see their relationship is going one step ahead...God bless

Maan swings her has his hold on her back...

Dev-NT: Wow...I guess finally, Magic is working between Bro and Geetika.

NT is clinching her fist...How can I ever allow this to happen? Geetika? No way...I must find a way to stop all this. Just then she over hears Sasha and Tasha talking.

Tasha - Sasha...Maam...Maan sir didnt even look at you...and when you invited him for a dance he asked you to leave him alone and see what's going on now! Are you seeing what I am getting to see?...Look at them...this is not only a dance but something above that...

Sasha is fuming in such a way as if she is accumulating enough vocano within her.😡

Maan and Geet still making their presence in the dance floor...He had lifted her...

and slowly brings her back to the ground level invariably feeling every inch of her back and his hands rests on her waist but both didnt realise this whilst lost in each other's eyes.

Geet slowly turns to look around and finds everyone's eyes are on them. She holds his hand that's resting on her waist and pushes it slowly and moves from the dance floor.

Maan leaves from there to move in to a secret place...Why...why did I pulled her for a dance? I just wanted to make up to her...and I dragged her to the dance floor! What's happening to me? I want to do something and end up doing something else. Am I loosing it? He closes his eyes and just imagined what all happened in the dancefloor. I must go and apologize to her for this.
At the party hall...

Geet is all lost and hyperventilating thinking about what just happened. She still feels his touch which she felt while dancing...Why...why did I give in to dance with him? Why?

Sasha and Tasha come close to her to taunt her with regard to dance. But stops at a distance after they see Pinky, Meera and Yash approach Geet first.

GEET...Are you alright?Meera is worried for her and Yash joins her.

Geet...do you need any help?

She's still shivering with all what happened Yash, please get me a soft drink...I am feeling really thirsty.

Sure Geet.

Yash orders one of the waiters to get a fruit cocktail without alcohol

Sasha gives a wicked smile as she has got a golden opportunity to take revenge from Geet. She stops that waiter and gives him 500 Rs and tells him to add some alcohol to the cocktail.

The waiter takes the drink to Geet...Yash and Meera still being on her side. Geet slowly sips the drink.

Geet...how are you feeling now?

Feeling better Yash...thanks for this drink.

By the way, its time to have dinner...hain na? Pinky is insisting by rubbing her tummy.

Oh yah...Lets finish with dinner...

Geet insists...you people carry on and will join you people in 5 mins hmm?

Sure Geet...finish with your drink and remember we are waiting for you.

In few minutes, Geet finishes with her drink...Sasha and Tasha are eagerly waiting for her to finish.

Tasha, Ab maza aayega, She has consumed alcohol and she'll slowly loose control over herself and end up doing things which she will be ashamed to know about it next day...😈

Yes Ma'm ...lets wait and watch what's going to happen...She was dancing so much with boss right? Now her true dance is going to be seen.

And the talk of the office will be Geet consuming Alcohol😈

Geet takes the final sip from her glass and she notices everything going blur in front of her. She's moving front and back holding her hand on her head. Given a normal situation Sasha's plan would have been successful but this drink is having an extra effect on her for she not being an alcohol consumer till date more over her mental stress and empty stomach is just forcing her to loose her control and she's about to fall down and just then, Maan holds her.

She looks into his eyes and blinks and slowly gets unconscious.

GEET...Geet...open your eyes...what happened to you? He's patting on her face.

Yash, Meera, Pinky and Aadi rush to their side.

SS..Sir...what happened to her?

I dont know Aadi...She was about to faint and fall down. Thanks god I reached here on time.

Geet...Geet...open your eyes for God's sake? Meera is worried for Geet.

Sasha & Tasha are shocked...they didnt expect Geet to faint. They had different plan altogether. But Sasha tried to take further advantage of the situation.

MK...I guess she's drunk...

Excuse Me you...Yash loosing with what he listens from Sasha...

Who so ever you are...mind your language. She didnt consume any alcohol it was just a fruit cocktail.

Sasha gets a fear of her life...but still continues..

MK...Just smell the glass of drink which she just had.

Maan smells it and could sense some alcohol in it.

But Geet just had a fruit cocktail...I got it ordered for her. Somewhere something went wrong during the process.

Just leave it Yash...even I know that Geet consumed it by mistake. Now, let's take her to her home.

Meera says...sure Mr. Khurana...lets take her.

Maan couldnt find Dev and NT anywhere around. He calls Dev on his mobile.

Dev...be here till end of the event. I need to leave from here as there's some emergency.

Bro...is everything all right?

Nothing to worry. You just take care of the situation and update me later.

Maan lifts Geet and exits from that place.

Pinky, Yash, Meera and Aadi follow him.

NT finds its the right time to plan her move.

Sasha-Tasha are dumbstuck. What ever they do it goes for a toss.

Sasha Ma'm...was this in your plan that Geet will completely faint and Boss will carry her home...

SHUT UP TASHA😡

NT slowly comes near them...Hello Young ladies...

Sasha and Tasha turns to look at her.

Oh hello Ma'm...

You can call me Naintara hmm!

Sure Ma'm I mean Naintara.

That's better...she gives a wicked smile...I feel pity for you. I can see your interest in my Brother-in-law but he's not even bothering to look at you even...what a pity?

Sasha-Tasha looks at each other

I even know that you have been trying to woo Maan veer ji...but you have been unsuccessful...hmm?

Sasha bends down acknowledging what ever she is hearing from NT is absolutely right.

But I can help you out in this...You need to follow what I say and I promise that Maan Veerji will be all yours.

Sasha looks at her excitedly.

Before that, you need to do some tasks for me at office...hmm?

Sure...what you want me to do?

I will tell you but not now as this is not the right time for it hmm...Wait for my call.

Precap: Geet emails Maan to meet in a secret place.😲

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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 56:

Maan drives the car and Aadi takes the front seat while Pinky has taken a back seat and Geet lying down on her lap. Yash and Meera drive thro their car. They all reach Pinky-Geet's residence. Maan carries her again. Pinky guides him to Geet's room. Meera, Yash and Aadi follow.

Maan gently lies Geet on her bed. He is tensed what to do next.

Aadi...call the doctor.

Yash interfares...Maan, I dont think its necessary. Lets allow her to sleep and take rest.

But Yash, so far as I remember, she didnt have anything for Dinner and this alcohol with empty stomach...

Dont worry Sir...Myself and Meera will be with her. And will make her drink hot soup. This should help.

The door bell rings...And everyone looks at each other.

Hey guys...I had ordered food as I knew none of us have had it during the party. So, it must be the food delivery guy.

Yash collects the parcel.

Challo...lets have dinner.

You people carry on and finish with your dinner. I am not feeling hungry. I will stay here with Geet.

All leave from the place leaving Maan and Geet alone in her room.

Maan sits next to her and admires her innocence while she's asleep. Guilt is eating him more and more for what he has done to her.

He gets to look at the side table adjacent to the bed. There were few pictures of Geet with her Appa-Amma-Raji and Gopal and one picture of her Paati (Grandma). The photo was adorned with flower indicating she is no more. He remembers what Daadi had told him...Geet's Daadi is no more and that's why she got close to his Daadi...and he closes his eyes again with disgust.

Geet..Wake up...you haven't had anything for dinner...he pats on her cheeks

GEET...he gently takes her hand into his and she shivers with his touch. All what happened in Khurana Manscon is running deep into her thoughts and she gets restless with it. This is the nightmare she gets almost all nights from the time she got to witness that unfortunate day.

She murmers...I didnt know...i didnt ... your home...she is a subconscious state not able to complete her sentence..

Geet

She holds her right hand on Maan's shirt with a grip just like she did on that day when maan had twisted her left hand..

Please...please...you ...hurting me...tears rolling down her eyes.

GEEET...He could make out this restlessness is all because of him.

Pinky and Meera rush to her room

What happened?

See she's getting restless in her sleep.

Pinky and Meera sit on the either side of Geet and making her feel relaxed.

Maan closes his eyes for a moment. Pinky, Let her relax. No worries if she's late to office tomorrow...hmm?

Thank You sir

Maan smiles and leaves from the room. He sees Aadi on the way to exit.

Sir...what happened?

Kuch nahin Aadi...

S..S..Sir, I am sure Geet will make up her mind soon and she will forgive and forget what all had happened.

Maan comes close to Aadi and rests his hand on Aadi's shoulder. Aadi, today I have realized the depth of the sin what I had done. I don't deserve easy forgiveness what so ever.

S...S..Sir..What are you saying? You have realized your mistake and I am sure Geet will forgive you if you truly communicate your realization.

No Aadi, its not Geet, its me..I dont want to forgive myself that easily.

S..Sir..

I have to leave...bye and see you in office tomorrow.

Ji..Sir...

Soon, Yash and Aadi leave from there making sure Meera and Pinky would not require any additional help. Meera and Pinky made sure to help Geet to consume hot soup.

Next day, Geet wakes up at 9:00, Her head is heavy. Just then, Meera enters her room with a glass full of lemon juice.

Good Morning!

G..ood M..or..ning Meera! What's happening to me? Why my head is heavy? When did I land here? I dont remember any thing!

Relax...Will tell you everything dear. Now finish drinking this lemon juice.

Lemon juice? But why?

You trust me na? I am giving this to you with a reason. Just drink this, go and freshen up. You will feel much much better.

Geet just did what Meera asked her to do and she was feeling much better. She joins Meera at the Breakfast table. Just then, she got to see the wall clock it was 10 minutes past 9:00 AM already.

Oops, Meera, I am already late to office. I have to leave.

Geet...dont worry, boss will not be angry on you if you are late today.

Maan Sir and not angry? But why?

Meera explains to her all what happened on the previous night. Geet remains shocked.

What? Me and Drunk? I just had a fruit cocktail that was ordered by Yash.

Yes darl, but the waiter got the wrong drink for you and you consumed it unknowingly. Well...Your boss had suggested you get more sleep than usual...So, dont worry dear...he will not be angry on you.

Meera, did Maan sir really did so much for me?

He handled the situation so well..Moreover, he trusted that you had consumed alcohol by mistake.

Geet is still shocked...not able to understand what's going on. Meera pats on her shoulder...GEET...what are you thinking? Have your breakfast...you didnt have anything last night, only a hot soup.

Meera makes sure that Geet finishes her breakfast.

Meera, its getting late and lot of work in office. I have to leave now.

Ok Dear...and one more thing...Myself and Yash have kept a small get together this evening. So, be here as early as possible. Hmm?

What else she could do apart from nodding for an YES.

Geet reaches office and gets into her cabin

first thing first...Pinky and Aadi reach out to her...

GEET...how are you feeling now?

G...Geet...Did you have a good breakfast today? It was important for you.

Pinky, Aadi sir, thank you so much ...I am all fine.

G...Geet...You have to say thanks to Boss he was not only helpful but also thoughtful.

Haan Geet...He even told us not to disturb you and not force you to wake you up in the morning and its ok if you are late today.

Pinky leaves from there but Aadi had few more things to talk.

Geet..If you dont mind, I have something important to discuss...

Aadi sir...you know I will not mind anything that you say...please go ahead.

G..Geet...Are you still angry on Boss?

Me...Angry? What for?

For all what happened during last week

Aadi sir...you knew it?

Yes, I knew it from Maan Sir's Daadi...that Maan sir is the reason behind all what happened last week...And even I gave him a good peace of mind...But..

But?

He is guilty and realising his mistake...and he has been trying his level best to make up for it...Please forgive him...

Aadi Sir...She closes her eyes for a sec as she didnt know what to say... What are you saying?

Yes Geet...I can understand that after all what had happened to you, it wont be easy for you to forgive him that easily but he is a person who has been regretting for all what he has done...he deserves forgiveness doesnt he?

But sir..

Now the decision lies within you. I dont want to force you into it...hmm

Geet is all confused...

Enaku yen Kovam? (Why am I angry?) After that incident all I tried to do is to maintain safe distance that he expects from any other employee...I am just working here like any other employee do...Nothing different. I dont deny the fact that I am extremely hurt with what ever happend but still, I never showed that on Boss...why should I? She turns around to look at Maan's cabin. He was busy with his work. Bhagawane...enna nadakudhu inga? Avaruku eppadiyum nethi senja udaviku nandri sollanum...Apparam...enaku avar mela endha kovamum illainu sollanum (Babaji...what's happening here? I have to tell him thanks for yesterday's help and I must also tell him that I am not angry on him).

The next minute she stands out of his cabin...and knocks his door.

Come in

She slowly walks in... Both look at each other for a sec. looking at Maan, She instantly recalls what ever happened last evening...especially her dance with Maan...she closes her eyes and plays with the edge of her duppatta with tension and restlessness.

SS..Sir...Good Morning!

Maan is glad to hear this from her almost after one week...but he is feeling more guilty after knowing true reason behind Yash and Geet's dance on Trident Square...

Oh..hie Geet...

S...SS...Sir...Woh...

She is not able to meet his eyes...

Yes Geet...

Even he's in a similar dilemma...not able to meet her eyes...

Woh...Thanks...Thanks for yesterday...I mean for dropping me home and ...and for every thing..

Its ok...

And...and...one more thing...

Geet...I have a meeting I have to go...

But Sir...

He leaves from the cabin..She gets back to her desk...Bhagawane...Enna sodhanai idhu (Why are you testing me like this?) I came here to tell him two things and he didnt even allow me to complete it...

She gets back to her cabin...She sees Aadi passing by

Aadi Sir...

Yes Geet...

Sir, Boss has gone for a meeting...

Yes Geet, he will be back in an hour. He will come back and then leave for another meeting in the evening. Now, I have to leave as well...I have lot of work petty issues to sort out...I will be back in 3-4 hours. Bye.

But Sir...Aadi disappears before she could complete her sentance.

What work do I have today? Let me rearrange the entire cabin...files and folders

Its been nearly one hour and Geet has been busy rearranging her cabin...she sees thro the blinds...Maan comes back to his cabin. As Aadi was not around, He had assigned the puen to get the key documents signed by Maan...Then enters Sasha with her usual short and deep neck tops

Cha..indha Sashavuku eppo thaan buthi varumo? (When will this Sasha be blessed with brains?) she doesnt leave any single opportunity to seduce boss...

Sasha bends in front of Maan with a reason to show a file but actually finding a way to give more access to her hidden treasure behind her deep necked top.

Geet is fuming with Anger (And also Jealousy).😡

Actually, Boss is to be blamed for this...he doesnt care for all these tricks of Sasha but also he doesnt warn her...Grrr😡

The puen is still standing there waiting for Maan to complete signing with all documents. Just then she notices some thing. She is shocked to see it...She tries to get a closer access...but not sure.

Once the documents are signed, the puen leaves from his cabin. Geet immediately rushes out and cought hold of the puen.

Bhaiya...Bhaiya...rukiye...

Ji madam...

Show me the documents which you got signed by Maan Sir...

He shows them to Geet...She checks all the pages and She was shocked to find what she got to see was correct.

Bhaiya...did you check these documents before signing?

No Madam...I just took it to Maan Sir as it is given by Aadi Sir.

She takes few pages out of the lot and returns back the rest to the puen.

Madam...Aap kya kar rahi hain?

Ji...Maan Sir had asked to keep these documents with me...that's why.

But Madam...

Dont worry, I will inform Aadi Sir about it.

Geet gets back to her cabin...What is this? Aadi sir can never make such a mistake. Also, he is a true and honest employee close to khuranas...how could this happen then? I am sure someone has planned this knowing Aadi's Absence. I must inform Maan Sir about this...but how?

She turns to look at Maan's cabin...he was not around. She checks with Pinky on Intercom

Pinky...Where is Maan Sir?

He has another meeting..

Oh yaah...Aadi Sir had told me...What to do now?

Geet...what happened?

Nothing Dear...Just crowded...

Hey...Wait a minute...Did Meera inform you about the get together this evening?

Yah...She told me...challo will talk later...

She keeps the phone...What to do now? I have to inform Boss about this...I have to talk to him when he comes back...No...No...I cant tell this to him during office hours...

She is pacing between 4 walls of her cabin...playing with her Dupatta...

Should I tell Aadi Sir about this? No...I must tell this only to Boss...

She has been waiting till 5:45 PM. She finally sends an Email to Maan...

"Sir...I need to meet you and talk something very important. Meet me at TURNING POINT at 8:00 PM. Will wait till I see you and please dont tell anyone that we are going to meet."

She leaves from there after shutting down her system

Maan comes back at around 10 minutes past 6:00 PM. He checks his emails before leaving...And his eyes widens with the email he received from Geet...Not sure if she is the one who has sent it. But why she needs to meet me out of office? Why? He sends an SMS to Geet's mobile to get the confirmation.

Geet reached home already...

Hey Geet...Get ready, we will be leaving in next 15 minutes.

Geet nods for a YES...

What if Maan sir didnt come back to office or didnt check his email for some reason...let me send him an SMS as well...Just then Geet gets SMS on her mobile...she checks its none other than Maan Sir

"Did you send me this email"?

She replies back saying "YES"

He replies with a confirmation... "Will wait for you"

She checks the message...wonder what boss will think about me...But have to meet him at this time...there's no other choice

Maan looks at his mobile...What ever it is, let me meet her and then comment...I will not make a mistake in giving any false judgement.

Geet, Meera, Pinky, Yash get together to begin at 7:00 PM..and its 7:45 PM already...Geet is all restless...she checks her watch every now and then.

Geet...what happened? You look tensed

Yash...I have some other important task come up...I need to leave now

Geet..What happened?

Tell us na..we will help you out..

Pinky, Meera, Nothing to worry about. Appa had called me and asked me to complete some important task that's why.

Oh ok...challo, finish with your dinner and leave

Hmm...

Geet, Should I drop you?

No Yash..I will manage...you stay back here and also spend good time with my friend Meera...Hmm? And Thanks for this get together.

Geet finishes with her dinner and immediately leaves from there and takes a Taxi to reach "Turning Point" and waits for Maan's car to arrive. It was a place close to one of the highways and its least crowded. But today, this place was deserted and not even one single person around. She gets scared now.

Maan reaches there sharp at 8:00 PM. He comes out of his car...Geet turns around and all nervous and shivering to the core...Bhagavane...Kaapathu...Enaku dhairiyam kudu (Babaji, please help me, give me strength) and she takes a long breath

GEET...

She slowly turns to look at him with an angered look.

Oh...Mr. Maan Singh Khurana is here...Oh yaah the richy rich guy whom every girl loves to date with...

Maan is wondering what is she upto...he acts as a good listener and allows her to talk
But let me make it very clear...I have not invited you here for a date...I have suggested you to come over here because I want to show you mirror of your own image...I never expected this from you... "Mr. Maan Singh Khurana"

Oops what did I do now? Why is she upset with me? She seemed to be all fine in the morning...what happened now?

GEET...

How could you be so careless? There's a limit!

Careless and Me?😲
I know, whenever that stupid Sasha comes in front of you, you just stop thinking...Your brains stop working automatically...

What is she saying? Aur...Aur yeh SASHA? Ab yeh Sasha kahan se aagayi?😕

And you take pride in praising and boasing yourself...MAAN SINGH KHURANA wants things perfect...MAAN SINGH KHURANA can never accept any mistakes...blah blah blah...

That's true!

Oh if that's true then what is this? She throws the set of papers on him which he catches hold of...and opens to look at the bunch of papers...he's shocked with what he has seen...these bunch of papers had 2 blank papers and 2 stamp papers that had his signatures.

See the height of your perfection...you blindly signed on these papers without even seeing them?

Can you ever imagine what it would cost you? Your so called Khurana Manscon or your business...or everything everything that belongs to you...And all what you have with you, your property, good will, name, fame...everything you had been proud of gets away from your hand in fraction of seconds...Can you imagine? This business doesnt only proves your achievement but also the achievements of your ancestors...It takes ages to build an empire...but it takes seconds for it to vanish...FINISH!

He's dumb stuck...not able to understand what to comment further. These documents has his signatures...he has blindly signed on them without even checking...

When I got these documents in my hand, I could have filled in any thing and everything to my name...But to remind you again, I am not such a person as I have been educated by my elders right from my childhood...that not to take interest in other's belongings...I am answerable to god after I die.

He instantly shuts her mouth with his hand...Please Geet...please dont say that...

She slowly frees his hand...but this is the opinion you have about me with her teary eyes...

Geet..

But god has given me an opportunity today to give you an answer...

Geet...I dont need God to give me an answer...I know you are not such a kind of person...

She looks at him with a owe..

He holds both his hands on her shoulder...Believe me Geet...All what happened last week was way beyond my control and when I realised it, it was too late...

She closes her eyes...Sir...I have to leave...Its getting late

She turns to leave from there...

GEET...She turns to look at him..

THANK YOU SO MUCH

S..Sir...There's no point in thanking me...please be careful henceforth.

And she turns to leave...I will drop you home..Its going to rain...

NO Thank You...I will manage myself...It doesnt suit you to drop me in your car...The lessons I learnt last week, I will make sure I dont forget it.

She turns to leave...Maan doesnt dare to offer her again.

A lorry comes out of blue on the road and Geet could see a sudden flash on her face...She was not prepared for it...the lorry comes too close to her...

GEEET...

Maan reach the spot on the time and pulls her away from the road...The pull was so strong that she came too close to him and hugged him for support...She is so terrified with what just happened that was clearly visible with the way she clinged to him...He responds hugging her back and comforting her. His one hand slowly runs thro her back and the other hand rests on her head and he closes his eyes.

It starts raining but both are so lost in each other with their hearts beating faster, they didnt realise the rain, if there's any passer by...nothing, nothing seems to matter to both at this point of time.

Precap: True Confessions

Sharing one of my favourite rain song. Its a song from a reasonably old movie The lyrics, situation everything matches to Maneet's current situation... and AR Rahman's music has created the additional magic.

Movie: KARUTHAMMA (1994)

Song: Thenmerku Paruvakatru

Music: A. R. Rahman

Singers: Unnikrishnan & Chitra
Cast: Maheshwari (Cousin sister of Actress Sridevi) , Raja

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YXfttDhW9YQ[/YOUTUBE]

To download this song in MP3 format:

http://www.isaithenral.info/index.php?p=1990-2003/K-L/Karuthamma

Here goes the meaning of the song...

Thanks to UTHRA (Viji79) for helping me with the lyrics. 🤗 Also special thanks to all Tamil friends who voted for this song. 🤗 (5-6 years back)

Monsoon winds bring with them beautiful rains

That sing melodic folk songs while spraying cold pearl droplets

Magical enough to make cactus bloom

Mystical enough to make succulent blossom

Stanza 1

Your eyes reflect myriads of colors that even earth and space don't have

Your praise for me rings musical notes that are sweeter than mother's lullaby

What penance have the raindrops done that they are bestowed the boon to touch your feminities

Oh my mind is hazed to imagine your touch on those places that raindrops have touched

Monsoon winds bring with them beautiful rains

That sing melodic folk songs while spraying cold pearl droplets

Magical enough to make cactus bloom

Mystical enough to make succulent blossom

Stanza 2

The words you and me have become one word in 'us'

The words you and I have united to become 'couple'

Love is so magical that stones and thorns feel like flowers

And no one knows that a piece of rainbow is here in the form of this girl

Monsoon winds bring with them beautiful rains

That sing melodic folk songs while spraying cold pearl droplets

Magical enough to make cactus bloom

Mystical enough to make succulent blossom

Edited by Vaidhumom - 8 years ago
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Read all parts in one go and loved the story. I have no words to say how much I love this story. Continue soon.
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Hi...Read all the parts together...beautiful story...eagerly waiting for next...loved the way you portrayed lead characters ...
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Originally posted by: caller123

Read all parts in one go and loved the story. I have no words to say how much I love this story. Continue soon.


Thank you so much dear 🤗
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Originally posted by: Mayuvani5

Hi...Read all the parts together...beautiful story...eagerly waiting for next...loved the way you portrayed lead characters ...


Thank You 😳
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PART 57:
It starts raining but both are so lost in each other with their hearts beating faster, they didn't realize the rain, if there's any passer by...nothing, nothing seems to matter to both at this point of time. It seemed they were longing for this for ages...a strange fight between their heart and mind...which is not letting them let go of each other at this point of time.

A sudden thunder which brings them back to realisation...and instantly get away from each other...

Geet is all shocked with what just happened...She looks at Maan for a sec with teary eyes dipped with shame and she runs away from that place.

Geet..listen...

She simply didnt listen and moves on as she is shell embarresed with what just happened. Maan is equally embarrassed...but lost in the thought of the beautiful moment...their first hug!

At Geet/Pinky's home:

There's knock in the door. Pinky rushes to open the door and shocked to see Geet completely drenched...

Geet...what happened? Tum tho bilkul bheeg gayi ho...

She remains quite and shocked

GEET...Pinky shakes her holding on her sholder..

Why are you panting so much? All fine na?

Hmm...

Go change your dress...will make hot tea for you.

Geet changes and comes back to the dinner table in few minutes

Geet...your tea.

Thanks Pinky...Where's Meera?

She's gone to sleep...She has a flight early morning.

Hope you people enjoyed your dinner...

Yes yaar...we all had so much fun...missed you a lot.

Geet was continuously mixing her tea with spoon...and her mind lost somewhere...She went back to the turning point...

GEEET...

HUN?

Main kehrahi thi...we all missed you a lot...

Sorry dear...couldnt help it as I had some urgent task to complete...

Its ok yaar...Anyways, tomorrow is Sunday, lets rest and relax hmm?

Hmm

Geet is restless and changing positions not able to sleep. She gets back to that moment of hug when she closes her eyes...The moment she always wants to cherish...But something stopping her...she wakes up with restlessness and her heart beating so fast as if it will come out of her mouth anytime.

Bhagawane...Enaku enna aachu? (Babaji...what's happening to me?) Why did I hug him and that too for that long? There's nothing between us then why? What will he think about me now? She closes her eyes and cries...How will I face him next time? I hope he understands that it was unintentional

AT KM...

Maan gets in fully drenched...and walking slowly

Dev, NT, Daadi and Annie are shocked to see him like this.

Annie is still angry with him and leaves to her room

Bro...what happened?

Maan still lost in that moment

Dev shakes Maan holding on his shoulder

BRO

Hun?

Aap tik tho hain na?

Hmm...

What happened? You are drenched completely

Nothing Dev...My car broke down and it started raining heavily by the time I got it repaired..

Maan Bete...jaldi se jaayiye aur change karlijiye...Main Dinner lagathi hoon...

Daadi...not to worry, I am finished with my dinner...He slowly moves towards his room with this lie.

Daadi...patha nahi Bro ko kya hogaya hain? Roz ek nayi avtar main rahthe hain...and he smiles

Maan gets into his room and takes a shower before changing.

He's completely lost in that moment when Geet huged him out of shock and he instantly hugged her back...He closed his eyes...

what happened to me? Why did I got so involved in that moment?How will I face her next time...I hope she understands that it was unintentional
Next day...

Daadi talks to Annie at the Breakfast table...Maan was about to join them and stops at a distance listening to their conversation...

Annie bete...Enough is enough...stop it here...

Kya Daadi?

Poor Maan...Talk to him...

Nahin Daadi...I will never talk to him again...Never

Annie...He is trying all possibilities to patch up with what he has done...

That doesnt convince me Daadi...I have made up my mind that's it...And..

Annie gets quite when she sees Maan nearing them..

Oops...I guess he has heard what Annie just said now...

Annie leaves from the place...

Maan bete...please dont take her words seriously, Abi bachi hain...

Daadi, I know that she will not talk to me hence forth...I need more severe punishment than this...

Maan...How long she will be angry? One day or the other, she will start talking to you again for sure...

Maan gives a weak smile and leaves from there.

At Geet's place:

Meera had already left as she had booked a early morning flight.

Geet woke up a little late as she had a disturbed sleep. She checks the clock it was 8:30 AM. She freshens up and just then she receives a call on her mobile.

Hello Venkat Uncle...Good Morning!

Good Morning Geetika...I am calling you to invite to my home today

Geet was actually not prepared...Anything special uncle?

Its Onam festival (Author's note: Its a important festival of Kerla which is celebrated for 10 days). And we are celebrating the same.

But Uncle...you are Tamil Brahmin and you celebrate Onam?

My wife is a Palakad Iyer (Author's Note: Palakad is a part of kerala and Palakad iyers follow mix of kerala and tamil traditions)

So, You have to come and stay with us for the whole day

Uncle, it may not be possible for whole day...

Nothing doing...I have said it and you have to make it

Hmm...

So, be there sharp at 10:00 AM hmm?

Hmm...

Geet was half minded...still something is bothering her and she is not finding answer. Is it a fear to go to someone's home after all what happened last Sunday? Not exactly as she has been strongly invited and she is not going to to there as an uninvited guest. its something else that's bothering her...But makes up her mind to go to their place...Anyways she is despirate to have some change of atmosphere.

Its a tradition to wear off white dress for Onam. She wears an off-white chudidar for the function and fully involved with Venkat and Family and time just flew till late in the afternoon. Her mobile starts ringing and got cut by the time she takes it in her hand.

She checks the number. It was from a landline and calls back immediately.

Hello...

Hello...Someone called me on my mobile...

Geet Didi...

Geet remains quite...

Main Annie...I was the one who called you...I got your number from Daadi.

Annie...How are you?

Not fine didi...I miss you so much...

You Silly...I am still in Delhi...you can reach me on this number anytime...

Didi...I know you are very upset with what ever happened last Sunday...I am Sorry on behalf of Bhai...But please come home na Didi...

Geet remains quite doesn't know what to answer.

Aap ko pata hain didi? I have not spoken a single word with Bhai. I hate him for what ever he has done to you. I will never speak with him.

Geet gets restless...she is not at all happy with what ever she is hearing from Annie.

Annie...Bacha...Eise nahin kehthe...

Annie is continuously crying over the phone...

Annie...please stop crying...relax and listen to me...

You are still angry with your brother?

Annie remains quite...still sobbing...

This is not done...I understand, your brother committed a mistake either knowingly or unknowingly...but its not fair to give him such a punishment...

Annie still quite...

How will you feel when your brother gets angry with you on some issue and doesnt talk to you even for a day?

Annie tries to imagine this and she is not prepared to see that day even in her dreams...never Maan got upset with her and never she got so angry with him...

Didi...I just cant imagine this...

Then, how do you expect your brother to go thro this difficulty...imagine how much of pain he has gone thro in last one week because you didnt talk to him...

Haan...Annie cries again...

Annie...Now, be a good girl and start talking to your brother

I will Didi...I will

Promise?

Promise!

Challo...I will catch you later hmm?

GEET DIDI...

Yes Annie...

Didi...Please tell me when you are coming home? I want to show you all my certificates and achievements...

Annie...I have come to someone's home here...They are calling me to have tea...Will call you some time later...hmm?

I will wait for your call didi...

Bye

Bye

Daadi holds hand on Annie's shoulder...Annie turns around to look at her...

Daadi...where's Bhai?

I guess he's relaxing on the pool side.

Daadi...Geet didi made me understand that I need to forgive Bhai...

Dadi smiles at this

I have realised that I have been so rude to Bhai...I want to apologise to him...

Yeh tho achi baat hain Annie Bete...Lets go..

Maan happens to be on the pool side...and he just kept the phone after listening to Annie-Geet Conversation. Maan and Annie happened to take the call simultaneously and Maan silently listed to their conversation...His level of guilt is doubled after what he heard Geet Advising Annie...

She could have mislead Annie...but she didnt do it...

He bangs his hand on the wall again...

BHAI...

Maan Sees Annie running towards him...and hugs him tight...

Bhai...I am really sorry...I have hurt you so much...She starts crying uncontrollably.

Maan responds to her hug...Annie...I am the one who needs to apologise to you...

Daadi...interfares...Ab bohut hogaya emotional hatyachar...SMILE both of you...

Maan and Annie hug Daadi ..

I am so happy to see this day back in my life...be happy always...And Maan...I know that Geet will forgive you with her true heart...

Daadi...I have realised I dont deserve this forgiveness...

Maan bete... will you listen to me?

She rests her hand on his shoulder...I know very well that you dont have much faith in God...But for once, go to this Darga where I regularly go...You speak your mind there...

But Daadi...

I am telling you...You will feel light and Things will fall in its place...Hmm?

Daadi...I am leaving right away...

Daadi hugs him with a smile..

Simultaniously, at Venkat's place...

Geet cuts the call with Annie...

Annie has been so unfair to her brother...and...a realization strikes her...

She remembers Daadi briefing about her family when they used to meet like strangers in that Ganesh Temple... . She rememberd that Maan lost his parents at a very young age...At that time she didnt know Daadi was referring to Maan when she said her elder grandson...

Maan Sir had lost his parents at a very young age! Indhamadiri oru kodumai yaarum nadakakudaadhu (That's really sad thing to have happened in anyone's life!)...I had my Appa- Amma to support me when ever I had ups and downs in my life...but he never had them...She gets tears in her eyes...And on top of that, Daadi and Anni stoped talking to him...Somewhere I am responsible for it...

She remembers how many times Maan tried to apologize to her...But she never allowed him to. even the other day when she was returning back from University...Aadi sir was right...I should have at least told him that I am not angry with him.

She turns towards the window and cries uncontrollably...When Venkat sees her..

Geetika...what happened dear?

Venkat Assumed that she got to remember her past. Geet's Appa had told him Every thing. Venkat made sure that even his wife doesnt know about this.

Mrs. Venkat walked in tried to console her...What happened Geetika?

Venkat interfared...She's missing her Appa-Amma.

Mrs. Venkat pats on Geet's shoulder and consoles her...Geetika...Think that we are your Appa-Amma here. Please dont cry hmm!

Geet gives a weak smile to her and then Mrs. Venkat leaves from there.

Geetika...Your Appa told me everything about your past...

Geet looks at him surprisingly...

Dont worry...Its just a passing phase and things will surely get back to normal...

Geet didnt know how to react to his words...she runs to him and hugs him...

Uncle, I am confused...not able to understand what's going on...She is not able to tell him what exactly is bothering her...

Geetika, will you believe me if I say something?

Geet nods her head...

There's a dargah nearby in Nizzamuddin area...

I will take you there and you will be blessed...

DARGAH?

Yes, but why are you shocked? Oh...you must be thinking that being a cut throat Hindu, how come I am suggesting you to visit this Darga?

Geet nods her head confusingly...

Even I felt the same when I visited this Darga for the first time... My daughter was 10 years old when she was hit by severe Typhoid because of which she suffered nearly for 2 months...and the fever got itnto her brain and she got into coma and she was admitted into hospital. Doctors couldn't answer when she will be out of this coma stage...I still remember that day when Me and My wife were helplessly crying next to her bed holding her hand...Just then someone from the neighbouring ward suggested us about this Darga...I visited this Darga and all I could do is sit there and cry...I came back to Hospital and I couldnt belive when my wife huged me and told me that our daughter regained her consciousness..From then on, I visit this Darga regularly...

Oh...I am sorry uncle...you have your own story of Pain..

That's true my dear...life is never easy for anyone...All you can do is have faith in God during difficult times...and also not to forget to thank him during your good times which many of us fail to do so.

Geet smiles agreeing to each and every word...

Come, I will take you to this Darga and then drop you home...

Venkat and Geet reach Darga...Geetika, finish with your prayers and and give me a missed call once you are finished.

Hmm..

Geet looks here and there...This is the first time she has come to a Darga...She doesnt even know how to pray here...She looks at other ladies around who have covered their head with Dupatta and she follows the same...

She prays from a distance...Bhagawane, Terinjo Teriyamalo ennala oru tappu nadanduruthu...Ippo naan than Maan Sir kitta Mannippu ketkanum (Babaji, Knowingly or Unknowingly I have committed a mistake...I owe an apology to Maan Sir)...Its all because of me his only sister and Daadi didnt even talk to him and he didnt have anyone with whom he could have shared his sorrow that he has been going thro...She closes her eyes and tears fall down her cheeks.

She sees people are tieng sacread thread to the walls...Venkat uncle didnt tell me anything about this thread...should I buy it from outside or I will get it somewhere here?

She sees a Man Tieing the thread on the wall...She goes near him and tries to ask him...

Excuse Me...

That Man Turns to look at her...

Excuse Me...Can I get this Thread?She now looks at him and shocked to see what she got to see...it was none other than Maan Sir...

Firstly both couldn't believe what they got to see...

Both going speechless...He looks at her with pleading eyes and she simply looks back at him with tears.

GEET...

MAAN SIR...

Both holding on to the thread still...

GEET...What happened, why are you crying?

Sir...I am sorry...

Maan looks at her surprisingly...if some one has to apologise, then its me...why is she saying Sorry?

GEET...

Sir...I am really very sorry...its all because of me, you had been aloof for the last one week...I didnt know Annie was upset to this extent...But dont worry sir...I have made Annie understand that she should stop her anger here...she will start talking to you henceforth...

Geet...You need not say sorry...Actually I deserved this...Annie started talking to me for which howmuch ever I thank you its not enough...But please, atleast now, accept my apologies...

Sir Please...Dont make me feel so small...I have forgotten everything...I came to tell you yesterday during office hours that I am not angry with you... but you were busy and then I missed to tell the same in the evening...

This means, you are not angry with me?

She holds his hands and nodes for no with a slight smile..wondering why she is holding his hand..

Both lost in each other's eyes...

Geet still getting tears in her eyes...but tears of joy.

Just then one old lady comes near her...
Beti, you cannot come in this area...its for men..come, I will take you to the women's area..

This lady pulls her towards the other side...

Geet and Maan still lost in each other's eyes...without even blinking for a sec...

What's happening to me? Why am I feeling this restlessness? Why?

What am I getting to see in her eyes...the same restlessness with which I have been fighting for the last two years...Why am I seeing this in her eyes? Is it true?

Geet gets back to the women's area but with restlessness...she keeps gaping at the men's area looking for Maan desperately...and found him...cought red handed by Maan... when he looked at her looking for him...She blushes and hides herself...

Just then, Maan holds her hand and puts back her duppatta on her head slowly and moves from there. Geet's heart is beating faster with this act of this...

Finally, their prayers are done and they are out of Dargah again lost in each other's eyes...they walk together, getting closer to the extent where their hands clings with each other...

A baba passing by these two bless saying "May this Pair lead a long life" A realisation strikes them and they are out of their eye lock

Precap: Daadi plays trick


Dearies, humble request not to miss this beautiful and melodious Tamil song sung by Roopkumar Rathode

Song Dedicated to Maneet expressing their true feelings...In a way, my tamil replacement to "Teri Deewani"

Song: Pookal Pookum

Movie: Madrasapattinam

Music: G V Prakash Kumar

Singers: Roop Kumar Rathod & Harini & Andrea, G V Prakash Kumar

Starcast: Arya, Amy Jackson

This movie pictures Ancient Madras (Chennai) Arya is a laundry man where he makes friendship with Amy a British girl and their friendship slowly transforms into love...This song begins where Arya tries to talk in English and Amy tries to talk in Tamil... This song and meaning says it all.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4XnjGuS3Ynk[/YOUTUBE]

This video is with English subtitles

To Download this song with MP3 format: http://www.isaithenral.info/index.php?p=2010/Maadrasapattinam


Edited by Vaidhumom - 8 years ago
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when will u post a new part
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Originally posted by: -Mitu-

when will u post a new part


I had friday-saturday weekend...today actively working on the updates...max within a day or two.
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i will start reading soon

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