MG ~ Chahne Laga Dil Tujhe ~ (Part2 - Pg 17)

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Maan filled Geet's hair partition with the Vermilion claiming her to him, but they both had no emotion on their faces. Once the wedding gets over, Maan was going to leave when Mr YashRaj Singh Khurana stopped him saying, "Maan, where are you going? You got married now only..!"

"Papa, on your insistence, I married to her but I can't get involve in these drama any more. I'm leaving, you all come, once things get over." Saying this Maan was going to leave but Daarji stopped him, he joint both his hands in front of Maan saying, "In our crisis, you helped us, if you wouldn't hold our daughter's hand then this villagers wouldn't let her live peacefully. Maan, puttar you did enough for us, please do the last thing. Don't go like this else this villagers won't keep their mouth shut. Please puttar..!"

Seeing him begging, Maan couldn't stop himself, he placed his hands on Daarji's hand saying, "Please Daarji.. Don't make me feel ashamed on myself. You're elder, don't do this. I'm not going anywhere. But please do the things fast." Daarji smiled.

Maan was standing near the lake side when his phone rang, without looking at the ID, he answered, "Hello..?"

"Maan sir..! Where.. Where are you? Gayatri ma'am called me and asked about you. You weren't receiving her phone calls. Is everything fine sir?"

"Adi..! I'm fine and inform it to mom. And I'll reach Delhi by tomorrow, till then handle everything in office." Maan said making a stern look.

"But sir.. Where are..!" But before Adi could ask further Maan strictly said, "Adi, just do what I said to you."

"Sor.. Sorry sir.." And he hang up the call, Maan looked at the crowded venue where Handa family was busy in post wedding rituals, Maan looked on worried.

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First time, trying something on Maneet, hope I will get response on my story. Will be waiting for comments.

P.S - Buddy me to get pms.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice tsr
maan get marry to geet bz his father forced him fr help
he agreed his mom didn't know anything
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanum23

nice tsr

maan get marry to geet bz his father forced him fr help
he agreed his mom didn't know anything

Thank u.. This is just a short teaser, picture abhi baaki hai 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story, nice teaser
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely start. And teaser is awesome. Waiting to read the story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you for the pm.
Maan is getting married but his mom is unaware of it. He is abiding to Darji too. What made Maan to marry Geet. Waiting to know it.
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Interesting teaser..forced marriage of maaneet im so looking forward to it
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Congrats for new story..
Nice teaser..

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Awesome teaser congrats on new FF but no prologue or intro not even cs give atleast intro maan filled geets maang to save her from pesky villagers taunts but he is worried as how he will tell his mom abt it

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