Darkest Desire updated Final Part on page 13 / 4-4-2017 - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago
Mindboggling part... Ufff !!! What a level of erotic passion... Geet hidden desire for maan came out as she cant control herself from her irresistible hubby... Maan ka toh kya kehna... He was behind Geet from his teen time also very possessive lover... Uff he tried all his plans to get by hook or crook... A very well written story which makes reader stick to it till end... Will. We get an epilogue as Geet is still not aware of maan is the maan she has been making out with all the time or it will be kept like secrete to her lifetime...
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg ..ye maan to bohot challo nikla 😲
kya planning ki h ..geet ko pta bhi nhi that she unkowningly getting addicted to him..
using her drinking addiction he kept her away from all the other men bt he himself make her addict to him ..
bt now she in senses asked him to fulfil her dark desire ..
its surprisingly shocking 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow dats a mindblowing part dear.
Oh god so it's Maan plan.He really knows how to use his pawns to win the game .
He fell in love with Geet when he first saw her.
But she insulted her.
Using her drinking skills, he beat all his bfs and he was the one who always got intimate with Geet.
Geet is carrying his baby.
And he even made Mr Handa, Meera and doc part of his game.
Now he can control Geet due to her desires and even Geet at last admitted that she also loves Maan
Wow grt part dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm! Omg wt a twist! so it was all Maan's plan! he fell 4 her wen he first saw her! he was obsessed with her! he needed her n gt her! he used Meera 2 make her j n she is carrying his child! he is cunning! he threatened the doc n made sure RP gt to knw abt her pregnancy! Geet only slept with Maan! she is unaware as she was drunk! Maan is very manipulative! Geet desperate 4 him! Maaneet get intimate! Maan wants Geet 2 say ILU! she nw needs him n he is happy! Maan has control over Geet! she says she loves him!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ns.1

Congrats for the new os 👏 such an intriguing banner 👍🏼 very different and interesting first part. Maan is an adopted child of handas and geet is their only daughter and she is such a spoiled arrogant rude girl 😡 she treats maan so badly and hates him very much and blames him responsible for all her miseries. Whereas maan very calmly listens and takes what ever she says or does with him. She is bound to be with him because of her father's will. Geet is pregnant and doesn't know whose baby she is carrying 😲 because she is drunk most of the time 😡 and she doesn't even care for her unborn baby's health. But after seeing maan in the gym and with his secretary meera, something changed in her or is it her frustration and pregnancy hormones that are making her like this. Whatever it is but I am not liking the way geet is treating maan but I do have a strong feeling that there is a lot more hidden behind the calm maan and this baby is also maan's and it might turn out to be maan's darkest desire 😳 😉 😛 instead of geet's 😛 I may be wrong but,I am eagerly waiting to know what will happen next. Thanks for the pm and the amazing concepts you always bring up 👍🏼 👏 continue soon 😃





Awesome last part 👏 and my guess was absolutely right that there is a lot more hidden behind this calmn maan and its his darkest desire and the baby is also maan's 🥳 like he said to geet that he knows how to play chess and how cleverly he played his game to get his love and obsession. geet was maan's puppet all the while and she didn't know about it 😛 but hats off to you dear richa 👍🏼 the way you write your stories and present it to your readers is so intriguing and gripping that you never know which twist will follow next. Awesome mind blowing os and such a superb intense and passionate last part 😳 😉 I loved reading it and the way you portrayed maan's character 👏 thanks a lot. Looking forward to read a fresh new story from you soon 😛
Edited by ns.1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
something unexpected

maan played well

i still cant believe this

so he is behind everything

and also that attack, every damn thing is to get geet

i loved the update so much

well written dear




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Posted: 8 years ago
All this time Geet is shown as a devil but it's Maan who is the real devil. He played a. Doomed game. But as they say, everything is fair in love and war. This part changed the whole outlook of the story. Marvelous
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg its all maan plan to get his love
just superb how he tame her and get want he want
he play well and geet did dought bec of her desir for him
she is blindly following him
maan is her week point and maan use this very smarlty and baby is maan and all the time maan is the who intimate with her after beating her all boyfriends and in dranken state geet have any clue
superb just superb

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Posted: 8 years ago

wow another yummy fav of my maaneet..where u getting tis much yummy delicious favs yar..muah..i loved it

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Posted: 8 years ago

part - 1

wow lovely superb rocking update..my maaneet ki entry was lovely..te way my maan was adopted by handa and now he took charge of hi and his daughter too who was arrogant devil and insulting my maan for each and everything,but he bearing her with so much patience..te way geet was pregnant with someones child and my maan was very protective towards her was lovely..opps geet saw my maan and her desire burning her and opps geet is jealous..i love te update so much yar

Edited by Desigirls12 - 8 years ago

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