Darkest Desire updated Final Part on page 13 / 4-4-2017 - Page 15

Mindboggling part... Ufff !!! What a level of erotic passion... Geet hidden desire for maan came out as she cant control herself from her irresistible hubby... Maan ka toh kya kehna... He was behind Geet from his teen time also very possessive lover... Uff he tried all his plans to get by hook or crook... A very well written story which makes reader stick to it till end... Will. We get an epilogue as Geet is still not aware of maan is the maan she has been making out with all the time or it will be kept like secrete to her lifetime...

omg ..ye maan to bohot challo nikla 😲

Wow dats a mindblowing part dear.

Originally posted by: ns.1

Congrats for the new os 👏 such an intriguing banner 👍🏼 very different and interesting first part. Maan is an adopted child of handas and geet is their only daughter and she is such a spoiled arrogant rude girl 😡 she treats maan so badly and hates him very much and blames him responsible for all her miseries. Whereas maan very calmly listens and takes what ever she says or does with him. She is bound to be with him because of her father's will. Geet is pregnant and doesn't know whose baby she is carrying 😲 because she is drunk most of the time 😡 and she doesn't even care for her unborn baby's health. But after seeing maan in the gym and with his secretary meera, something changed in her or is it her frustration and pregnancy hormones that are making her like this. Whatever it is but I am not liking the way geet is treating maan but I do have a strong feeling that there is a lot more hidden behind the calm maan and this baby is also maan's and it might turn out to be maan's darkest desire 😳 😉 😛 instead of geet's 😛 I may be wrong but,I am eagerly waiting to know what will happen next. Thanks for the pm and the amazing concepts you always bring up 👍🏼 👏 continue soon 😃

Awesome last part 👏 and my guess was absolutely right that there is a lot more hidden behind this calmn maan and its his darkest desire and the baby is also maan's 🥳 like he said to geet that he knows how to play chess and how cleverly he played his game to get his love and obsession. geet was maan's puppet all the while and she didn't know about it 😛 but hats off to you dear richa 👍🏼 the way you write your stories and present it to your readers is so intriguing and gripping that you never know which twist will follow next. Awesome mind blowing os and such a superb intense and passionate last part 😳 😉 I loved reading it and the way you portrayed maan's character 👏 thanks a lot. Looking forward to read a fresh new story from you soon 😛

something unexpected

maan played well

i still cant believe this

so he is behind everything

and also that attack, every damn thing is to get geet

i loved the update so much

well written dear

All this time Geet is shown as a devil but it's Maan who is the real devil. He played a. Doomed game. But as they say, everything is fair in love and war. This part changed the whole outlook of the story. Marvelous

omg its all maan plan to get his love

wow another yummy fav of my maaneet..where u getting tis much yummy delicious favs yar..muah..i loved it

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wow lovely superb rocking update..my maaneet ki entry was lovely..te way my maan was adopted by handa and now he took charge of hi and his daughter too who was arrogant devil and insulting my maan for each and everything,but he bearing her with so much patience..te way geet was pregnant with someones child and my maan was very protective towards her was lovely..opps geet saw my maan and her desire burning her and opps geet is jealous..i love te update so much yar