Darkest Desire updated Final Part on page 13 / 4-4-2017

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drrose31

@drrose31

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Final part

Nice trick... Maan played well... somehow i was tempted to type, was this maan's child, in my previous comment but stopped... hehe.. and see, here its cleared it indeed was maan with her every time...

only one thing, i didn't like was ...her dad was dead coz of maan... since he broke the news of geet's preg to him... but he got her love after all the wait of years ...

😊

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sonia1096

@sonia1096

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

Superb ff
Loved every bit of it

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: MariumChoudhary

We want more os Like this 😉

I already planned one😉

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#184

OMG!! such a well crafted story...Geet was introduced as a spoilt brat who didn't know whose child she was carrying...She was a drunkard ...Maan loved her truly and bore her every tantrums and insults...He was patient with her and hatched a plan to win her...Geet who considered him charity case succumbed to her lust and began to desire him...This eventually turned to love , all thanks to Maan's plannings...

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Superb os. Was pretty sure that the child will be maans. Since she dint knew with whom she slept. But the darkest desire was of Maans so he had all planned. And now Geet is ready to dance to his tunes. With whom she used to consider dirt. Very nice OS

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pop77

@pop77

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#186

Nice part..MAan is mastermind behind all..He is father of baby..He play really good that the girl hates him & abuse him..Now behind him..she said that she love him..I think Geet not abuse him earlier Maan not be like this..One way he betray Geet's dad..

Waiting for next story..

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saf24

@saf24

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#187

This was a pretty fantastic story. One with a difference as Maan's indifference eventually made Geet come around to the point where she needed him. Maan surely planned things well to get exactly what he wanted. Fabulous job

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#188

its such a different story... i was wondering geet the arrogant one.. why is she so rude to maan calling him charity case... and maan is also not affected...
but it was maan's plan.. well as he said all is fair in love and war and for maan it is both .. love and desire for geet made him declare this war... and he was the one who slept with geet again and again.. this baby was his 😊 so cute...
but eventually geet came around did she not 😊

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piya27

@piya27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#189

Wow awesome updates yaar

Loved it sooo much

Geet hates maan and maan all ready to win geet

Wow what master plan made by maan and maan never let anyone else his geet and the baby also belongs to him