Darkest Desire updated Final Part on page 13 / 4-4-2017

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SAI92

@SAI92

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Maan in different character in this story i like it.and u write by comparing Chess game i like it

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amazonforest

@amazonforest

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#122

hats off to you my jhatka queen 😃

super update... super twist 😉 it was maan & his darkest desire , he loves geet from very beginning but she hated him . geet was jealous after seeing meera & maan noticed that & goon wala incident was his master stroke cos after that geet want him with full conscious 😉 though he is the only man in her life & the baby is his baby but those time geet was under the effect of alcohol . he wanted to win her & he was successful , now geet can't stay away from him . their moments are super passionate & super hot 😉 😳

loved the story baby 😃

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preiti

@preetymaaneet

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#123

superb update

maan is so ummm no word for his smartness

how he used mr.Handa & meera to get geet

geet become her puppet

its all maan's plan to trick geet even that goons

poor geet don't know what is happening around her

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Superbbb update ...
loved it...
Can't believed Maan play d whole plan from start...
but its Mindblowinggg plan...

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Leenu

@Blossom_29

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#125

so the Dark Desire is maan's not of geet its all of maan's plan to make geet his and the baby too is of maan everything is good but Mr.handa thing is of scary side of maan nice story liked it thank you

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sumasridhar

@sumasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Yaar this is awesome I thought how he let other to touch his possession lovely

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#127

honestly I m shocked... like how maan was behaving I didn't even for once had this thought that maan is the master of all this game..

him sleeping with geet and geet being pregnant with maan baby. .. hats off what a superb plan he made to get geet..

and now she is so addicted to him..

but one thing I didn't liked is in order to get geet he used geet father and their unborn child.. what if geet still would have gone for abortion???

awesome...

loved it

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ragarwal.rashmi

@ragarwal.rashmi

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Firstly it was tooo long...

Amazing

All it seemed was dark desire of geet but ehat actually turned out to be...

It seemd like an ff nd not os...so much detailed...

Great os

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#129

wow

what an update

shocking surprise about maan

maan is having dark desire for geet

geet carrying maan's baby

maan planned all this to get geet n make her bow before him

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metromasti

@metromasti

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#130

awesome awesome just awesome . so it was maan who did everything to get geet's love ... his darkest desire . he loves her from childhood but she hated him & from that time he is trying to get her . he kept his eye on her & he is the only man in her life ... this is their baby but geet didn't know that cos geet was drunk when they consummated . he knew geet was affected by him & she was big J when she saw meera & then his sixer ... that goon incident . at last geet submitted herself to him with full conscious . he confessed his love & geet too utter those three magical words cos of him . their moments are hot & passionate 😉 😳 ... its maaneet's darkest desire .