Darkest Desire updated Final Part on page 13 / 4-4-2017 - Page 16

last part

wow omg I was numb for few secs after reading tis update..really u rocked dear..te way geet was addicted to my maan and te way he was hurt with her and after te goons attrack geet wants my maan and now my maan is her addiction or tat she can do anything..but im shocked surprised tat my maan is behind all tis I thought geet is devil but here my maan is devil and his desire for his geet made him to play te game and made his geet as puppet,now his geet is check mate..omg mummy really superb update..i love te update so much yar

love u so much for giving a yummy dish yar,mummy very tasty..muah

Originally posted by: ns.1

Awesome last part 👏 and my guess was absolutely right that there is a lot more hidden behind this calmn maan and its his darkest desire and the baby is also maan's 🥳 like he said to geet that he knows how to play chess and how cleverly he played his game to get his love and obsession. geet was maan's puppet all the while and she didn't know about it 😛 but hats off to you dear richa 👍🏼 the way you write your stories and present it to your readers is so intriguing and gripping that you never know which twist will follow next. Awesome mind blowing os and such a superb intense and passionate last part 😳 😉 I loved reading it and the way you portrayed maan's character 👏 thanks a lot. Looking forward to read a fresh new story from you soon 😛

awesum story
loved it
maan played his cards well n got what he wanted ..his desire his love... geet

Awesome update

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

<font color="#993399" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">I want to reply after reading your response but can't as I had to keep it secret till next part😉</font>

No problem dear 😃 I can understand, its your hard work. Loved it 👏 thanks once again 😛

awesome update...

Well that WS surely interesting
Maan ws not evn half innocent as he seemed to b
He did all to get her woahhh!!
👏

Thanks for pm
Nice part..
So it was maan baby...
It was only maan who was with geet every tym...
He planned goons too...
Here i was cursing geet...but turns out maan is the master mind...
I didn't expect this twist actually...
Lovely end

Awesome update..