Darkest Desire updated Final Part on page 13 / 4-4-2017

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#111

Omg so this all was maanplan to get geet ..he loved her since childhood.but she never cared..finally geet started loving maan..

Superb writing wonderful update richa..

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@TwinFlames

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Posted: 8 years ago

#112

OMG! what was that @richa? 😲 it was sooo unexpected.. so maan played games with geet.. & succeeded .. geet in her desire accepted all his wishes.. GOSH! so maan always desired for her.. he wanted to get her by hook or crook.. so he threatened everyone 😲
sach mein, everything is fair in love & war.. 😆
brilliant update 😉

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Haya1022bmw

@Haya1022bmw

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Posted: 8 years ago

#113

I m shocked
maan played the game
Really geet is her dark desire
loved it
but sad it's not long story

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#114

its amazing

maan really played well he told hr he knows to play chess and he gave check mate in hr life

he very well knows how to tame hr

hr knows hr very well wat she thinking wat she wil do hr every moments reports he knows and he succeeded in his plan without hurting hr she is with him with her will but actually he got hr by hook and crook she pregnant with his baby no one eles get close to hr he threatened his bf he's the one whom she slept after get drank but hr unconscious states

she's his darkest desire

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

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Posted: 8 years ago

#115

nice update buddy

Maan calculated his moves to get Geet

He is now happy to get her and happy that she loves him too

Nice story

Thanks fr d pm

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Sanjida Tamanna

@tamanna121

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Posted: 8 years ago

#116

Awesome update..
What a twist..
Actuallay in this story maan was in lead..
He was the mastermind of all the things..
Loved the twist very much..
Thank u so much for pm..

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Madhu

@Madhu_31

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#117

OMG!!All this was Maan's plan *thud*
Di..no one can beat you in giving such twists😆
From the he saw her he had this darkest desire!!
And the baby is Maan's😊
Geet thought that she slept with many..but it was Maan all the time!!
Sad that Mr.Handa lost his life in this cunning game of Maan😒
Loved the way you connected that chess game thing and the story..brilliant!!
In last part I said Maan is caring..noo he is cunning!!
Till now Geet doesn't know that it was Maan with whom she spent all the nights!!
Loved this OS very much!!Perfect end👏
Plzz keeping writing such stories di!!
Thanks for the PM

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hira2010

@hira2010

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#118

Maan ko hum samjhey lallu yeh toh Shana nikla
Omg it his plan everything planned
Geet he loves her
Awesome update
You twist
Yar your story mein kab Kon Kiya kart PatA nahi Chala
You blow my mind

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happydays30

@happydays30

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#119

Awesome part
wat a twist
maan too clever n great player
never expected its his baby n only maan in geets life
Everything for his princess

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#120

At first sensing that Maan gets hurt with Geet's words and her actions I had immediately wondered if he perhaps had some hidden love for her but when the revelation of its not Maan's first time then I felt that something is surely hidden and knowing the fact that he had this dark hidden desire for Geet since the very first day they met yet he never not once showed any emotions towards her .

Geet on the other hand could not handle Meera been near Maan but her mind only felt she needed to insult both of them as she been pregnant her hormones were playing her , seeing Maan shirtless yet she did not want to succumb to him while Maan already knew what her moves would be as he was planning to make her go crazy for him

due to Geet's habits she had always thought she is with different men but only Maan knew it has always only been him

so the baby she carries its Maan's and now Geet is his wife with her confessing her love to him Maan has finally tamed his girl