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MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
interesting start with the historical setting..
while Maan was worried and uncertain about the future, I liked the hope filled attitude of Geet that reflected in her notes..time is mightier and can crush the thrones of the mighty kings under its feet..
I hope Maan and Geet succeed in their tryst with destiny..

Sorry Flames!

I missed this one

First of all thank you for being here :)

I always look forward to your visits !

Thank you for liking it 😃

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MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
Part 1

the chapter name is apt..the last line says it all.
what he is subjected to by circumstances is cruel, but equally cruel part was the people around him scratching a painful mark on his innocent heart..

Thank you again!

Chapter name was just a pinch of agony Maan was facing..

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MrsBenedict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Zeehana
I love Historic fictions , and reading them in that period of time will be really interesting
Waiting for the next update

Thank you Zeehana!

I m glad you are here :)

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Awesome update maan was going away with his grandpa to live with his grandpa friend I presume who seem to be super friendly even crushed the poor maan too maan was observing the house when something crawled on him which seems to be a bug geets bug who seems to take a liking at poor maan who is horrified to say the least poor maan his expression worth seeing thanks to poppy do specify who is heck is poppy

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! Maan goes 2 stay with Mr Bakes! he meets Mr bakes granddaughter! she is looking 4 poppy! she sees Poppy on Maan! She is fixing their marriage! Maan horrified! update soon

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Part 2

Is it Geet's innocent way or a mischievous way to welcome Maan (assuming the girl as Geet)
she is even dreaming of her poppy's children..😆
but who is poppy..a frog or a puppy..guessing it to be a frog from the title and the way it crawled on Maan..
so instead of frog prince, she found a prince for her frog..that is sure some trouble for Maan..
but I loved her entry and of course their first meet..

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Arrey idhar ka updt bhi gayab?😲

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Congratulations on your story

Wow a 1942 story

in the time of Hilter's rein

I was pleasantly surprised to read Maaneet , Hilter , Beethoven and King Ozymandias

it already sounds so Captivating and yet historically classic

and Geet she is a Jew wow this will make for interesting reading

I'm so eager to read this SS of yours

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Chapter 1

This chapter started off on such a sad note , death something that hangs over our heads yet as a child we can never get over a parent or parents death

I'm already intrigued by this story and want to know more

Right now my heart leaps out to Maan he is so young and had to lose his parents

this would indeed have a major impact on his personality , worst all these horrible gossipping

women do they not realize their talks would effect an innocent child

the worst a child can face is losing a parent but with Maan he loses both his parents

this hurt this pain its raw its something that one can never truly get over that grief

Oh gosh !! the words on the Epitaph were so heartwrenching yet its so true , we all know

the surety in life is death yet when it happens its most difficult to accept , Maan's grandfather had to bury his son and daughter law and surely that itself is painful for a parent to bury their child

so now Maan and his grandfather are moving to Frankfurt

will be waiting for next chapter