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Hello people. I am back again with a new story on our beloved couple but in different shades. Constructive criticism is always welcome!



Prologue




1942,Germany



The resonance of Beethoven lit up the abode. The playful banter with the notes filled the air with elation. He strode towards the source ,which was oozing out of this new found zeal and gusto.


There she was ,sitting on the mahogany duet bench with her fingers , creating magic on the keyboard of the spinet. Her cheerful spirits were so addictive that he was forced to surrender his distress and edginess to this lyrical connotation .


Fur Elise? He contemplated ,what was the reason for this bagatelle to be played? He walked inside the dingy room and stood behind her, looking over her shoulders to see the coated paper containing the musical notations.


Without turning back to look at him she switched to symphony five , this sudden transition in the music amused him.


What brought the sudden change from Fur Elise to Symphony five ? He mused , situation like theirs didn't call out for Beethoven love or victory song. They were in Germany, her being a Jew didn't help out much with the autocracies of Nazi leader. The odds were against them and they had embraced this absolute truth long back .


This mood of hers was daunting for him, he moved forward in order to question her but reverted back thinking this may be her only respite from the harsh realities.


Ethnic cleansing by Hitler's dictatorship was at its prime . All doors to evade the horrors of war zone, on the watch of officers were closed long back . The world outside which out of the dictator's reach was blissfully unaware of their nightmarish realities. The only thing he could do was wait, wait for a better future, wait for assured togetherness and freedom in uncertainties.

His reverie was broken when she suddenly asked him in her tremulous voice

'Maan, Do you know who was Ozymandias ? '

He shrugged his shoulder in denial. She stopped her tryst with the piano and turned back to gaze in his curious eyes.

'He was a tyrannical king, who like a fool believed he was mightier than the god." she answered and paused only to speak again.

"Do you know what he wrote beneath his statue?" As soon as he answered in denial ,she stood up and walked towards a broken table and picked up a shabby book. She strolled back towards him and showed him the sonnet which was written on the white paper in illustrative letters

My name is Ozymandias, king of kings,
Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!"


Though it was out of context and he could not understand where she was going with this king and his tyranny still ,he gave her his half -hearted attention.


She continued her description of the once lived king and how the ruins of his statue are ironically , mocked upon by people today .Then, she said something which made him look at her with rapt attention.


"Maan, Hitler is worse than Ozymandias. He will lose the battle with time before our hopes do."


That's all she said .


And then he somehow , understood why the oppressive king interlude Beethoven's victory symphony .This very victory symphony will mark their Tryst with destiny.





A/N-I have used literary license, by transporting Maan and Geet to Germany during reign of terror dictatorship of Hitler's .Geet here is a Jew ,which was necessary for the plot and I didn't change their names to make them sound German because maaneet can pull of any shade.

A quick brush up on Facts :



1. Ludwig van Beethoven was a German composer and pianist. A crucial figure in the transition between the Classical and Romantic eras in Western art music, he remains one of the most famous and influential of all composers.

2.Fur Elise and Symphony 5 are his compositions.

3.Bagatelle -A bagatelle is a short piece of music, typically for the piano,

4.Ozymandias was a Greek name for the Egyptian pharaoh Ramesses II, who ruled from 1279 BCE to 1213 BCE, in the 19th Dynasty of Ancient Egypt. He was infamous for his cruelty as a king
5.The lines of sonnet on between the story is from one of my favorite poem called Ozymandias by Percy Bysshe Shelly It's a public domain poem hence I will not run into any sort of copyrights issue.


You can always search for it via this link

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Public_domain

PS - I m planning to turn this into SS of 10 to 15 parts only if you are curious to see them in this setting.

Add MrsBenedict for pm and please notify in your comments if our are interested in receiving them.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats on the new story! thanks 4 da pm! different concept! interesting update! well written
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Posted: 8 years ago
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1942?
Hitler and Maneet combo is too irresistible.
Beethoven and Ozymandias!
Woah you had put all awesome things in this.
Geet a Jew?
Hope all will be sunny for them.
The prologue intrigues me to no end.
You sure have unique style.
I can't seem to wait for the next chapter.
Waiting!

PS - I will like to receive PM and also I want you to continue the SS
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats on the new story! thanks 4 da pm! different concept! interesting update! well written

Thank you! For your kind words.
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congrats for new story
interesting prologue
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Originally posted by: vrinda22

congrats for new story

interesting prologue

Thank you !
for finding this interesting :)
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Hi *not calling you that name*

So, when all your friends are either sleeping or busy with their days, you get a chance to become the ghost of the forum.

I had just known your os, which i read of course but felt too lazy to comment.. (apologies)
but this was a surprise.

Tryst with Destiny... I liked this name but what caught my attention?
1942, Germany

I knew I had to read this. And woman, you took me by surprise Indeed.

Traveling back in time and to a place that is eteched in history is mighty brave. But the bravest thing is that when you are able to put merge history and fiction together and still present a beautiful story. You have my attention now.. all of it.

Fur Elise and Symphony no 5?
My My...I have heard them all and to have them incorporated in this story is what it takes to keep me hooked. You have picked up a few of my favorite things and you have a follower now.

Geet and Maan in a very different world... its refreshing and thrilling at the same time. the title gives a premonition of sorts but then it has its own way of getting me anxious. War torn germany, Hitler and the oppressed... a difficult concept but a different one indeed. The undercurrents could be felt and the tension hanging in the air... hanging between the leads is so feel-able. There is uncertainty of life and death and being a Jew, even that option is ruled out. Ehtnic Cleansing and religian had co-existed for centuries but Hitler took it to another level with his anti-Jew policies. We have only read them in books but what the people might have gone through, its inexplicable.

P.B Shelly!!
You clever woman... You keep picking up a lot of intriguing stuffs on the way. That sonnet sends out a message, a pellucid clairvoyance of what I might see in the story. But I will keep this mouth shut and wait for you to unravel their tryst with destiny.

p.s do pm me. am intrigued.

-rabbit.
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Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

Hi *not calling you that name*

Naah! You have exclusive rights to do that! 😉


So, when all your friends are either sleeping or busy with their days, you get a chance to become the ghost of the forum.

I am Ninja, they will never know lest they start spammingThis thread😆

I had just known your os, which i read of course but felt too lazy to comment.. (apologies)
but this was a surprise.

Bro! I can never hold grudges against people or Rabbits for not commenting 😃

Tryst with Destiny... I liked this name but what caught my attention?
1942, Germany

That caught you, hmmm I m liking you now...kidding 😛I adore you

I knew I had to read this. And woman, you took me by surprise Indeed. Pleasure is all mine 😳

Traveling back in time and to a place that is eteched in history is mighty brave. But the bravest thing is that when you are able to put merge history and fiction together and still present a beautiful story. You have my attention now.. all of it.

A hope I will stand on the pedestal which you have created for me to reach!

Fur Elise and Symphony no 5? Beethoven was my twin in past 😉
My My...I have heard them all and to have them incorporated in this story is what it takes to keep me hooked. You have picked up a few of my favorite things and you have a follower now.

You are not a follower , you are a fellow awesome writer aka rabbit.

Geet and Maan in a very different world... its refreshing and thrilling at the same time. the title gives a premonition of sorts but then it has its own way of getting me anxious. War torn germany, Hitler and the oppressed... a difficult concept but a different one indeed.

Your premonitions will haunt back, I guess 😆

The undercurrents could be felt and the tension hanging in the air... hanging between the leads is so feel-able. There is uncertainty of life and death and being a Jew, even that option is ruled out.

Jew, Hitler and Maan, that's a weird combo. 😆

Ehtnic Cleansing and religian had co-existed for centuries but Hitler took it to another level with his anti-Jew policies. We have only read them in books but what the people might have gone through, its inexplicable.


Oh! The horrors of Nazism, I loathe Hitler, he was sick in head


P.B Shelly!! Fan?

You clever woman... You keep picking up a lot of intriguing stuffs on the way. That sonnet sends out a message, a pellucid clairvoyance of what I might see in the story. But I will keep this mouth shut and wait for you to unravel their tryst with destiny.
That sonnet is engraved in me for forever!

p.s do pm me. am intrigued.
Sure bro!
-rabbit.


PS - you can comment so well , I guess I have to take classes from you ,
Criticize me next time, I demand that from you 😛
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Originally posted by: cumberben


PS - you can comment so well , I guess I have to take classes from you ,
Criticize me next time, I demand that from you 😛



I read a very few stories and you are going to see a lot of these!😉
Now, I like that demand. and that shall be met as the story progresses.😃

p.s the demand-supply curve must be balanced no😆
I am expecting the same from you too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lizzy84


1942? Yup it was last year
Hitler and Maneet combo is too irresistible.
Beethoven and Ozymandias! Thanks you sweets :)
Woah you had put all awesome things in this. Did I?
Geet a Jew? You!
Hope all will be sunny for them. I guess😉
The prologue intrigues me to no end.
You sure have unique style.
I can't seem to wait for the next chapter.
Waiting!

Thank you for being here

PS - I will like to receive PM and also I want you to continue the SS
OK



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