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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
I like VISMEET's character
Would like to see him giving tough time to NT and maan's aunt for their demeanor towards geet in past and present !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for the pm dear
Great teaser
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations on new thread

1st Teaser

did someone kidnap Manu , Geet wants her child and Maan says he'll find him

2nd Teaser

seems like Maan wants Geet in his life he seems very much attracted and also accepts the fact now in front of her that she is his wife and he has full rights on her

eagerly waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 13

Thanks for liking and comments ,if any grammatical mistakes in this part,plz ignore it , iam sry..

The sunrises hit their beautiful sleep..yeah none other our maaneet and our cutie pie .vismeet hided his face to maan chest closely to avoid sunrays..but sun not leave manu baby

Cutiepie opened his eyes with irritating face ..maan kissed manu forehead..

Manu: papu I hate that sun..he disturbed my sleep with babish tone..

Maan smiles at manu: oh my sunshine disturbed because of that sun..i will handle it...maan closed curtain through remote...now sun is gone

Manu clapped his hand and sitting maan stomach : he ran away..with excitedly jumping maan stomach..maan have pain in his stomach but he not consider his pain. he got love from his sunshine.

Geet sitting in bed and jealous seeing manu playing maan

Geet: manu get down and come brush ur teeth with little hard voice

Manu nods her negatively and puppy face at maan and maan look at geet..but geet glare both of them..

Maan: sunshine, I will help u to freshup and then we will go temple..

Geet shocked and thought: she hearing correct or wrong..maanji mouth from temple..word

Maan chuckle seeing geet shocking face and murmuring manu ears : baby go kiss ur mummaa...manu kiss geet cheeks .

Geet come out of thought and kissed manu forehead: good morning manu..

Manu: good morning..mummaa..u forgot wish papu with innocent face

Geet : silent

Maan understand geet silent and maan come geet side and kiss her forehead : good morning jaan.

Geet opened her mouth o shape insake of sudden open kiss yeah she know he kissed before in her sleeping state but today kissed her awake state.

Manu hit his forehead: papu u forgot mummaa name is jeet not...thinking jaan word...yeah I got it with bright face.jan. jan is month name not mummaa name..with laughing face

Maan: my baby know month name also..my sunshine so brilliant like his father..with proud voice

Geet glare to maan: not he is so smart like his mother..with defending tone

Maan pickup manu in arms: but my sunshine is more smart than his mummaa with teasing tone went to washroom.

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Geet totally removes her bandage but she have little pain in her arm.a young man enter geet room with angry face .he look like late 20's ..geet happy seeing him but shivering look at his face.


Geet run to him and but he show his hand : stop with hard voice

Geet face fell down..: bhai..plz listen to me with guility face

Yeah he is none other our arjun

Arjun: bhai with taunting tone..really u thought iam ur bhai..then why u ran away from me..if u thought u have bhai also , u straightly come to me. I will solve ur every problem.with angry tone.

Manu enter maaneet room with jumping and jolly face but seeing her someone scold his mummaa but manu is lovely kid .he not tolerate seeing his mumma crying.

Manu thought: u r bad guy ,u scold my mummaa..my mummaa is crying..with sad face.u wait I will come with my weapons...with smirked face..running to his toys room.

Arjun: why geet u not share ur pain with me .iam not ur brother..in these yrs I live in guility life..iam bad brother.i enjoyed my life but I did nt know anything about ur life with broken voice tears flowing in their eyes.

Geet hug arjun sry: bhai, don't say ur bad brother.u r my best brother..it is my mistake I hided everything from u.

Arjun: how r u..geet.and where is my nephew

Geet: iam fine bhai and he is annie room..wait I bring him

Arjun: no geet,I go myself.i want know what he will do after see me.

Geet smiled and arjun went to annie room.

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Manu enter mumma room: mummaa where is he with angry face..

Geet looking manu..head to toe. manu one hand with bat,other hand knife ,he wore bow and arrow in his shoulder and gun in his pant packet.everything toys items .

Manu: mummaa where is he ..same angry tone..

Geet confused: whose manu..

Manu: few minutes before one guy talk with u ..

Geet: he is going to ur bua room..

Manu kya..bua..now I save my bua from him .iam coming bad guy with naughty face...running out fastly to his annie room.geet follow manu

Annie room..arjun hugging annie..

Arjun: I miss u so much annie..it almost 1 month u came to km..u r not miss ur hubby..with pout face


Annie: I miss u arjun but door opened plz leave me.if anyone see me in this posture .everyone teasing me..

Arjun: u r my wife none teasing u.

Annie pushed arjun but arjun hold her tightly..our cutie pie entry in his bua room.manu eyes popped seeing same man hugging bua but bua pushing him.

Manu thought: whose is that bad guy,first he shout my mummaa now he torturing my bua.with moist eyes.my poor bua pushing him but he not leave my bua with angry face..i am not leave u bad guy with smirked face.

Manu placed bat and knife in ground.manu pick up bow in his left hand and one arrow in right hand.manu pushed arrow but his aim missed ..once again he tried but arrow not reach arjun..yeah arjun and annie not noticed manu in room.

Maan passing annie room and noticed geet hide behind door step seeing something inside and maan come near to geet..even maan breathe touched geet shoulder..

Maan: geet what r doing outside annie room with slow voice.

Geet : maanji shout ur mouth ,I am watching...geet more engaged manu antics even she forgot angry with maan.

Maan seeing annie and arjun hugging scene (mind): what happened to geet why seeing annie and arjun privacy moments..( geet watching manu baby but maan thinking she watching couple romance).

Geet: maanji see how much cuteness

Maan not tolerate more and grabbed geet arm forcefully and geet hand placed maan chest and her hair touched maan face..

Geet: maanji why u pulled me..iam enjoying his antics.

Maan: are u crazy why u watching their lonely moments..

Geet hit her forehead: hey babaji maanji what think about me, I am not watching their romance..iam watching our baby antics..flowly said our baby..

Maan: kya

Geet showed manu antics to maan and maan smiled looking manu antics and more than happy in her mouth said our baby..

Maaneet closely next each other..like maan face in geet shoulder and geet back merged to maan front..

Our cutiepie..tried next items.knife..he throw knife to arjun back but just missed knife reached arjun foot.

Manu thought: manu now u attacked straightly to bad guy..

Manu pickup bat in his hand..and beat arjun back forcefully..

Arjun shout: aahhh...( yeah it is plastic bat only but sometimes we got pain..i have experenice..)

Annie looking manu beating arjun continuously and arjun turned looking cute manu beating him..arjun confused whose that cute baby even annie smiling at him.

Annie pickup manu in his arms: sweetheart,why u beat him..

Manu: bua, leave me.that bad guy torturing u.. ,iam not leave him with trying free from annie grip.

Arjun mouthed open widely and looking annie gestured he is geet s son through eyes .annie nods her head positively.

Annie kiss manu cheeks:ha baby ,he is torturing me..with puppy face to manu and smirked face to arjun.

Manu cupped annie cheeks: bua iam here,I handling him.if he come near u,I will shot him through my gun with angry face

Arjun eyes popped : annie ,u got ur savior but no one stopped me..with teasing manu baby..hug annie side ..

Manu pulled his arjun hair: leave my bua..with high pitch voice..

Arjun: I thought he is soft like my sister but he is angry bird like his father..he is dido of ur bhai..angry bird with pinched manu cheeks.

Maan eyes popped: see geet ur bhai said iam angry bird.

Geet: obviously u r angry bird

Maan: what u said.

U r angry bird maan.. voice from back of maaneet..both turned seeing whole family watching everything and teasing look them..dadi,ram,priya,Vicky,khushi even nakul kaka..geet realized maan very closely stand with her..geet move away from maan.

Geet : oh..i... went to room fastly..

Everyone naughty look to maan but maan fake glare to everyone behind to geet.

Maan ( mind): why everyone following us,few minutes she forgot angry with me..everyone teasing her,now she remember everything..oh my family only enemies for my love story.

Maaneet room

Geet ( mind): why I behaved very close to maanji,few minutes u forgot everything geet.no iam not forgive him.

Maan enter his room and looking geet confused face..

Maan: geet

Geet avoid to maan and go out but maan grabbed her arm ,pinned to wall..geet sandwiched between maan and wall.maan breathe touched geet necks.geet not tolerate his closeness..she closed her eyes control her every feeling.

Maan: geet

Geet opened her eyes:stay away from me Mr.khurana

Maan thumbs carring her cheeks with seducing voice:iam ur maanji not khurana ..

Geet heart beat raised: be ur limits...with harsh tone.

Maan: u r my wife ,I have full right with u..

Geet: wife...mr.khurana...with taunting tone..

Maan : hmm...I understand ur pain jaan with guility face.

Geet: u never understand my pain.Mr.khurana.pushed him and went out.

Maan : u will soon realize my love ,geet

****

Dadi:everyone packed ur things or not...

Ram: maa everyone packed their bags ..dont take tension

Manu: badi dadi where we going.

Dadi lift baby chin: our farmhouse baby, every years we will celebrate holi festival in our farmhouse.last two or three yrs we r not celebrate any festival in our mansion..now my angel in our home..we will celebrate this happiness right.

Manu face fell down: whose angel for u with irritating face

Dadi:my manu baby is our angel..

Manu : iam ur angel with clapping his hand ..

Geet: maa and papa not with me with moist eyes..everyone feel bad for geet.

U r maa here beta...voice from door steps

Everyone eyes shifted to door side..


Manu : naanu , naani..excited voice running to them..

Geet : maa ,sir..

Khushi: dad and mom, what a surprise..

NeiL pickup manu in his arms and kiss his cheeks : I miss u prince..

Manu: ur prince also miss u...naanu..

Ragini: my prince not miss me with pout face.

Manu: arreh.nani .i miss u both..

Geet and khushi unison: we also here with pout face.whenever u prince with u ,u both forgot everything.

Neil: my princesses jealous with my prince.it is too bad..

Khurana members seeing them like they r aliens..

Neil give manu to ragini : hold ur prince .i will handle my princesses..

Neil: why u both standing here.come with ur dad

Geet and khushi hugs to neil and neil kiss their forehead..

Neil: how r u my lovely daughter

Geet: iam fine sir

Neil: how many time I told u call me dad or papa not sir

Geet: sorry, dad...

Neil: ok ,ur sister not troubled u right.how is ur hand..u have any pain in ur arms

Khushi: dad, I never troubled di and u r worry about elder daughter not me with fake angry face.

Geet smiled and ragini carrying geet hairs with lovingly

Geet: iam fine dad.and don't say anything about my little sis.she is so sweet girl.

Khushi: di love me so much more than u guys.

Neil: I love u my both princesses..

Manu: naanu..with angry face

Neil: oh iam sry prince I love u more than ur mummaa and ur girlfriend..

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Manu winning smiling to geet and khushi and girls mouth open widely

Dadi fake coughed and got gupta family attention.

Neil and ragini: sry maaji, we forgot intro themselves

Dadi: no problem my guessing right ,u r khushi parents..

Neil: no maaji,we r not only khushi parents,geet also my daughter..iam proudly said geet is my daughter.

Ram: neil sir , we glad u come our house.we know u r big industrialist.in ur busy schedule also come to our house.


Neil: No ram bhai.in business world only iam big shot to other but inside home iam lovely husband and father to my wife and children.and crime partner to my grand child.life is very short .so we will spend more time to our family.i don't know tomorrow I alive or not..

Ragini: neil just shut ur mouth

Neil: ok boss,iam sry.

Maan mind: he is big shot in business world.everyone waiting for single appoint but he behave normally with everyone.how he managed both family and business..

Neil: hello young man how r u .after long back I saw u..

Maan: iam fine sir.my pleasure u remember me

Neil: no maan ,I admiring ur business skills..u r great businessman.

Maan: iam glad ur admiring my skills but ur last project everything amazing.every project have some problem but u handled everything smoothly sir.

Neil: u talk about last project means ur praising not for me..this praising owner my lovely daughter only.she only next heir of my company.

Priya: neil bhai sahab u talk about khushi.but she is child

Ragini: nahi bhabhi .neil talk about our elder daughter geet, she is only handling all gupta industries main project.we proudly said she is our daughter.

Khurana proudly look at geet and maan admiring other side of geet.

Geet: maa and dad it is too much I did not anything,everything I learned by dad and gupta industries next md is khushi not me.

Khushi: di, I don't want ur tension. U only manage our company. i want spend more time with my boyfriend whole day

Dadi:after ur marriage,u stay away from ur boyfriend right.

Neil and ragini unsion: we not think so..iam right khushi beta

Khushi blushing and Vicky enter mansion..

Vicky: uncle and aunty when u came to delhi,u not inform me

Neil: yash beta how r u..

Vicky: iam fine uncle.

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Priya: yash...with confused face.

Ragini: oh priya bhabhi , we always call Vicky to yash because geet introduced Vicky to yash with us..

Geet remembered and ragini narrated how they got geet

Flashback starts.Geet shattered seeing maan with nt in hotel room ..geet running outside like mad.if anyone seeing in her state .their eyes become moist..thud sound..

A car hit her but car not stopped moved fastly from road side.everyone surrounding geet but no one help her.everyone scared for police case.A bwm car stopped seeing accident..

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A driver said owner about accident and owner joined geet to hospital immediately..he called her wife.after few minutes she arrived hospital .

Lady: neil what happened why u said come to hospital .u alright

Neil: ragini , iam alright.he narrated everything about girl accident..

Ragini: where is she

Neil: icu

Ragini: I will treat her don't worry, neil

After few minutes.ragini come outside to icu room.

Neil: ragini she is alright

Ragini: neil she is fine..u know about any information..

Neil: no I told my bodyguards..they don't know anything about her.

Ragini:ok no problem we will ask her..she got conscious soon..

Geet got conscious and ragini carring her hairs softly..

Geet eyes seeing ragini face to rano face..in sake of her dilemma and medicines

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Geet: maa why u leave me alone and hugged ragini waist tightly..she is crying ...blabbering about maan ..ragini not understand her word but feel bad for geet..even ragini eyes also moist..

Ragini cupped her cheeks: beta come down..nothing happened to u..u need rest sleep beta..

geet slept and ragini eyes tear flowing in her cheeks.


Neil touched ragini shoulder..and ragini look at neil with moist eye.

Neil: ragini what happened why u crying..

Ragini: this girl remember our elder daughter.if she is alive.she look like that girl.she call me maa, neil.

Neil: u right ragini, first time I saw her face even iam also thinking same ways..

Night time geet wake up insleep

Geet: ji u

Ragini: nothing beta u alright ,where is ur family..ur husband name.i will inform about u

Geet: I have no one..thank u save me..but I need go with emotionless face

Ragini understand face reaction she is best pyscharisit.

Ragini:if u have any problem u come with us..we r going to Mumbai..

Geet: no ji u helped me so much..i am not burden anymore

Ragini: daughter never burden to mother.in ur conscious state u called me, maa.yeah u saying insake of medicines but I accepted ur my daughter..u stay few days after u recover u will go whenever u want..

Geet accepted and nei,ragini and geet went to Mumbai..neil is big industrialist..

Almost one weeks over..geet faint ..ragini checked her..geet is preganat..

Neil: geet beta, now u r not alone..tell me about ur husband name.i will solve ur every problem

Geet: please sir,don't talk about him..i don't want anyone..

Ragini gestured neil: don't ask anything..

Ragini: geet beta, drink this juice

Geet: no maa, I wont anything...

ragini: beta drink juice..u need take care ur health beta..u not single..

neil: take rest we will come later..both went out..

flashback end

Vicky: uncle ,suddenly u came to delhi..any important reasons

Neil: my daughters marriage beta with teasing tone

Maan and vicky : what with shouting voice

Vicky: khushi ka marriage with shocking face..

Maan relaxed he talked about khushi marriage..

Neil: no both of my daughters marriage with serious tone..i already selected grooms for them.even groom side accepted their marriage with my daughters

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Maan: sir what r saying..

Geet: dad, I already told I cannot marry with anyone..i love only my ma. stopped ...went inside

Ragini: neil stop ur drama..u hurt my daughter..she is crying with harsh voice

Neil: sry khurana but I want my daughter happiness insake only I talk about geet marriage..maan u realize she love u insanely ..dont lose her..she want life partner, she need her child father..she angry with u but not fogort u..every days she live in ur memory..how many times I saw her crying face..but she not realived anything u even she not tolerate we badmouthed about u..and in her delivery time she introduced yash is her friend to us but I doubt about yash take care of geet..i gathered every information about geet and khurana family..u r my daughter husband..i don't know what happened between u and geet .dont once again hurt her..dont think she have no one..she is my daughter..with possessive

Maan: no sir, I cannot lose her anymore..she is my life..i love her so much

Neil: I know yash told everything to me, insake only I allowed geet handle ur project..one more thing u both some misunderstanding between u and geet. U only clear ur misunderstanding..

Geet room

Flashback start

Geet touched her stomach:, iam preganant maanji..u become father..i want to inform him..he have right know about my preganacy..

Geet called maan number and but nt pickup maan phone

Geet: hello maanji

NT: I already told don't disturb us, why u called him..he is happy without u..u want hear ..

Maan voice: I love u jaan...

NT: I love u too maan..kissed maan chest

Nt far away from maan : u heared right, he love me..dont come to our life..line dead..

NT mind thought: stupid geet, maan drank state , he confess his love to geet but she think she confess me.i know she is very emotional. She never enter maan life...with evily smile.

Geet: why maanji u not love me..today also she is with u.i thought I share my wonderful happiness to u but u broke my happiness..i don't want u anymore..i live only for my child,,

Flashback end

Geet: Vicky said u love me..u live in guility life but I am not trust him.in ur every meeting u go with that devil NT..how I trust u. but I thought I give one chance ..come back to delhi..once again NT interpret.u never changed maanji...I already broke so much not anymore...iam not ur old geet..

Part end


Next part => part 14

Precap: holi celebration farmhouse...maaneet ,arshi,arhi romance and mainly manu naughtiness..opps dev also come to farmhouse..omg even devil also come..now devil trouble manu or our cutiepie trouble devil..yeah little past life about geet and gupta relationship and arshi college love story

Wait for next part

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Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Thank u so much😃😃😃
Maaneet FF-Marriage at first Sight




Mera Maasoom Patidev


Hey kaise pyaar hai









Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
Foe sometime Geet forget her anger
Evil destroy Maan & Geet relationship
He now they find the truth soon
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice part kalpi...
Neil , raginiloves geet like thier own...
Oops farmhouse..
Devil nt with dev...ho ho
Wilb waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update manu sweet devil waiting for next update

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