Maaneet ss-Mera Maasoom Patidev- Part 7/pg 111 (25-May-2018) - Page 20

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Hi guys thnks for liking and comments buddies.if any grammatical mistakes in this part plz ignore it..iamsry.

Part2

Geet come back to handa mansion with angry face.

Mohi: princess what happened why u angry ..u prince did anything with teasing tone

Geet: dad don't call him my prince..he's name is maan singh khurana..call him maan and he just my friend went inside to her room with angy face

Rano: she saying about our maan i means priya and raj bhai sahib ka beta maan..

Mohi: i think so..because maan is very nave and innocent.every time i meet him and savarti maaji she worried about maan future..she scared if maan bade paa family do anything to maan.

Rano: ha ji last weeks also i met savarti maaji she said about they torturing maan beta..i hope god will give bring them happiness soon

Mohi: they fate rano.every properties under maan name but his badepapa family enjoyed his money even though they torturing him.

Rano: time god every properties maan name otherwise they throw out them outside..

Mohi: u r right..rano hmmm time will be give solution for them ...i don't know why geet upset..u go to check her.if she is alright or not

Rano: Haaji ur princess only know angry..I don't know whose one she slapped today..

****

Geet room

Geet rolling her bed one side to Other side thinking deeply about juilee..

Geet: Whose juilee..if she is maan girlfriend..nahi...no she is not my maan gf.why u confusing ur self straightly ask to him..geet called maan house landline number..

Geet: Hello..can i speak to maan

Man: Really u want maan baba..with doubting voice

Geet: Why u have doubt , I want to speak maan..with harsh tone

Man:nahi madamji..maan baba with juilee..wait a few minutes I will call him

Geet eyes popped: In night time why juilee with him..

Maan: Hello whose ..is this ..heavy breathing voice..

Geet : What happened maan why u breathe fastly...u alright with worried tone

Maan: Oh geetji..juilee running behind me..i tried to stop her but she not leave me..she make me wet...with innocent voice

Geet: Kya wet...with eyes popped out..

Maan: Juilee..leave me...u twinkling me..i cannot control..

Geet: He cannot control...hey babaji..chi chi...geet put down phone harshly

Maan: Geetjj...I think line is disconnected..

Geet sleep away from her and she crushing maan in all languages.

Next day

Same place geet meet maan yesterday..

Geet angry mood sitting in temple pond and maan sit next to her

Geet angry glare to maan: Why u sit next with Me with angry tone

Maan: What happened geetji, u talk rudely with me..

Geet: yesterday what happened

Maan: geetji u have memeory loss problem..yesterday we meet ..we solved our fight and we become friends..suddenly u forgot everything..u need consult doctor geetji...with innocent face

Geet irriating more: I did not ask yesterday morning incident and yesterday night what happened with juliee and u

Maan: oh u ask about juilee..she so cute..in night time she not leave me single minutes..she always roaming behind me.

Geet: chi chi..babaji..i thought u r innocent but u r shamless.

Maan : iam shamlesss..geetji .. I wore proper dress why u saying iam shamless.with confused face

Geet hit her forehead: leave maan u not understand anything..iam going...geet get up..

Maan pulled geet hand..and geet sit in his lap insake of maan pull..

Geet :starring maan ...maan mermised her almond eyes..

Maan: geet ji u more heavy..plz standup to my lap..

Geet glare to maan and get up in his lap: ha iam heavy but ur juilee is not heavy right with taunting tone

Maan: ha..she is light weight..sometime she sleep above me..but I never sensed her weight.

Geet eyes popped : enough..i hate u..maan

Maan: what happen to geetji..why she angry with me..

Maan run behind geet and geet not stopped..finally maan come infront of her.

Maan: geetji, iam going to icecream parlour..u come with me with puppy face

Geet: iam not..u go with ur juilee

Maan: parlour owner not allow juilee inside. He scaring look at juilee

Geet: why she is any ghost..

Maan: nahi..because juilee licking in his foot..he not liked it..even iam aslo not liked her behaviour..

Geet: kya licking..she is a dog..she licking to everyone foot..with chuckled face

Maan: ha..she is my pet dog, juilee..

Geet: what u said juilee is ur pet dog..with shocking face..

Maan: why u shocked

Geet: then yesterday night..u have heavy breathe and said not control

Maan: juilee and mine playing ..she running behind me..so heavy breathe because of running and licking my foot..it make me twinkle..i cannot control my laughter..why u asking more question ..

Geet smiled brightly (mind): geet u r stupid..juilee is only dog..u imagined more about juilee and maan..iam sry maan..

Geet phoned ringed..and pickup call

Geet: hello bhai

Prem: geet where r u..iam in hospital , u forgot today we need go to hospital

Geet: iam sry..few minutes iam coming..wait for me and cut the call

Geet: maan u come with me..

Maan: where geetji

Geet: hospital maan

Maan nods his head negatively: no iam not coming hospital..iam scaring seeing injection..no iam not...with scaring face

Geet chuckled: u come with me..today..my bhabhi ka first sonar scan..i am exciting seeing my bhai baby first time PLz..

Maan: baby,I love baby..ok I will come but no injection ok..

Hospital

Maaneet enter hospital entrance..already prem and simar waiting for geet

Geet: sry bhabhi..iam late..

Prem: no problem..sweetheart..

Simar whispher geet hairs: oh he is ur prince ...with teasing tone

Geet blushed : bhabhi..bhai..he is maaan and maan he is my bhai and pyaari bhabhi..

Maan shakes his hand with prem and smiled to simar..

Maan: simar di..where is ur baby..geetji said first time time ur baby..where is ur baby..with innocent face

Simar: really he so nave and innocent..i like him so much..

Geet: maan shut up..

Nurse said ..u go inside..everyone went inside..

Doctor checked simar and scanning simar stomach through sonar scan equipment..simar and prem looking baby with moist eyes..geet exciting seeing baby dot.

Maan confused : why everyone so emotional

Geet: first time we seeing our baby maan

Maan: but I cannot see any baby..

Geet pointed to tv screen : this dot is baby maan

Maan: u lieing geetji..how dot become baby ..even baby also live in door room like in my childhood I live in dark room with sad face

Geet shocked hearing word and mind thought: what he live in dark room..i need talk with maan

Doctor: nahi beta..baby not in dark room..baby live in mother stomach..it is safest place more than outside..

Maan: oh..then ok but it is so dark..baby not scaring like iam scaring with innocent face

Doctor smiled: baby is brave so baby not scaring anyone..

Maan: ok..but..baby how to eat..

Geet: maan plz stop ur question bank..baby eat through simar bhabhi..so stop ur question today..

Doctor: Mr prem plz stay away from simar...it is good for baby and simar..u understand what iam saying..

Prem: yes doctor..with little embrass face..

Prem hold simar hand protectively and walking corridor..

Maan: geetji, u bhai is not good man

Geet: why u saying my bhai is not good with confused face

Maan: docor said..prem bhai stay away from simar di..but see prem bhai not leave simar di single minute alone..it is not good for baby and simar di..

Geet hits her forehead: hey babaji he make me pagal soon..maan doctor not said this closeness...

Maan: iam not understand..

Geet: hey babaji plz bachooo mujhe..how explain to him about passionate..i don't know who married u..that girl really poor one...god only help her..

Obviously that girl ur only geet..hehehe...

Geet: maan don't think more..lets go outside..

****

Maan enter km..with jolly face

Maan stop that place...with heavy voice

Maan legs shivering seeing that person..

Part end

Precap: geet meet someone.. maan jealous...maan crying face..

Previous part link -PART 1

part 3-pg 59


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superb update...
maan is highly innocent...
poor boy...wonder what all he suffered...
waiting for next part...
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Lovely update
Waiting for next update
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Great update
Aaww jealous Geet
Cute Maan question
Poor Maan is scared
Small update kyune diya
Want a big update soon
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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beautiful update loved it continue soon
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NYC update Deariee
Loved it!!
Geet was annoyed and was irritated while returning back to her home
She didn't reply happily to her parents greetings and questions
Her parents are in touch with Khurana's and knew maan well
They know abt maan's dark past too and also abt his innocent behavior
Geet was restless after knowing abt Julie
She rang up maan and wanted to ask abt Julie but his words made her irk
Geet's thoughts !! Lol !!
She was angry and jealously was oozing out from geet
!San cleared her MU regarding Julie
Julie was maan's pet dog !! Geet was embarrassed with her assumption
Maaneet along with premar went to Simar's sonography
Poor maan couldnt fathom to understand doctor's or any one's talk
Poor maan had to live his childhood in darkness and thought that every child lives in dark place
He is really naive and innocent
Did maan see his tortures!? His cruel Uncle r aunty !?
NYC precap!!
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Thanks for the pm
Will be waiting for the next update
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Cute update geet was angry and jealous by Julie geets parents came to know geets prince is maan they know how his uncle had tortured him when he was small but thank goodness the property were in his name or maan would have ended on streets they know how innocent and naive he is geet was angry at maan she was thinking Julie to be his gf turns out Julie is his pet dog geet laughed at her thinking geet took maan to hospital where he bhabhi was getting scan maans innocent questions shocked geet as it seems maan faced lots of tortures maans cute questions was making geet mad

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