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Thanks for liking and comments on previous parts.if any grammatical mistakes in this parts plz ignore it..iam  sry buddies.

Part 26

Celebration  continues..

Maan : mishty how u got my childhood photos..with eager face

Geet: oh ..iam not say source of ur photos

Maan: mishty,u r my darling right, till now i never saw my childhood photos how u got it...with cute face

Geet: ok  don't put ur face like that i cannot  with teasing tone ,papa gave me..even i asked him how he got ur photos but he didnot answer my question.

Maan: uncle ...with confused face..

Geet: maan leave it we will ask him later first we think about important matter..with serious face

Maan:what  important matter mishty with confused face

Geet: really u r  maan singh khurana or u r duplicate of MSK.with teasing tone

Maan: mishty  .with fake angry tone.

Geet: what i will do .we will separate till our proper marriage this is not important for u.with puppy face.

Maan: in ur sake only uncle got chance to separate us with little harsh tone.

Geet: i did it..everything because of u..that day u not said stay away from u . This time never come to  our life..

Maan: sry mishty with guilty face.

Geet hits her forhead : sry maan..forgot our painful past days..what we will do...

Geet phone ringed..and show phone to maan

Maan: my devil friend also come to separate my wife from me .ur bhai come to pickup u... go. To ur bhai..with irritate face..

Geet: don't angry with my sweet bhai..how much he care about me..he not my real brother but he love me like his own sister..iam lucky got precious and wonderful relationship in my life..

Maan: u worried about everyone but not me..with pout face

Geet pinched both cheeks:meri jaan l love u but  i need go now..papa waiting for me..

Maan: yeah ..with sad tone..

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Geet: today ur birthday don't sad..hug maan tightly. morning.i will come back..we will celebrate ur birthday and our anniversary  grandly with our family

Maaneet come to parking area of km and sanskar waiting in his car...

Maan knocked sanskar window and sanskar opened window door..

Maan: sir not come out...

Sanskar step down to car and hug maan and maan also repricprocte his hug

Sanskar: happy birthday buddy.

Maan: thank u stupid..

Sanskar: see geetu ,ur khadoos hubby call me stupid.

maan: now u also call me khadoos right..

geet: both stop ur kids fight..with chuckling face..maan switched on ur phone..everyone waiting for wishing u..maan noticed his phone switched off,yeah obviously his mishty plan everything. She don't want anyone disturb their lonely time..maan switched on the phone..everyone called one by one wish him

sanskar: its too late..geetu lets go maa waiting for us.

Maan : bye mishty..with smirked face..

Geet confused seeing his smirking face. Both sanskar and geet come back to farmhouse..

Geet sadly enter her room and she missing her jaan.she entered in washroom changed her night dress  sry not night dress maan shirt and slept in her bed.she hug herself  tightly at closed eyes..she sensed maan aroma near her..geet opened eyes scanning whole room but maan not here..

Geet: 24 hours u thinking only ur maan..u become more mad geet..

Geet closed her eyes  once again hugging herself  insake of hugging maan shirt

Mishty when i near why u hug my shirt mishty with slow voice.

Geet jerked hearing maan voice and look there and here but her maan not in room..

Geet turned to other side bed and maan in her bed

Geeet shout: maan

Geet : really maan in my bed or it is my dreams

Maan : this is not ur halluication mishty ..maan rolled geet ,now maan top to her and geet come under him

Maan remove geet hairs from her face and kissed forehead ..geet eyes open wided..

Geet: maan what r doing in farmhouse...with stammering voice.

Maan: i come to collect my things with causually said

Geet: what thing u talk about with confused face

Maan finger s pointed out geet

Geet: ur shirt no. iam not remove ur shirt..with clutched shirt tightly

Maan mind I pointed to u but u thought shirt mishty..now I play with u smirked face: no problem i will do myself..maan fingers touched shirt button slowly

Geet: stop plz..

Maan: why this is not ur...this is my shirt..i need it

Geet: u have more than 100 shirts in ur cupboard..go use it..why u want this shirt

Maan: other  shirt not give ur aroma..ur smell mishty sucking her ears


Maan kissing her eyes,cheeks ,chin ,neck  and maan hand opened shirt button open one by one..geet breathe heavily and heart beat  rapidly ..maan kiss her nape..geet moaned maan name..with closed eyes

Maan come to her toe..kissed her foot  and geet opened her eyes..maan wore payal in her foot..

Geet  get up: maan

Maan kissed above payal and looking geet with lovable face.

Geet: this is my anklet..i thought i missed in valpari..but u

Maan: In these months in ur anklet and ur memories make me alive mishty.ur anklet sound only make me sleep ..

Geet overwhemeled his love: why maan u love me this extent..i did not anything for u..

Maan: U dont know geet what u did for me..u bring back my smile. I thought maan not more iam only msk but she wake up natural feeling.great msk madly love with his wife..noone trust robot also love..I work like robot ..even without our family I will stay away from everyone.noone see my smiling face they faced my angry only..everyone scared me..i need this also otherwise I cannot manage khurana empire..

Geet: Maan...with moist eyes

Maan wiped her tears: U r maan not like ur tears..i can face anything in world but u r tears break me intp pieces ..u r my soul mishty..

Geet hugged maan tightly and playing his vest..iam sry I never cry maan ..my darling with me..i don't want anything in this world.

Maan: Really...with teasing tone but I want more from u...with naughty face

Geet blushed : if some one see ur in farmhouse even though u r my room, what they will think about u

Maan: no one think wrong..they think only msk love his wife so much.

Geet hug maan tightly: i love u maan

Maan: don't hug more tightly i will lose my control..then don't blame me..

Geet hided her face in his chest and kissed chest..with naughty face

Maan: mishty please.but geet kissing his chest continuously, maan rolled geet and come above geet ..maan hand pinned geet hand above her head.captured her lips.like lion prey for food.maaneet lost their kiss..maan not leave any single nectar of geet. Sherni also not leave him...

Maan head touched geet head both take breathing heavily.

Maan: i already told that don't do it.in ur naughtiness only ur lip get cut..

Maan wiped blood through his tongue..

Geet: u r so wild with pout face

Maan: iam not wild but our sr u will face my wild side..geet blushed

Maan peck in her lip once again :now..sleep other wise..i am not leave u tonight.

Geet placed her hand to maan chest and maan hold her waist ...maaneet slept...

Next day morning..

Janaki maa knocked geet room door: geet wake up beta.. geet open ur door

Geet  eyes opened widely hearing maa voice: maa ...maan wake up with slow voice

Maan pulled geet more close to his arms

Geet: maa, i will come down..u will go ..

Maa: pagal ladki..come soon we need go temple..

Geet: ji maa

Geet: maan wake up

Maan: iam not..with closed eyes

Geet: don't do any play..i need go to bath..

Maan: i will help u mishty...with naughty face

Geet: no thanks i will do myself..

Maan : ok i will not release my grip  with hold her tightly

Geet: maan plz maa will come back..u go back to mansion before anyone see u..

Maan:one condition, u give my morning kiss..otherwise iam not going anywhere..

Geet kissed his forehead : good morning maan..now go to km

Maan: iam not kid mishty..with stuborn face..pointed to his lips. Kiss karo..

Geet blushing face placed her lip to maan lips..that enough for him..he pulled geet more and geet hand automatically carring his hairs..both forgot their world..almost few minutes gone but both not separate each other..knock sound both separate..

Maan: who...with shouting voice.

Choti: di..why u shout like jiju...even in his hard voice..open the door

Geet glare to maan and maan sheeplish smile to geet

Geet:choti ,  ..few minutes.i am coming..u go..

Choti: come soon

Geet: go back to mansion..

Maan: i will help u bath and ur dressing..iam very good boy.i did not disturb u..with innocent face

Geet: i know what u will  help me..i will do myself..go out.. Maan pout look at geet..geet giggled

Maan kissed her cheeks..: i come back soon..

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Geet come down after freshup and everyone already ready in hall..

Pinky: How much time u take geet..i am hungry..maa said we first go temple after that only breakfast...with puppy face.

Maa: Pinky ur jiju birthday..u don't want pray for him

Pinky: Not like that. maa He is my best jiju..i will sacrifice even breakfast for him

Choti: Wow pinky itna bada scarifice..with teasing tone

Pinky nods her head innocently..

Papa: Beta lets go we already late..maaji also come temple..

Temple

Swara, Vicky,Adi and dadi arrived in temple.

Papa: Sry maaji we late.

Dadi: No problem raguram beta, lets go inside priest waiting fo us

Janakimaa: Maa where is maan beta..

Geet: He not trust god so he not come to temple..iam right dadi..

Dadi: My badi bahu always right..lets go inside..

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Farmhouse

Papa:maaji we will prepare maaneet Marriage soon

Dadi: Even I am also think same..beta

Everyone teasing look at geet and geet blushing..

Raguram: I thought we back to Chennai and marriage arrangement soon

Geet: When u and maa return back to Chennai..

Raguram carrying her hairs: U also come to us princess

Geet: Kya..with shocked face..

Swara, Adi,pinky, Vicky and sanskar laughing seeing her shocking face.

Sanskar: Geetu closed ur mouth otherwise any insect go inside to ur mouth

Geet closed her mouth and glare to everyone.

Geet: Papa..i have lot works in my office..

Maan enter in farm house..and have blessing from dadi, papa and maa

Papa: Maan we thought geet not come to office until ur marriage.what u said beta..u will manage her work right

Maan face fell down but think about her health: Ok uncle no problem..


Geet glared to maan and went  inside to kitchen..maan confused her glare other giggled seeing him

Maan: What happened why everyone laughing...

Swara: What we will do..bhai..now u face ur sherni..

Maan confused more: Tell me clearly yaar.

Swara  : Geet , maa and papa back to Chennai until ur marriage geet Bhabhi stay in chennai only.but geet Bhabhi denied in sake of office work but u said u no problem Bhabhi not come to office..with murmuring voice only hear to maan

Maan (mind):what I did..I cannot tolerate she stay in fm now she back to Chennai..no ways.let me think maan first u monofiy my sherni

Maan get up and his legs move to kitchen.but gang not leave him soon

Choti: Jiju where r u going.with teasing tone

Maan: I need water..so iam going..kitchen

Vicky: Bhai u want water right..already water in table..have it..bhai.

Maan glare to Vicky and Vicky not looking maan face..

Maan: No I take from kitchen

Sanskar: U want water or my sister with naughty face

Maan smirked face: Shona u forgive sanskar so soon..I thought u not forgive sanskar but u forgive him easily..u r maan Singh khurana sister this is ur angry...with dramatic tone

Swara angry to sanskar and sanskar puppy look at swara.

Sanskar: Mera dost please don't drop oil in fire..she already not talk with me properly..i am trying with all my effects with innocent face

Maan: Now I will go or u want my help

Sanskar fold his hand: U already did it everything.now u behind ur wife..noone stop. U

Maan winning smile to everyone and running to kitchen..

Geet noticed maan entering kitchen and she dropped vessel one by one..

Maan: Mishty...with gulped his saliva

Geet: What u said u have no problem I am not come to office with angry face..ok iam going back to Chennai..u will be happy and enjoy ur life.


Maan hug her back: Without u I never happy in my life..i will talk to uncle..u will not go anywhere..

Geet: Promise..

Maan: U r maan never stay away from his mishty..u r my life mishty..come I will tak with uncle..today my birthday ne never separate from my soul to me

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Maan: uncle plz u stay in delhi and I will arrange marriage arrangement in Chennai

Uncle: no beta this is my wish. I will do everything to my princess

maan: ok ...geet glare to maan..gang teasing maan state

maan: why we arrange marriage in delhi..u r alone do everything in Chennai.

Maa: ji why u teasing my son ..stop ur teasing section.

Maan: maa...with confused face

Maa: we r not go back with ur geet. U r geet stay in delhi.only.but we need go trupati temple.after geet is alright.. I wish go to temple with my whole family..so everyone pack our things..day after tomorrow.everyone is going to tamilnadu..after worship god..geet come back with u..but choti have exam..so she stay with us..we already talk about marriage priest...u  and geet  marriage date fixed to next months..so geet stay in farmhouse not km..u understand maan beta

Maaneet smiled: ji maa

Vicky mind: choti not come back to delhi..why iam bothering she not with me

This marriage never happen...voice from door steps

Every shifted to voice side..evil gang return back to maaneet life..

Few minutes before pammi, brij and sam returned back to km..km become silent..they thought they planned worked

Pammi: where is everyone

Servant: everyone went to sanskar sir farmhouse..

Pammi: sanskar farmhouse...something wrong..we need go to fh

Pammi, sam and brij...come farmhouse..everyone discussing maan and geet marriage..

Pammi: this marriage never happen..geet have no right to marry maan..only my neiece sam have right to marry maan..she have full right ..

Maan anger raised and dadi gestured stop maan..before dadi say anything...

Geet have full right pammi..more than anyone...with heavy voice from raguram papa..

Pammi: ji...bhai..but sam love maan so much..if she will die without maan,,

Raguram: maaji, u already selected sam for maan or maan love with sam

Dadi: no beta, maan already told he not marry with sam. He love only his geet

Maan nods his head

Pammi: but maaji..

Raguram: nonone stop my children marriage..u understand what iam saying with hard voice and one more thing..maan and geet already married..so stop ur drama session,

Pammi tapped her foot went outside..yeah brij and sam follow to her

Geet: papa i think aunty not accept me to her daughter in law

Raguram: don't wrry about her ..she have no one to u..u become happy next month u marriage date fixed..iam saying right maaji

Dadi: ha beta..u don't worry about pammi.. I will handle them..

Maan hold geet hand tightly...he assured that I always with u.

Maaneet smiled each other..

Part end

NEXT PART-    PART 27 -19


Precap: maaneet romance moments..vicky confused about choti relationship,evil gang plan...swasan love story

 

 

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Thank you for the long comment awesome buddy
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Fabulous update dear, loved maaneet is romance,  hope  that  devil gang didn't  harm maaneet 
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Lovely update
Waiting for next update
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Nice update 
Aww mg Sean was really cute
Uff evil gang is back 
Hope shaadi main koi problem na hoo 
Agar howi na phir dheak Lena 
Thanks for PM
Update soon 
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Happy birthday Deariee
Thanks for the treat !!
NYC update dear
Loved it to the core !!
Maaneet romance were cute and loved their relationship
Maan finally forgave Geet for her deeds 
Geet's hardwork finally gave fruitful fruits 
Maan entered geet's room to spend time with her and was being romantic too
Maan as turned fully into naughty and teasing person 
Geet wanted to stay with maan instead of going away from him for the Marriage rituals and preparation
Unknown to the fact he agreed to geet's dad's demand 
The evil group were back from their trip
Ram made Pam shut her mouth ( my guess was correct it was ram ) and asked other's to prepare for maaneet marriage!!!!
Is Maan geet's perfect suitor !? Athai paiyan and geet's mama !?
Is Anju maan's athai !?
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Thanks for the pm
Will be waiting for the next update