Maaneet Journey FF-Marriage at First Sight -THREAD 4 link page 1 - Page 66

Thanks for liking and comments .if any grammatical and spelling mistakes in this part ..i am sorry buddies..sorry for late update ..dont worry my punishment also there.

Note : I know everyone shocked that anju's maan mom..yes, anju and maan sharing mother and son relation...plz bear it..she look like geet but this is not reborn story ..there is no crossconnection between maaneet life ..she is gayathri not geet..dont thinking she is geet..

I ask one question, .in many stories I read that maaneet children look like them..u accepted right because of gene..same like gayathri and geet come from same family.why u not think geet look like gayathri because of gene.if I say anything wrong..i am sorry..i accept truly first hestitate to write, anju s maan mom but I thought its not wrong, I do it. I hope u all understand me.

Yes ,Maaneet r cousin, in south side there is no problem , marry with cousin but they never marry with brothers and sister relation .this is sin for our culture .in MFS maaneet r cousin but they r not brother and sister relationship..geet is maan mom s brother daughter..they r not siblings.i think u all understand..if u have any doubt , plz tell me and I try to clear ur every doubt

Last part, my lovely dearies said that I look like movie...I hope my MFS not flop movie..😆😆😆

I want ask one more question also guys..my stories is going to boring guys, why most of dearies left my stories..why I got less likes & comment ,compare to previous thread.i know very well I am not crispy writer..i am dragging everything. My whole heartly I saying, I read ur each comments, how much I got happiness , I cannot express..after I read ur comments, I confused then why more person left my thread..i know that I am not satisy everyone..but I really confuse..plz tell me, if u want I need change anything in my writing skills.

Opps I also talk in emotional ways ,guys its not suitable for me.. but some time I am also hurts ..

My words hurt u ,I am extremely sorry..plz forgive ur friend.

THANK U

With love

Ana/ Maaneetfavo

(don't shock ..i got one more name , my dear friend chosed for me.she select my name with so much love , I love my new name also..copyrights to ANU5 😉)

PART 31

Oldman: no, iam not allow her with u..with angry voice

Maan: no one stop Msk with angry tone..he lose his self control totally

Oldman: who infront of talking u know ?

Maan: i know very well, who r u..u r Mahendravarman Chakravarthy, pointed out oldlady she is Mrs sivagami mahendravarman chakravathy.

Maan eyes pointed geet parents: they r Raguram varman chakravarthy and Mrs janaki raguram varman chakravarthy.

Maan pickup anju photo from raguram hand and carrying her face : she is princess of varman chakravarthy kingdom.

Gayathri anjalidevi varman chakravarthy .

maan nods his head negatively: not varman chakravathy she is gayathri anjalidevi ranapratap singh khurana..my mother with tearing flowing in his cheeks

Janaki and raguram nods their head as accept maan saying everything truth..

Masti gang confused look at elders and geet look maan with worried face.

Dadi silently crying seeing maan state..maan come infront of dadi..

Maan: dadi, why u hide everything from me with angry but more pain in his voice.

Dadi: maan beta, I hided everything because urs good life only with guilty voice

Maan: my good u did it everything or u hide ur son sin for what he did with my maa with taunting tone.

Dadi: beta..with painful face.

Maan signed dadi to stop : don't talk anything ..i know everything..with painful voice.

Geet: maan, what happening yaar with slow voice.

Sanskar : ha, maan what going on, why u rudely talk with dadi, pointed at photo frame, she is ur mother with confused face.

Maan: yes, she is my mother and raguram uncle is my materal uncle.

Gang : what with shocked face.

Geet : maan with shocking face.

Maan placed anju photo in bed and geet look at anju frame as she got shocked ..she look like her..geet pickup photo in her hand

Geet :why she look like me with shocking face.

Raguram lighly smile: she is ur aunty /bua , my princess , my little sister.

Geet:but u never said we have relations in pollachi..i have grand parents, aunties , uncles, cousin ..why papa u hided everything from us with shocked face

Raguram: I don't want them in my life time..they snatched my princess from me..i love her more than anything..she is my soul ,she is my angel..with painful voice.

Choti: I did not understand..that day mom said anjuji is angel for our family.she look like geet di but u never said she is our aunty with confused face.

Maan held geet hand : u never hate me right with worried face.

Geet : I never go away from u , I never hate my maan..

Vicky: I really confused , why badimaa look like geet bhabhi and badimaa parnents is south Indian means how she married to our dad..how she become to khurana. Why dadi hided everything from us.

Maan: Vicky, dadi hided everything because she want save her son from his own son ( maan) hatness .iam right dadi.

Dadi head bow down to ground , Vicky confused ofcourse others also

Vicky: why u hate our dad after know about badimaa

Maan: because our dad no her son or say great ranapratap singh khurana killed my maa with tears flowing in eyes..

Gang look at maan with shocked face

Dadi: no maan beta, u dad not killed my gayathri, my baburani

Maan: yes, he not killed her body through knife but he killed her heart through his words, he snatched her son from his wife.he blaming my mom to cheap lady .its not true dadi with angry face

Dadi nods her head : but rana love ur mom so much.

Maan: wow, love ..what love u talk about ..if he really love my mom, he never doubt her character. He never trust my mom cheated him.he never throw out her in ownhouse even at midnight .even in her dead bed time also he never come to see her in last breathe.she want see her child face in her last time but he did not fulifil her last wish also with painful voice.

Dadi crying , geet eyes tears flowing in her eyes seeing maan broken state..

Raguram: maan

Maan: uncle, u also hide it everything from me with painful voice.

Raguram: sorry, I did not save her..she died because of my helpness , I am not good brother

Maan: no uncle, u r good brother, u only support her everytime. U r most respected person in my maa life .

Mahendra ( grandpa): u understand now,why I hate khurana with angry face.

Maan smiled meekly: u not deserve saying my maa to ur princess.in ur ego, status snatched my mom life.

Mahendra: if ur father not come to my place , my anju life ..my princess never died in her young age with harsh voice.

Raguram: Ayya/babuji..please don't talk anything now with angry voice

Maan: why uncle u control nanaji , till now he did not accept his mistake..

Geet: maan ,.he is elder to us.dont shout like that with slow voice

Maan: u don't know geet, what all did my anju maa.

Geet : papa, plz tell me clearly about everything, we r not kids..we r adults.we understand everything..

Raguram , janaki and dadi narrator of past life other silent speclator.

Raguram : maan, my anju is angel of our family..she is princess of varman chakaravarthy kingdom.

Maan sit next to geet and held her hand tightly and geet sensed his fear as she held his hand while assured I always with u..youngster settled down to ground near sofa ,elders ( dadi, janaki , raguram )sit in sofa .sivagami sit next to geet and mahendra sit in his rocking chairs .

Vicky: kingdom with confused face.

Raguram: yes, kingdom, varman chakaravathy empire. Before british rule our old generation people ruled south side.. after India got freedom , india become democractic country..if india not democractic county ,now ( look at maaneet) u become prince and princess..

Choti: its means I am also princess with surprised face.

Janaki: yes, u also princess insake only ur papa call u all to princess not with ur names.

Choti: cool

Sanskar: choti, shut ur mouth..choti nods her head with pout face.

Raguram: I am elder child of my family..my father name is Mahendra varman chakravarthy and my mother is sivagami varman chakravarthy.

Swara: its means papa, grandpa and grand maa..they r king and queen of varman chakravathy and u r prince of family.

Raguram smiled: yes , but they r not ruled our country..every people respect them like king and queen.

Pinky: papa, why u call bua to anju ..she name is gayathri right.

Janaki: because of ur crazy father, we call her to anju.

Raguram fake glare to janu: I call her to anju only with stubborn voice

Flashback starts

Narrator: Raguram

Before 45 yrs ago

My princess born in our empire..that day has festival day our life , village people, my family everyone happy got little princess .Almost last three generation there is no girl child born in empire. So she is precious for us. She live like princess . she born in gold spoon..everyone pampering her so much mainly she is my little sis..i love her so much. I am very possessive about my princess..i never share her with my siblings. She also silent in my hand only if my brothers tried held her, she crying so much..her name cermenoy function grandly we arranged .i already selected her name to anjali but in her birth kundali not suited to name not start with A letter.

Sivagami: raguram understand, we did not put anjali name to princess.we only select to starting G name .

Lakshmi : sivagami , he wish to put her name, why u denied his wish

Sivagami: but maa..

Lakshmi placed little baby in lap: ok I tell my princess name Gayathri anjali devi varman chakravathy. Now ram , u r happy right.

Sivagami smiled , ram jumping insake of happiness.

Character Sketch

Mahendra varman chakravathy: he is 70 yrs old ( present life) father of anjali..he is vert strict , he give more important to his status , ego and pride.

Sivagami varman chakravathy: she is 65 yrs old ( present life )mother of anjali , she is lovely lady..she never against her husband word.

Lakshmi varman chakravarthy: she is 80 yrs old ( present life ) she is widow. Childhood marriage , in her 14^th yrs, her husband died ..her husband is mahendra s father brother..it means she is chotimaa of mahendra and grandma of anjali.but her age difference between to mahendra and her only 10 yrs .everyone respect her. She is elder of varman chackravathy.

Raguram chakravarthy : he is 50 yrs old ( present life).he is self respect person and love his anju so much..he treated her like she is her first child. Unfortunately she died in her 20 yrs old

Janaki raguram chakravarthy: she is 48 yrs old. She such sweet caring person to everyone

Sivaram chakravarthy : he is 48 yrs old ( present life ) he is second brother of anju .he never against his father wish. Little bit angry person like his father

Radha chakravarthy: she is 46 yrs old..wife of sivaram..she is lovable lady. Love her family

Jairam chakravarthy: he is 47 yrs old ..he love his sibling but never raise his voice infront of elders.

Madhura chakravathy: she is 45 yrs old ..she also lovely person to her family.

Not but least...main character of MFS

Gayathri anjali Varman Chakravarthy: she so nave , kind person..she never angry with anyone..she love everyone unconditionally.she is angel of varman charavarthy family..god loves angel so god brought her to heaven so soon she died in her 20 yrs old..yes she died in 20 yrs old.

( After I choose maaneet sibling characters..not now..i already chose more members.)

Years also passed like cloud moves ..Now Princess age is teenage ..she just 16 yrs old, raguram age 21 yrs old, siva is 19 yrs, jai is 18 yrs age..

They r royal but everyone studied very well..everyone know more languages . raguram has self respect man, so he joined government office..his dad not accept his wish but lakshmi insist he allow do their job.other sibling working their fields and factories. Raguram and janaki marriage fixed .janaki come from good family..everyone happily accept janaki to elder daughter in law.

Engagement day.

First time, I meet Ranapratap singh khurana, that day we don't know that he change our life to 360 degree..one of my friend introduced him with me..i am happily welcome him.but my father not like him because he is north Indian , other caste, he is very jovial person and carefree nature. My anju happy because her favourite brother marriage with favourite girl ( janaki)..janaki and anju very close friends..janaki is elder to anju..but both sharing everything.anju respected janaki like her elder sister..family chose janaki for me.my anju happy for us.

Anju: brother, iam very happy today..today u and janu anni/bhabhi engagement.

Raguram: u happy right , I become happy.

Anju smirked face: don't say bhai, u r not like janu bhabhi

Raguram smiled: no , I respected my parents decision..to hide his blush in straight face.

Anju: u blushing bhai.

Raguram: no iam not with fake angry face

Anju: I am going saw to bhabhi, u r blushing thinking about her ..run out to outside..and raguram run behind her.

Anju collided with strong person and both sliped to ground..man look at her innocent face ..she so cute as held his shirt tightly and her eyes closed .

Raguram : anju

Anju open her eyes and see handsome man under her.she cheeks become red automatically..first time other feel other man touch except her family mens.she have goose bumps in her body..she got up quickly and adjust her dress..man also stand up from ground

Raguram look at man: who r u..i did see it before..

Raguram friend : ram, he is my friend, he come for his vacation our place..

Raguram smiled to man: u r name

Man: Ranapratap singh khurana give shaken to raguram.

Rana: glad to meet u sir.

Raguram: don't call me sir, u also same age like me..call me ram or raguram.

Rana: oh thanks ram, u call me Rana.

Raguram: she is my anju..opps sorry gayathri anjalidevi

Rana look at Anju with dreamy way and anju face fell down because of blush.

Anju feld her hand and said : welcome to our palace..rana also feld his hand in front of her

Rana: thanks with naughty face

Anju : brother,I am going inside

Raguram nods his head and anju went inside immediately..rana smiled seeing her nature.

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Raguram: u speak very well in tamil language..u r north Indian right.

Rana: u also speak hindi language with teasing tone

Raguram: oh rana, because our old generation wish we learn more language so we follow their wish like rules Rana: nothing ram,I just teasing, my mom love learn other laungauge so I learn tamil language from her.

Raguram: oh, how many days u stay in south india.

Ram: may be 2 or 3 months..i love this place..i thought I stay there in my life time ( remembering anju face)

Raguram look at youngsters: that time I don't know . he married only my princess with painful voice.

Youngter more involved hearing past life.

Raguram : I felt that he is good person..but why he suddenly changed his activities..they live happily married life .my own eyes saw their happy family, he pampered her more than me..he love her so much.why u suddenly he changed with shout voice..why ..

Janaki touched his shoulder : ji .with painful voice

Janaki continues past story.

Janu: I am happy because of my marriage fixed with best man in our village.

Youngsters look at janumaa with surprised face .she blushing ..

Choti: maa, u r blushing like anju bua said papa also blushing like thought about u.

Vicky: hey moti shut up..

Geet: both shout ur mouth..how anju bua and rana uncle got married..why grandpa hurt them..she is princess for everyone then why everyone. hurt her.

Janu: her fate not leave her.. After next months, me and ur papa marriage finished..rana bhai friendly with everyone..i call him to anna/bhai only.he also treat like I am his sister..because he have no sibling..he is single child in his family..so he pampered person.but ur grandpa, uncles( raguram brothers) not like him ,initial of days. They r not wrong because of he freely talk with everyone..he open minded person so they not like that nature. We don't know anything about anju and rana love matter.. both secretly feeling with each other..she shared everything with me but she hide first love with me.

ur grandpa friend asked anju hand to his son for marriage..everyone happily accept because theyalso follow our tradition, royals and good friend of ur grandpa..but ur papa not accept marriage because anju just 16 yrs only..ur grandpa not accept ur papa wish..its common for village . ur grandma married ur grandpa in her 14 yrs old. Next years she give birth ur papa..she just 15 yrs only that time..so everyone accept marriage porposal.

Temple.

I went to temple and I never thought I got shocking news in temple

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PART 32

Temple.

I went to temple and I never thought I got shocking news in temple

Anju head placed in rana bhai shoulder and he held her tightly .anju crying so much..he tried console her. I felt that I got lighting in my head

Anju: ayya/papa , he fixed my marriage. I don't want marry with anyone except u.

Rana: stop crying, I will talk with ur bhai.he accept me for ur groom.

He never accept ..with angry

Anju look at janu: bhabhi /Anni.. with scared face.

Rana: janu..with guilty voice.

Janu grabbed anju hand and drag out to temple but rana come infront of them.

Rana: janu, plz listen to me once with pleasing tone

Janu showing her hand to rana: No, I thought u r my brother..so I do not want ur die through my husband and brother in law hand..plz forgot her ..go to ur place with warning tone ..janu dragged anju went out.

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Palace, anju room.

Janu grabbed anju hand : u know what u did it..with angry voice.

Anju tears flowing in her cheeks : bhabhi , plz forgive me..i love him so much.. I cannot live without him.

Janu: shutup ..outside what going on , u know very well.they r selecting jewels and sarees for ur engagement.. but what u did it..u want ur papa and ur brother bow down infront groom people..forgot him..

Sivagami enter in anju room and seeing her crying face.

Sivaganmi: anjumaa, what happen why u crying .

Janu: oh maa, nothing else she thinking after marriage she will go to mil house ..so she miss everyone na.

Sivagami smiled: every women go out to our mother place to mother in law ..this is our fate.

Janu eyes guestered and wiping ur tears.

Mahendra side hug to anju and anju placed her head to mahendra chest: iam not going anywhere , I don't want this marriage.

Mahendra: anjumaa, we also want u want go away from us..i will talk with groom family..after ur marriage both stay in our palace. U not go away from us.

Anju sobbed heavily..and raguram cupped her cheeks.

Raguram: oh my princess don't cry..u don't want this marriage, I will stop .anju look at raguram face with shocking expression

Sivaram: brother, u never changed , this is her life matter..dont pamper in her marriage..

Mahendra: siva saying right. Anjumaa, groom very good person..he will take care u very well..dont think a more.come select ur jewels maa

Sivgammi: ur papa and ur r three brothers select best jewelist , they bring new design..u chose whatever u want.

Jairam: why she chose maa..every jewelleries for her only. She take everything.

Raguram: I give one gift for ur engagement.

Anju look at raguram and raguram said show ur hand.

Raguram placed property papers in her hand and anju open property papers.

Raguram : I bought river side land in ur name..

Mahendra : our whole property ka real owner her only , why u buy land for her with taunting tone

Lakshmi : because he bought that land by his own salary..yes, its true whole property under name also as she have full right but everything come from our elders workhard .u all maintain them .

Raguram side hug to lakshmi: yes, lakshu ur right.

Mahendra angry glare to raguram and went out .

Lakshmi: shut ur mouth otherwise mahe become angry . princess take rest , tomorrow ur engagement..everyone go out..leave her alone.

Janumaa: no maa, I stay with her

Lakshmi: dil, don't worry about her..she is not kid.she take care herself.

Everyone went off and anju layed her bed in crying so much.

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Next day

Janu not leave her alone in single sec.

Anju: I don't want this marriage bhabhi..plz say to bhai..plz stop this marriage

Janu cupped her cheeks: plz understand, if they know about ur love..they will kill u and rana bhai.. I don't want lose both of u. janu make ready in grand dress and heavy jewels ..she look like princess.

Brothers and elders enter in anju room. Everyone mermised her seeing in bridal dress.

Lakshmi: sivagami, first remove evil sign from my princess..she more beautiful..noone evil eyes touch with her.

Sivagami: yes maa .

Anju kneel down in front of elders and take blessing from them.

Mahendra kissed her forehand : god bless u anjumaa.

Man: groom person everyone came

Mahendra : ram, siva, jai go welcome them ..look at janu .u arrange cooldrinks for them..everyone nods their head .everyone left except anju ..

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Engagement time

Priest: bring bride to mandap.

Sivagami said janu : janu, go bring her to mandap..

Everyone waiting for bride , but janu come out with empty hand with nervous face.

Janu murmuring to sivagami ear and her smile vanished in air.

Sivagami dragged to janu to lonely place: u correctly search everyplace..where she went ..now what I am saying to ur ayya/papa ..

One lady heared their talk and straightly go groom father and break matter to him.

Groomfather anger raised shout : mahendra

Mahendra: why u shout, few minutes, they bring her down.

Groom father: ur daughter never come out to mandap..she run out to ur palace with anyone.

Mahendra shout: what u said, my daughter never do that cheap act

Grrom father: hmm, then call ur daughter to mandap

Raguram: uncle mind ur words..she not like u thinking..we never growup her that ways with angry voice.

Groom father: then ask ur maa and ur wife , where is ur sister.

Raguram: janaki..with angry voice.

Janaki come infront of raguram with scared face.

Raguram: where is anju ..

Janaki : oh..

Raguram: I am asking u

Janaki: ji she not in palace..raguram tight slap to janu face.

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FB end

Janaki : first time ur papa slapped me with moist eyes.

Pinky: papa slapped u with shooking face.

Raguram held her hand: sorry janu

Janumaa: why u asking sorry..i know ur state that day..u angry with urself..everyone scolded our anju , u cannot tolerate that frustration only u slap me.

Janumaa: that is my first and last slap by ur papa..after that he never slap me in our life time

Sanskar: so anju bua went to Rana uncle right.

FB starts

Groom family went out to palace..our family broken down so much.once side worried about anju.

Rana bring anju in his arms and she already faints in rana arms and both dress soaked in water..

Lakshmi : what happened to her..

Rana placed her to sofa and lakshmi patted her cheeks .sivagami crying seeing her state.

Raguram: rana , what happened to her.

Rana: oh she jumped in well..i saved her..nothing few minutes, she got conscious

Raguram cupped anju cheeks : princess,wake up with worried voice.

Sivaram : rana, how u reached that place correctly.

Anju open her eyes : I went for his place with slow voice.

Jai ram: why with rude voice

Anju: because we both love with each other with slow voice

Mahendra slapped her and raguran closed his palm tightly.

Mahendra: how dare u, u say infront me , u love him .(look at sivaram ) kill him with angry voice.

Sivaram tried to beat rana but anju come between of rana and sivaram.

Sivaram: stay away anju with angry voice.

Anju: plz bhai, I love him.

Sivaran: shut ur mouth, he not deserve to alive .

Anju wiped her tears: then kill me too ith crying voice

Sivaram: if u not stay away from him , I will do it also .

Raguram disgust look at sivaram and mahendra proud look at his son.

Lakshmi: siva, what r u saying..she is our princess with crying voice.

Mahendra: no maa, not anymore..she is not my maa..she died for us.

Sivaram push anju to ground and grabbed rana shirt : because of u , I said my princess this word ..i hate u ..i will kill u through my own hand.sivaram beat him and rana accept his every punch.

Anju : bhai, stop it..if u never stopped na..i will kill myself ..held knife in her hand to wrist..sivaram continuously beating ..anju cut her wrist through knife.

Rana pushed sivaram to ground and held her in his arms

Rana: stupid, what r u doing and tried stop blood ..

Sivaram : stay away from her..sivaram beat rana once again.

Anju : bhai, stop it.why u behave like animal with painful voice.

Sivaram: ur not my innocent princess..he changed u.

Mahendra : siva, kill him both.i don't see their face anymore.

Raguram shout : stop it..

Sivaram: bhai with angry voice

Raguram: shut ur mouth, siva..rana get out my palace..now..rana look at anju face..she nods her head neagttively..

Rana: iam going ram..his legs move out

Raguram: stop, why r u going alone.take with her also..she not anymore our princess.

Mahendra: ram with angry face.

Raguram: u already said right, she died for us now what happen

Mahendra numb and siva : bhai, u r not crazy right.

Raguram: papa already she died for us.

Anju: bhai with crying face.

Raguram angry glare to anju: not one more word from ur mouth, u love him right. U want die for him right..just get lost my palace..u r not my sister anymore.

Rana: ram, plz listen

Raguram: u too , get lost both of u otherwise I don't know what I will do with angry face.

RANA Take long breathe : anju ,removes ur every jewels , give to ur family members.

Anju removes her jewels and handover to janu..janu crying , maa, laksmi patti crying..

FB ends

Janumaa: she went away from our life not in her empty hand..she went away with our smile..our palace become death happen place .

Janumaa : no one talk with anyone..

Swara : dadi, r u accept mom and dad marriage ?

Dadi : I accept anju my whole heartilybecause of ur dad, everytime he called me , he just talk about ur anjumaa only..i liked her when I know about my rana say I love anju. But ur grandpa never accept anju to our dil.

Dadi: ur dad married with ur anjumaa, he called me , I got shocked ..i slowly reveal truth infront of ur grandpa..he got angry..next flight we reached pollachi.

FB starts

Savitri/dadi : Rana beta, why u take sudden decision..

Amarnath singh khurana father of rana and business man

Amar: what u did ..we already fixed ur marriage to my friend daughter pammi..but u married to south Indian girl.

Savi: plz calm down..now both r married ..lets be come with us with slow voice.

Amar: savitri , don't support him , I cannot accept her to my dil.

Savi: she is ggood girl for rana..both r made for each other.

Amar: u shut ur mouth..u come with us or not

Rana: no dad, she trust me , I never leave her hand till my last breathe.

Amar: ok fine, u stay in this place. We r going .u forgot that u have parents

Anju come infront of Amar and fold her hand: u r elder us, if u want, I go away from life..i will go from his life..i know very well, how to feel our family hurt us with crying voice.

Rana: dad, plz ..

Amar: ok u both stay in this place..u will take care our coimbatore factories and u both stay in our farmhouse.but one condition, I feel that she is best for my house , then only u both come to delhi.she never enter my khurana mansion..we both come to Coimbatore..whennever u want see us and our company u r just employee not owner..u got salary only..u manage ur house in ur salary itself..

Rana: ok , I accept ur condition, dad.

Amar: savirti, I am waiting ouside , come soon.

Savi: uff, u rfather atleast accept this much. I thought he throw out u in my life.

Rana side hug to Savi: mom, u r with me , no one defeat me.u r my super woman.

Anju lightly smiled and savi carring anju cheeks: take care ur self.i want little rana soon ..anju blushed hearing about child and rana smirked look at anju...

Savi: rana beta, take care my bahu..

Anju and rana waving bye to Amar and savi

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FB end

Vicky: janumaa, None talk with anjumaa

Janumaa:not everyone with naughty smile.

Raguram: ur janumaa , without my permission , she talk with her secretly but no one know about this ..one day she caught through my eyes.

Sanskar: really maa

Janumaa: oh, she is my sister more than my SIL..so I worried about her so I take with her secretly in temple but ur eagle eyes papa found out one day..

Youngsters giggled and maan got little smile as geet also smiled seeing maan smile.

FB starts

After three months passed , everyone back to normal life but no one dare talk about anju in palace..ladies cried thinking about anju and gents rudely face to everyone.

Temple

Anju: bhabhi, how is my dad, mom and brothers.

Janu: everyone good ,say what about u..

Anju : he take care me so much..he spend more time with me and anju blushing..

Janu:really with surprised face. Anju nods her head with blushing face.

Janu hugged anju with happy face opps her face to horror one.. raguram standing infront of her.

Raguram angry glaze to janu ..walk out immediately..anju face fell down.

Janu: I will talk with him..dont sad anju..take care..i meet u later.

Anju: ram brother never forgive me right.

Janu cupped her cheeks : not like that. U know him very well more than me..he love u but he little angry with u.

Anju: hmmm

Janu : u go home safely right.

Anju: yes bhabhi..i go myself.first u go talk with bhai.

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Palace, raguram room

Raguram sitting in bed with angry face.

Janu silently enter in her room and look at ram face..

Janu: god plz save me with murmuring voice.

Raguram angry glare to janu and janu give sheepish smile to raguram.

Janu : oh, I am..

Raguram hand gesture to stop: who I am for u..why u give explanation..

Janu: plz listen me ..

Raguram angry voice: what I want l isten from u..u met & talk with her without our family permission even u don't ask me also .so she is more important than our family reputation

Janu : she is preganant.

Raguram : so what ..After sec realize ..what u said

Janu : our anju pregnant, ur princess become mother soon.

Raguram smiled : really..

Janu nods her head with moist eyes: I cannot belive my anju is pregnant.

Raguram sad face: yes, she is pregnant..but she stay away from our family.

Janu: plz u talk with Ayya/papa..he accept our anju..now she need her family..

Raguram: no he not accept her till his last breathe..

Janu: u don't mind , I meet her like I did before with hestitate voice.

Raguram: u meet her but first ask permission from elders and then meet her daily with smirked face.janu pout

Lakshmi: I give u permission to meet my princess.

Raguram look at door : lakshu, u .

Lakshmi enter their room:yes ..i give permission to meet my princess with smirked look at raguram

Raguram: if papa know about this, he get more angry.

Lakshmi: when ur papa got less angry, I will handle him..he is my son..

Raguram : ufff..ok

Lakshmi: janumaa, u saying truth, my anju pergant (janu nods her head ) then come I prepare her foods, pickles items give to her .

Janumaa smiled and both went to kitchen.

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Fb end

Choti: so forgive his princess because she become mother right.

Janumaa: yes, u rpapa how much got happy but not show in his face,he want meet her princess but his ego not accept his defeat

Vicky: dadi, how u felt , dad become father..with eager tone.

Dadi: u know how much got happy in my life , I cannot express my happiness..rana is only child for me and grandpa.my first grandchild coming soon our life means our life become fulfil but ur grandpa not show his happiness outside but he really happy for he got heir of khurana family.

Sanskar: maa, grandpa forgive anjumaa or not..

Janu sad lightly : no ayya never forgive anju till her death with moist eyes..my anju died ..she not any more with crying voice.

Youngster eyes tears moist in their eyes and maaneet eyes flowing seeing janu maa broken state.

Sanskar: maa, what happen why anju bua died with sad voice

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Sanskar: maa, grandpa forgive anjumaa or not..

Janu sad lightly : no ayya/babuji never forgive anju till her death with moist eyes..my anju died ..she not anymore with crying voice.

Youngster tears moist in their eyes and maaneet eyes flowing seeing janu maa broken state.

Sanskar: maa, what happen why anju bua died with pain voice

Raguram : everything going to normal ways .papa not forgive anju. many time anju tried meet and talk with papa..but he insult her infront of everyone but she never take his words to her heart.

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FB starts

Now Anju has 6 months pregnant, her stomach showing little bump..she demanding more to rana..he never denied her wish anything. Daily janu visit temple and talk with her..she prepare her favourite food and give her secretly..she got everything from rana and janu. but she carving for parents warmth and brothers pampering..she missed them so much.

Relative marriage function..

Anju whole family come to marriage , anju and rana also come for marriage..she want talk with her family.

Anju: ji, my family members came ..with smiling face.

Rana: anju tried to understand , they not accept us..plz control urself with concern voice

Anju: I am going talk with them..i don't mind they talk with me or not..alteast I speak with them with puppy face.

Rana: ufff..ok but be careful..i cannot tolerate anyone insult u with little angry voice.

Anju : thanks

Anju come to family side..ladies give smile to anju and gents rude angry face to anju mainly anju father.

Anju: Ayya with moist eyes ( look at sivagami) Maa..

Sivagami eyes tears flowing and her body become numb.

Janu smiled and gesture to anju don't cry...

Anju: papa,plz forgive me ..i am happy really, I am happy.

Mahendra: who r u..why u talk with me with rude voice

Anju: I am ur daughter ..ur princess.

Mahendra: my princess died before 7 months ago.i don't know u..i did not saw ur face in my lifetime with disgusting face.

Anju tears flowing in her cheeks : papa..

Mahendra: just go away from this place..otherwise they hold ur neck as throw out..with angry face.

Anju turn back and her head spinning ..her leg twist opps her stomach hit to table ..time fours arms held her as before hit table..anju look at two person.

Anju: Brother , Ranaji..

Rana held her shoulder and rana held her stomach before hit to table.

Anju stand in properly and rana held her protectively and raguram remove his hand from her .

Rana: how many times , I told u that take care urself with angry voice.

Raguram angry glaze to raguram because he scold his princess infront of him.

Rana shout his mouth seeing his angry glare ..

Mahendra: ram come, we need go out with angry voice..

Raguram nods his head with heavy heartily move from this place..he worried about princess health.

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FB end

Janumaa: that night ur papa hell angry with rana bhai with giggling face.

Raguram: my angry right , how dare, he scold her infront of me with angry face.

Swara: papa ( raguram), possessive brother like maan bhai with teasing tone. Everyone smiled.

Pinky: papa, when u talk with anjumaa

Janumaa: because of our maanu , ur papa talk with his princess with smile face.

Swara: maanu with confused face oh ..maan bhai.

Dadi: ur anjumaa, call ur maan bhai to maanu only..she love her child in her womb itself..everytime ur dad complaint to me, she not care about him..she more talk with her baby as well as talk with her womb.

Choti: so anju bua strucked with both possessive person.one is dad and other one is rana uncle.

Janumaa: yes beta, u said right.

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FB starts.

Anju: u saw it ranaji..my brother protect me before I hit to ground with proud voice.

Rana: oh madam I am also held u..

Anju: no ranaji, u never held me , u just held my stomach to me..u want ur child safety only but my bhai first held me..u give more important to ur son but my bhai have important only me with proudly said.

Rana: ok madamji, u bhai only love u not me with fake angry face.

Anju cupped his cheeks : u r so cute in ur angry ranaji with giggling face

Janu enter farmhouse : what happening yaar bhai..

Anju:bhabhi, stand and walk fastly go to janu place..opps her legs slipped ouch

Rana: how many times , i said u that walk u slowly why u understand..

Janu checking her foot: bhai saying right, why u not understand..u r not single now..

Anju: no one love me , everyone scold me with moist eyes

Janu:uff her moodwings how u handle her, bhai.

Rana: really tough task janu with teasing tone.

Anju: u both teasing me with crying face.

Rana and janu laughed loudly.

Janu: bhai..after 2 days ..her 7^th month preganacy time start.in our culture we will do valagapu function doing in pregrancy time. Ur sister only do this ritual for her.

Anju: but he is single child of our family..he has no siblings.

Janu:I know but with sad voice.

Rana: who said, I have no sister..

Janu and Anju unison: u have sister with eager tone

Rana touched janu head and carring her hairs: u r my sister..u will do that ritual.

Jana eyes moist and she also no sibling in her life..she never got pampering from brother..then she close with rana..she felt like he is her brother.

Janu: thanks bhai

Anju: my bhabhi become senti now with teasing tone..

Ranu: don't tease my sister..

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Now anju 9 months pregnancy time..

Anju: maanu..today we enter 9 th month pregency when u come out .plz come out na..i want hold u in my hand with cute face.

Rana: why u want see him soon..( yes , he also accept they will get only boy child)

Both selected name for their names also..

Rana: u remember , u fight with me for our baby name.

Anju: how can I forgot finally u only won with fake angry face.

Rana:we both win side hug to anju

Anju: I selected name his name to veer but u select for maan.

Rana: yes , we decide finally Maanveer ..now u happy right with happy face..even u also most of time call our baby to maanu.. only our open mouth for two things only..one for eating and other thing talk with ur maanu..u r forgot ur poor husband.

Anju: yes, my maanu has my high priority and what u said that only i open my mouth for eating..with anger tone

Savi: uff, both stop ur kid fight ..in few days both become to parents but till now fight like child.

Anju: maa, he only started ..

Savi: rana beta, we will arrange godh bharai function for anju and unborn child.

Anju: maa, in our culture after seemantham ( 9 th months doing ritual for pregnancy lady ..women wore glass bangles and more ritual will do ..) girl stay with mother house after delivery girls stay in mother place in alteast 5 months...but I never get my change to live with mother right with crying face

Savi hugged anju, she cocoon anju in her arms like mother hugged her children.

Anju: maa with sobbing voice.

Savi: shhh..u calling maa right..why u cannot felt that I am ur mother..

Anju: u love me like my mom..u also my maa.

Rana smiled and wiping his tears : now she snatched my maa also with pout face.

Anju: maa, see once again , he started..

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Dadi and anju come to temple ..rana went to outside ..

Anju got labour pain..

Anju shout : maa..

Savi tried to held her ..none help with them because everyone scared for mahendra angry.

Anju whole family already in temple but mahendra look at her like she just disgusting for him.

Sivagami: my anju crying ..she cannot tolerate her labour pain.

Lakshmi not come to temple and she stay in palace.

Mahendra: just shut ur mouth sivagami..

Raguram not tolerate seeing her cry and running to her side..

Mahedra: ram stop there..dont help her..she already died for us.

Sivaram and Jairam never raise his voice infront of father..both r numb behind of his father.

Raguram not hear any words from mahendra and just pickup anju in his arms..

Raguram shout : janu..come quick..

Janu wipes her own tears and running behind them.

Raguram joined anju to hospital and everyone worried about anju ..

Savi informed Rana about anju joined in hospital.

Anju deliver to boy child..doctor give child to raguram hand..he is first person held baby ..

Raguram kissed baby forehead : My anju child, ..

Janu caring baby cheeks softly: Our maanu baby.

Raguram: maanu ..with confused face.

Janu: anju already selected name for him..

Raguram: what name

Janu: Maanveer.

Raguram give baby to savi and savi held baby protectively and baby held savi finger.

Janu:maa, he held ur finger...he never leave ur hand in his life time.

Savi kissed baby : my maanu with tears eyes.

Three of them enter in inside room and anju face so sore because of delivery..she so weak.

Anju got conscious : maa, my maanu..

Savi give baby to anju and anju kissed him cheeks: my maanu maa..bhai, my maanu..with excited voice.

Raguram: yes, ur maanu only

Anju: u forgive me

Raguram nods his head: I forgive u long back

Anju: why papa not hate this much..yes I did it wrong but I am not killed anyone right..i married whom I love that person..this is wrong bhai..with crying in his arms.

Baby also crying .

Savi: oh our maanu love his mom so much..if u start ur crying , he also start crying..

Anju smiled in tear face and Rana enter in anju room.

Rana look at anju in proud face : are u alright.

Raguram: she perfectly alright. Rana surprised seeing raguram in hospital.

Rana look at anju and anju nods her head with smiling face.

Rana hugged his friend and raguram reciprocate his hugs.

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Everything going smoothly our life..after anju delivery..Mahendra shout raguram for help anju ..raguram shout his father.raguram and janu both come out to palace..and stay in small house..he already higher post in government ..he got government house..both setteled their life.

FB ends

Raguram:I am first person held our maan in my hand..i cannot express my feeling..with smiling face.

Maan smiled seeing raguram face and youngsters engaged more involved to anju story.

Geet: papa, everything smoothly, suddenly what happen to uncle..why he behaved to anjubua.

Dadi: u saying right beta, our life become smoothly.

Me and amarji come visit see our maan monthly once..

Amar attached manu so much..he want spend more time with manu..2 years also passed soon.

Maan is 2 yrs old ..we celebrate maan birthday grandly in Coimbatore.we invit everyone...our friends circle and raguram friend circle..everyone come to party.

FB Start

Anju crying and rana console her.

Raguram: anju, why u crying..they not coming to maan birthday, why u thinking about them.

Anju: its almost three years till now papa not forgive me ..

( THIS IS NOT HOPE STORY..Why i chose MY cutiepie to little maan, everyone mind set to cutiepie so naugthy ,chubby kid so i need everyone mind same like to little maan also ..)

Little manu come to anju room with chubby face.

Manu: mummaa, why r cying...with babish tone.

Anju pickup manu in her arms : dust in my eyes . with smiling face.

Manu cupped her cheeks and blow her eyes : kk

Janu pickup manu from anju: my cute mottu..

Anju pout: bhabhi don't call him to motu..

Raguram: don't call my prince to mottu.

Rana: why u both got hyper in my sis..he so fatty ..so we call to mottu with teasing tone.

Anju: my baby not fatty..he so chubby and my cute baby..anju pickup manu from Janu..went out with twisted lips.

Party time.

One girl hugged rana tightly..janu, raguram and anju not like her in first vision.

Savi: don't mistake her beta, she is rana's childhood friend , pammi.

Anju: maa, she is one Amarpapa select for ranaji..with little sad face.

Savi : yes, don't worry she is nice girl.

Janu: I don't like her..with murmuring voice.

Anju:bhabhi, ranaji friend so,she is very closely behave with him..its not wrong one.

Party finished ..

One lady come to anju: u have any brain..why u allow ur child to janaki with angry voice.

Anju: iam not understand

Lady: she have no child...she is not good sign for ur baby with evily face.

Anju: aunty, she love my manu more than I love my child.plz Get lost my house with slow even respected voice.

Janu heared lady and anju conservation..

Janu cried so much..and anju touch her shoulder.

Anju: Bhabhi, don't take her lady word to ur heart.

Janu: its not new for me but she said that iam not good for my maanu..with crying voice.

Anju hugged janu and janu crying..

Little manu look at janu crying..

Anju gestured manu come to us and little manu wiped janu tears ..

Little manu: why janubua crying ..

Anju:bua nahi ..call her to janumaa

Little manu: why with confused face.

Anju: because she also ur maa..

Little manu : ok , janumaa..

Janu look at manu face: why anju..i am not deserve hearing maa word...I cannot give birth to single child..every one said to ur bhai..marry to other girl but ur bhai angry with them..he never leave my hand ..he always with me but iam not give single child to him..

Little manu : janumaa, why u crying..

Janumaa kissed to manu cheeks : my baby..hugged manu tightly..

Next day janu faint in home and she is preganat..raguram and janu cried in each other arms..

Janu: u become father..i become mother. we r going parents soon ,i cannot belive..with tears flowing ..

Anju and rana: belive bhai and bhabhi..we r going aunty and uncle.

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FB end

Pinky: maa, everyone scold u but u tolerate everything..how u did it..with painful voice

Januram: because ur papa, he is my strength , he always with me , he never leave my hand ,i trust him more than myself with emotional voice

Vicky lighten place: maa, really bhai so fatty in his childhood with chuckling face.

Maan angry glaze to Vicky and youngsters look at vicky ,u r gone..

Vicky puppy look at geet and geet eyes assured that I take care of him..

Dadi : ur bhai so chubby, naughty kid..noone stop him ..anju have big task to handle ur bhai..he never stopped in single place..he always running..with smiling face

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Rana behaviours change to anju. But everyone thought because of work tension, he behaved that way..anju also take his harsh words to lightly.

Janu six month of preganacy time.

Little manu confused and scratching his hair to cutely.

Anju: what happen manu , why u scratching ur head .

Little manu: oh mummaa, my janumaa stomach so big ..hand gesture to anju..

Anju laughed and manu got angry.

Little manu: I ask to janumaa with cute angry face.

Anju: uff..if he got angry ..noone control him.

Little manu: janumaa janumaa

Janu: yes maanu.

Little manu: why u stomach big one and u eating more with confused face.

Janu pinched his cheeks lightly : in my stomach, little baby there..

Little manu: baby, my stomach also baby there but my stomach not big one like u with innocent face.

Janu laughed : oh my god , no baby , ur stomach not any baby..but my stomach have baby..baby come play with u soon.

Little manu: really ..then say baby, come out now..i want play with her..now..

Anju: manu, u decided baby only to girl child with surprised face.

Little manu; I don't like boy baby..i want girl baby only.

Anju: my manu baby want girl child ..so u deliver only to girl child..she play only with my maanu..only for him.

Janu: till now she did not come down to earth , u both decided to play only to maanu ..in few minutes u both talk about unborn baby na..u say she married only to manu baby.

Anju: good idea bhabhi..if u give birth to girl child..she is my daughter in law..i never allow to anyone house. She is my manu baby wife.

Janu: uff..u imagining more anju..

Anju: no bhabhi, I talking seriously, promise me..she is my dil ..she is only for my maanu..

Janu: ok baba promise..by the way. Whay name u decide to ur dil.

Little manu: janu maa why she not talk with me ..with crying face.

Anju : baby..she will talk in ur life time. I am sure my dil voice more than honey..bhabhi I got her name.

Janu: what..

Anju: my dil name is Geet.

manu: geet with little smile face.

Anju: ha baby geet means song..her voice song to my manu..so her name is geet only..its final, u have any objection..

Janu: who am i denied ,ur dil name with teasing tone.

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Maaneet look at each other and youngster look at maaneet with smiling face..

Choti: geet di, bua fixed ur marriage , ur in mom womb with teasing tone.

Geet blushed

Janu: we forgot our promise but god not..both r married without our knowledge..

Servant come to room said: dinner ready..

Sivagami : everyone get up and eat ur food and then hearing about our princess story..

guys time for movie interval, waiting for next part on this weekend😉😆😛

Part end

photos updating tomorrow..net very slow now

NEXT PART 34,35,36 -PG 140

Precap:

anju died past continues

Maan missing

Sherni angry with her maan ..poor boy who will save him from her.

how chubby maanu change to rude MSK ope

i hope everyone happy with my punishment..first time, i updated three parts once go in MFS story..

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Originally posted by: ARJUNKIAPS

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