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Wonderful update 👍🏼

Part 6 nice maan again flirting with geet
raj called geet in his study raj thinking geet is rrally sweet n caring for dafi if something happens with him she will take care of his family
oh geet have a crush on dev ran n kiran shocked nice uodate soon

Chapter 5:

The story is developing very well... with new characters coming in and the existing ones getting a little bit of depth. 👏

I just adore this Kiran as I read each update. She's so sorted and simple in her wants for happiness for her son; but nevertheless somewhere does understand Geet's views and predicament.

Geet and Tara are like two peas in a pod... dono milke Maan ko bahut trouble karenge it seems or might be the other way round too, never know! 😆

Chapter 6:

Oh my my! Dev - Tara have another intense story that I'm so wanting to know about... it seems full of angst and passion ❤️. I loved how they responded to each other even in that short phone conversation. 👏

So Geet madam has a crush on Mr. Dev Khana 😆 Kiran ke dreams blur ho rahe hai. Oh no! but thsi is going to be fun in the course of time.

Raj seems like there's a lot going on in his mind. What I loved was him calling his family as Jaan and Shaan so cute and endearing.

(I like the couple Twinkle and Akshay ... they seem so in sync and very relate-able to the characters you've woven them into.)

Maan and Geet are like two bickering kids who love to fight and get reactions out of the other, especially Maan. 😆


I'm loving these dynamics ... continue soon.

Part 4

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Part-6</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Maan ka as usual chalo ho gyi chalupanti🤣.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Yaar ye dev-tara ka kya scene hai?</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">&geet ko dev par crush😲(mujhe bhi bhai bahut time se😳) maan is definitely gonna burn with this new update about his WIFEY😆😉.</font>

so the dev crushees are coming out.. me included 😉

Originally posted by: Onir

Chapter 6:

Oh my my! Dev - Tara have another intense story that I'm so wanting to know about... it seems full of angst and passion ❤️. I loved how they responded to each other even in that short phone conversation. 👏

So Geet madam has a crush on Mr. Dev Khana 😆 Kiran ke dreams blur ho rahe hai. Oh no! but thsi is going to be fun in the course of time.

Raj seems like there's a lot going on in his mind. What I loved was him calling his family as Jaan and Shaan so cute and endearing.

(I like the couple Twinkle and Akshay ... they seem so in sync and very relate-able to the characters you've woven them into.)

Maan and Geet are like two bickering kids who love to fight and get reactions out of the other, especially Maan. 😆


I'm loving these dynamics ... continue soon.

Doc 🤗
Considering that I have loved Raj for a long time, I am glad you loved him too 😆
Kiran, yup slightly more complicated; but only her love for her son, as a mother should be.
Maan has never had it easy in my stories and nor is it going to be easy here.

I like to let the characters grow over time and I hope it works out here.

As Kiran wants I want them both to feel that pyar ka ehsaas.

It is stupidity in a way to expect that the audience will wait for it par kya karu?

I am stupid, lol.

Thanks for your comment Doc.

It feels so good to have you all read it. 😃

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

😆

YE kis khushi mein?

Abhi toh maine teaser bhi nahi post kiya hai, lol

TEASER


Geet frowned at the phone.

Mumbai main toh kabhi itna nahi bajta tha, and here it was ringing away.

She was worried about going back to Tara's flat and getting her clothes. Raj uncle would not let her go alone by cab and so she was going to have to request his royal annoyingness.

She picked up the phone and an irritating speech started, "Mrs. Khurana, I have a special credit card offer for you".

"Wrong number", she said and hung up.

Maan who was walking around in his office after a long tense meeting smiled at the phone.

It was so much fun to tease her.

All his tension evaporated as he called her up again.

At her hesitant hello, he said, "Yaar kaissi biwi ho tum? Subah se ek phone bhi nahi. Kaha bhi nahi, Darling aaj ghar jaldi aana".

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The man who she was smiling at put his hand out, " .. Nice to meet you. I am Dev. You are?"

All his instincts turned territorial in an instant, he replied, "Dev? Main Patidev".

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