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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 8 years ago

#961

Part 2 ..

Geet met maan but it was not happy one ..get is right at her place ..why to give importance to person who never cared..is it maan didNt returned after signing the papers ..he left for US. Now daddima a sick and wants geet back ..geet ready to move but her way ...this geet is strong ..liked it .

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 8 years ago

#962

Part 3..

Loved it..specially the iron trunk explanation..definitely did that when I was small and used to go to punjab ..train utterly full and I love to sit on anyone's trunk rather on my seat ..geet going to Delhi..phassa diya maan ko aunty ke saath ..yeh aunties bhi kitna lecture deti hai pareeshan ek baat hai kai baar time accha pass karwa detuned hai when travelling alone...

geet surprise to see maan's house..she is welcome but she knew her world is different ...

I liked maan bach gaya sentence too ..

Thanks for lovely update..

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 8 years ago

#963

Avi ...

I am waiting for 4waiting for 5 ...

Waiting for 6...

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@Jyothi66

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#964

The various traits and nuances of characters being revealed - the way Maan is bothered abt her tears throws a lot of light on the kind of man you are & the kind of upbringing you have.Plus,the fact that you roll out a multi -starrer is quite refreshing. Noone is perfect and we all better ourselves from the its & bits we accumulate from our dealings with people who pass through our world.So waiting for Dev & Tara's story.Good work.

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nibi_suchi

@nibi_suchi

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#965

Commented on blog.
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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#966

CH.4

Awesome Update

Geet roaming in KM all alone and at last reached Maan,s bedroom , Maan saw her and his teasing session started, Geet ko tease kerne ka koi bhi mauka nahi chhod raha, Geet bhi kum nahi poori takkar de rahi, loved it

Geet left KM and reached Tara,s house, even Tara teasing Geet, loving their friendship

Maan,s father was disappointed with Maan,s behavior , Maan talked with his parents about Geet and his feelings, Maan,s parents are so sweet , Maan,s mom wants her son to fell in love with Geet and she even started dreaming of marriage preparation, loved it, loved Maan,s father superb idea of Geet working in KC, it will be full of fun and teasing

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Sudha

@babelicious

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#967

Okay so this is the reason why geet is not getting attracted to our handsome hunk! But thnk god dev doesn't feel that way too. Thanks for the quick updates and pws.. waiting for the next

Edited by Miss.Hoshiarpur - 8 years ago

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#968

Part-6

Maan ka as usual chalo ho gyi chalupanti🤣.

Yaar ye dev-tara ka kya scene hai?

& geet ko dev par crush😲(mujhe bhi bhai bahut time se😳) maan is definitely gonna burn with this new update about his WIFEY😆😉.

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anum fahim

@aqvum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#969

awesome update.. Aww maan just cant see her tears n seeing her back in her teekhi mirchi style he is again irritating her to extreme.. Raj n kiran talks with geet about moving outhouse but she is undecided.. Finally dev is introduced he n tara may have broken up want to know the reason why she's avoiding hin n running to her hometown hearing he is coming.. Raj n kiran are happy hearing that now geet has to stay with them but kiran gets upset hearing about dev.. Especially seeing geet's happiness on his arrival.. Geet has crush on dev wonder how J maan will be knowing this.. Really eager to read more.. Plzz try to give faster updates.. Thanks for pm..

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#970

Awesome part..loved the scenes between maaneet n thwir fights

N my devtara r back...but now that tara is going to run away from dev waiting to see how they r going to come back together n loved that geet is ready to work for dev n kiran shocked with this...can't wait for next part