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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

TEASER


Geet frowned at the phone.

Mumbai main toh kabhi itna nahi bajta tha, and here it was ringing away.

She was worried about going back to Tara's flat and getting her clothes. Raj uncle would not let her go alone by cab and so she was going to have to request his royal annoyingness.

She picked up the phone and an irritating speech started, "Mrs. Khurana, I have a special credit card offer for you".

"Wrong number", she said and hung up.

Maan who was walking around in his office after a long tense meeting smiled at the phone.

It was so much fun to tease her.

All his tension evaporated as he called her up again.

At her hesitant hello, he said, "Yaar kaissi biwi ho tum? Subah se ek phone bhi nahi. Kaha bhi nahi, Darling aaj ghar jaldi aana".

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The man who she was smiling at put his hand out, " .. Nice to meet you. I am Dev. You are?"

All his instincts turned territorial in an instant, he replied, "Dev? Main Patidev".

A/N: Do like and comment. Mujhe likhne main mazzaa aata hai reading your comments.

Thanks for enjoying this.


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buuuhaaahhaaahaaa...😃...🤣🤣..."""main patidev"""... lol..lol.lol...dis teaser cracked ne uppp...seems like d jealousy and insecurity is already setting in...well to some point he deserves it for annoying geet so much...its time dat we get some entertainment at d expense of maan...😉😉...and besides, a jealous maan is always a treat for me to watch...😆😃😉...

avvviii...plzzz update jaldi...pretty plzzz...🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Teaser
Dev
Main patidev
Hilarious
Awesome
Beautiful
Naughty maan jealous ban gaya
Waaannnaa read it sooo much
👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
part-3

superb update Avi ...after so many arguments geet ready to go with maan ...omg..maan showing geet that he is player boy ..and enjoying geet expressions ...and yes! entire flight and aunty giving gyan to maaneet was amazing...hahaha... really bahut mast tha ...maan enjoying geet helpness...hihi...finally they at khurana mansion ..let me see kya hota h next ...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nish285




Ohhh myyy gooodddf avvviii...u actually replied to my comment...😊...dis is like a typical ""FAN""" moment for me...🥳...
honestly...from so long being a reader of ur stories...i always wondered dat u replied most of ur oddr readers but me...i was starting to doubt dat my comments are not good enough may be...or may be u reply to only ur old friends...
Anyways...i am glad to know...dat u did LIKE my comment
...even a reader likes it wen his comments are appreciated...so i can very well relate to how it is for writers... the happiness and motivation from such feedback and appreciation is much more for themm...
abd yes about raj and kiran... de have a certain warmth...dat makes one respect dem in an instant...de are approachable and not snooty or cold towards oddrs self respect or sentiments.
...as i said ...der are way too many cupids in d story...but the leads are hell bent on being d devils and not letting the love arrow work its magic...😆...


I am sorry. i don't want you or anyone to feel your comments are less. pls never feel that.
I have basically not replied to comments much since Locket. As u know perhaps I work 6 days a week. Reply karu toh update nahi kar saktias fast.
There are some without whom I would not have survived on IF; some who have taught me to write and have become family. Unhe comment karna zaroori hai simply because wo hai toh main hu.
Again, I am sorry if i hurt your feelings 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC



Main q hansi MAIN bhi nhi janti 😆

jhalli 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago


Haaye Ye khoobsurat tabassum aapki 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Since Dev's entry, this is what I was waiting for... a jealous and possessive Maan.

Can't wait to see how the PatiDEV stakes his claim now. Update soon please.


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Posted: 8 years ago

😃😃 Nice tsr..
waiting ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Maan is continuing it with Dev too😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello avi ...
Plz passwords dedo...I am waiting 🤔..
Hope u reply this time ...

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