PYAR KE EHASAS THREAD 3 ,note on page 129 - Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago
UPDATING

UNTIL THEN A SMALL TEASER


why shiv , why you did not share any thing, why , you thought my life will be in trouble, , you risked your own life for me.itna paraya hogahai ki bhabhi ke bare me bhi nahi batyai..atleast she deserves all the respect as a khurna bahu. kyo kiya aisa shiv.apni jidagi risk kiya mere liye.he tried to control the tears which are coming out from his eyes .

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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely teaser
Seems Mann knows everything from the diary ..his Mu about geet and Shiv is clear..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
So Maan got to know geet is been in love with when she doesn't know him personally and he got to know Vicky is shiv and Meera's son and he was in guilt ..He shares his pain with dadi dadi asked him to bring back geet in his life and it's not easy for Maan he gonna get another rude shocked when he get to know about maansi
Eagerly waiting for the update
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Posted: 8 years ago

PART-64

when geet entered the house..she saw some neighbors were yelling at priya , she saw manasi and pari standing with their heads hanging down

seeing her , one of the neighbor started accusing her

now she came leaving their kids on the streets, that is why everyone tell it is very important to have father , if father care and control is not there, kids are tend to become like this ...

Before they start more accusations, they calmed down seeing raam

there , seeing raam manasi went and hugged him and started crying

I have done anything dadu ..promise ...sachi ..idid not do anything

Before I lose my patience, you all leave my house shouted raam .they all left the house ,

Geet quietly went into her room...

Priya went into kitchen to talk with Anjali ,want to know what happened exactly ,

Raam took manasi and pari and went into his room.

When raam entered into room, he saw geet was lost somewhere sitting in her usual place

Geet beta...

Why , papa did I do any wrong ..

No beta you were never wrong,, do not blame yourself..

May be there are correct papa, manasa needs father care and shadow...

Raam was surprised at her words,

At the same time manasi entered the room..went near to geet

Maa promise ..i did not do anything..vo pranav is reason for all this, he is teasing and using bad words..and he even pushed pari also..

And started hurting me.

I am telling the truth maa..

Iknow beta you will never be wrong... she took manasi into her embrace .

" why does any one do not tell me anything , today when I came form college I saw jiju and di were looking very tensed, when I asked about the reason, they simply told to concentrate on exams which are round the corner, so should not bother about other issues , why cannot they tell anything to me, nowadays I am seeing jiju is so tensed with some issues,

the other day I heard their talks, about you, di was insisting to tell you something , but jiju was adamant of not sharing anything, he was fearing for something .what is that even he cannot share with you .

maan I am fearing do not know what is that, but there is something which is troubling jiju a lot.."

why shiv , why you did not share any thing, why , you thought my life will be in troube, , you risked your own life for me.itna paraya hogahai ki bhabhi ke bare me bhi nahi batyai..atleast she deserves all the respect as a khurna bahu. kyo kiya aisa shiv.apni jidagi risk kiya mere liye.he tried to control the tears which are coming out from his eyes .

maan became very curious to know more

" I just do not know what to do...maan I am feelings very scared for jiju and di. What they are hiding ,why .khas tum hote...I do not know why, I want you to be near with me may be imay feel seure..why this feelings,till now I haven't seen you, but why this feelings for you , even iam not able to understand , itna trust ..some times I feel sacred with my own feelings ,..

Finally I could able to convince my di for ghod bhari ,she was like not interested ,but black mailed her in the name of Vicky..jiju started tauting about this name.. but as always he had to listen to me and here to I convinced with that not know why I felt with this name..vicky singh khurana..just like yours maan singh khurnana..the same aura as in your name..

Maan I am so happy , the dream I used to see to be with you can be happen, yes I finished my architecture degree that to university first , now I can work with you in your office .this was dream to be with you, to work for you in your office, jiju was very much happy for my success, he told you would be very happy seeing me like this,i asked for my treat which he happily agreed


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Edited by rsusmita - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update susmita
but too short ..It was like i m reading some teaser

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update but was too short
Just waiting for geet reaction for second marriage and Maams reaction after knowing geet relation with ram family and talks regarding her second marriage
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmi...

Nice update susmita

but too short ..It was like i m reading some teaser



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Posted: 8 years ago
nice ud
ppl r always like that not seeing their own children start accusing others kids
geet knows hr daughter well if hr father was with hr than no one have guts to say hr anything
maan reading dairy
kiya dairy hi parhta rahe ga ya kuch kare ga b
msk getting slow
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

nice ud

ppl r always like that not seeing their own children start accusing others kids
geet knows hr daughter well if hr father was with hr than no one have guts to say hr anything
maan reading dairy
kiya dairy hi parhta rahe ga ya kuch kare ga b
msk getting slow


He will do
Soon you will see msk in action

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