MG FF(collab)-Mohra(Pawn)A Victim of hatred-CS-Pg 8 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Someone killed Geets child I guess :/
Waiting for more
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Interesting Character Sketch

Handas are a big family

waiting for the first chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
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being a mother who is watching her daughter's lifeless body is not consolable and she is mad...

may be her daughter died because of some mischieve between children...

she is blaming a 7 yr old boy for killing her daughter...

what happened that she is behaving like this...

very interesting...

waiting for update...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for New Story... nice prologue.. interesting CS...excited for update...thanks for pm..!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
painful prologue...
waiting to see how story unfolds...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
congrats for new story
loved it very much
waiting for next part

cs is nice so many people in this story wow
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats guys both of you on your new joint venture...
Thanks for pm...

Continue soon...


Intense concept... Intriguing...

Interesting character sketch...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fabulous CS and intriguing prologue. Geet blames someone for killing her daughter. Maan consoles her. Will wait for the story to unfold.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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WOW!! Interesting start...

loved it dear...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
nice prologue and cs
cont.soon

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