MG FF(collab)-Mohra(Pawn)A Victim of hatred-CS-Pg 8

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Kalpana

@maaneetfavo

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi lovely buddies..A new story from ur sweet buddies. This is our first attempt collaboration between ur MGMahika & Maaneetfavo.

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Prolouge

character Sketch -page 8

we will wait for ur wonderful response dearies..mahika and me will come with banner,CS and Part 1 sooon...😳

Edited by maaneetfavo - 8 years ago

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Mahika

@MGMahika

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Posted: 8 years ago

Prologue

Maan Dekho na yeh ankhe kyu nahi khol rahi ...please Maan kuch karo please kuch behave like a mad

Maan eyes having tears to see her like this,Everyone stood there like a statue,Suddenly she turned furious and grab that 7year-old kid about to slap but her papa stopped her also slapped her hard that force make her fall on the ground with lips cut.

Mohindat : How dare you touch him his eyes red in anger, where Geet turn furiously looking at everyone still sitting on the ground, Maan is actually shocked to see her this avatar for the first time

Geet : Acha aab sab galat lag raha hai, lekin tab aap sab kaha the jab ishne mere bacche ko maar dala crying hysterically seeing her daughter lifeless body , then Maan embrace her in his arms Maan mere baby ko wapas la do Maan , mai mar jayungi ushke wager,,,please Maan ushe wapas la do his eyes also filled with tears then saw her fainted in his arms

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Prologue - Above - Blog Link

Character Sketch - Pg 8

Edited by MGMahika - 8 years ago

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

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Posted: 8 years ago

Congrats on new story...🥳...

nice prologue...👍🏼...Geet is crying as someone has killed her baby and then fainted in Maan's arms...😲...waiting 4 updates......thank u 4 pm...😃...

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

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Posted: 8 years ago

Heyy me first..

Kalpi..mahika..Congo on new story...

Yaar Mahika u didn't check my answers to your challenge...MERI help line seh I posted new check kahriyo...

Sad teaser...

Geet was about to slap a boy...But who!? That made mohinder hit geet...

Geet lost her baby girl...She believes someone killed her...

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 8 years ago

It's shocking. Geet has lost her baby. Why tried to hit a small boy but his father saved him. Maan was shocked seeing geet's this condition . Waiting for update dear.

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Heartbreaking prolong yaar.. Geet lost her daughter n going mad n unable to accept the truth.. As a mother no one can take loss of their child.. Can't wait for the story to start..