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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Omg emotinal os..
Maaneet na Rula dia bahut isha story ma.. Maan itna selfish kaisa hai usa only my and my chaiha my life,my problems,my happiness..
Please can you post 1more part uniting them..

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

congrats on another OS! superb emotional OS! beautifully written! Maaneet were in love! Maan sacrificed his love cos of Payal! DEv made her pregnant! Geet begged Maan bt he refused her! she was shattered! they meet again! Geet met in an accident! Maan n Payal nt together! he tells Geet! she is gng 2 marry Angad! Geet wants Maan back! he says he has responsibilities! Geet heartbroken! Sad end 😊👏⭐️

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-Halima

@-Halima

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Really sad one.

Maan is quite stupid for letting Geet leave like that.

I can't accept an end like that. When there is actually nothing like death stopping them,

can you do a part 2 where Geet tortures Maan for being a coward 😈

Hoping for part 2 *fingers crossed*

Edited by -Halima - 8 years ago

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

nice os
but was hoping for a happy ending

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

it's amazing... I have no words to describe tht why exactly I feel... I just going numb for some seconds n absorb d fact why he did to her n himself... apne apne Jahan mein dono Kitne hai tanha