Wired Hearts (7) Thread:8, Pg:1 - Page 65

First of all I want to applaud you for the scene creation 👏

It was superb; like watching a film in front of my eyes.

The panic, the rush, the urgency captured so very well that it felt real.

Amazing work considering that all we have are words and the nature of them to create that panic, that response in the reader.

Now coming to the resident fence dweller 😆

How the mighty ran off the fence and pulled him to safety, pushed him to the right direction when all he kept thinking about was others.

Oh and that line; A world without him in it was not one she wanted either.. haiye at last my jhalli is alive.

Her eyes are well and truly opened.

The crisis has shattered both their hard stances on keeping it status quo.

He can't see her hurt or hurting for what is lost either; he never could.

He won't open for his sake but to see her in pain, he puts himself out there to be hurt again.

I am here for you.

So hard to say when you have been shattered but so easy when you can't stop loving someone.

He has always tried to give her what she wanted; that distance, that professionalism, that space.

And now she wants comfort, care and he is there,

I feel fulfilled by this chapter.

Romance at its peak as far as I can feel.

Truly I have no words for this guy.

Love it so much.

Thank you for updating.

sorry for the late comment

I had to go out of town

Hi, came across this FF a few weeks ago and catching up on the prequel and sequel right now.

Very well written and gripping story do far. Your writing style is very realistic and can feel the pain and aching suppressed love of two friends who can stay away from each other yet won't admit of long term relationship (at leadt for Geet).

I feel Geet is as confused as a lot of girls who are brought up with Indian values of not having a boyfriend or love marriage and she does not have the courage to accept what her heart wants.

There is a big transformation between the old Geet vs the current more confident Geet yet she is not brave enough to accept what she wants. Just like how she was pushed to join Khurana Construction, she needs a push to accept that she loves Maan too. Who will give her that push? Does Maan now realize that's how she is wired and approach her accordingly? He is not a young, fragile boy anymore... he is a shrewd businessman and can make things go his way, if he wanted... as he said before people can be manipulated into anything and there is no such thing as fate.

In the last 2 chapters I can already see Geet's heartbeat raising with and around Maan... will she let that feeling grow on her further?

Once again, Lovely FF and please write it at the pace you have in mind just don't stop writing and continue soon!

Could you please add me to your pm list?

Their closeness yet distances are pinching me so much. I hope Maan gets to read her diary someday... he will know it was only him in her mind all the time no matter what she says.

Also, we know what Maan went through after the fateful night... but what did Geet go through right after? Did she regret? Did she speak her heart when she said she did not love him? Or did she know she loved him but knew they don't have a future? Why hasn't she married yet? Did her parents not try for her to settle down?

Love the Maaneet moments always as that brings so much tension and anticipation. Why do people have to disturb everytime they are together? I can only imagine what Maan might be thinking when Geet was enjoying the waterfall and him watching her... if it was peace for her was it peace for him too? To see the one he loves in peace? He still loves her, right? Will he never give up on her or has he changed and moved on?

After finishing reading both the FFs, missing it more...

The last 2 parts were so well written with the catastrophic event and the hussle around it... it felt like I was watching a movie or news where people are fledging and a natural disaster is about to strike.

How will Maan and Geet get to know each other better during this 2 days refuge... i hope they get closer emotionally and Geet realises and accepts what she has in her heart. She definitely has a special place that's beyond love for Maan... I hope Maan makes her see that too. I wonder what is going through Maan's mind sometimes. I know you are writing this from Geet's pov, which is good but just want to know if he still loves her and waits for her acceptance or if he truly does not care about that part anymore... well what am I asking... I already know my answer. He of course loves her and will move mountains to be with her. I hope to see that happening now... c'mon hero time to shine further show your irresistible charm!

Soo sorry for the late response. This was such an awesome update. I like the responsibility that Maan feels towards getting his staff safely away from the danger. I also liked that Geet was the only one that could get through to him and the fact that she waited to leave with him. The ending part of the chapter with Geet opening up to him about the loss she felt was beautifully written. Fantastic job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.

Will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Loved the update. It made me so emotional.Geet talking to Raya as she was worried. Maan has come long way. Being so responsible. Good to see Geet staying with him rather than going with the staff. Geet remembering her parents was really emotional. I really liked that she shared it with Maan. They were there for each other in this hard time. Being the real selves. Thanks for this amazing chapter. Well written.

If they were told they only had these 2 days to live and won't survive the storm, will they share what's in thier hearts?

What were Geet's real reasons for rejecting Maan?

Nice update