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IMA9167

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Posted: 7 years ago

#621

That was a deadly Strom...

Maan wants his staff safety where as geet worried for him...

Maan asked why she didn't left with them...Geet had no answer yet she couldn't hear him being swearing on his life...

Complicated life.. Complicated feelings given under complicated situation...

Will b waiting dear

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

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Posted: 7 years ago

#622

Amazing Update... both are stuck in storm..

Is that a chance to come close 😳

No past will haunt for time being.. love the way you described all the happenings.. my breath got stuck throughout the journey till stadium 😲

Last scene.. geet telling him about her parents and he is consoling her.. beautiful it is

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 7 years ago

#623

rula diya mujhe
i have the same question aa Geet
why is life so unfair?

more later
after the throat unclogs

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#624

😭

Originally posted by: dqno1
rula diya mujhe
i have the same question aa Geet
why is life so unfair?

more later
after the throat unclogs

😭

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#625

oh horrible situation...hope that all will b ok...hope that this situation will bring them closer...after hearing last line...somehow a confession...omg...wtng for nxt...

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

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Posted: 7 years ago

#626

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#627

Finally all caught up.

There are a myrqid of emotions i have gone through reading this story. There's a tinge of nostalgia and sadness throughout though even when they were happy.

It is because maybe this story is a continuation of one of the most beautiful young love stories, and maybe to know that the innocence and love he felt so purely right back then had to change due to circumstances to make him the man he is, it just saddens me.

Life is so weird no.

But then i think, would they have been better had she succumbed to the affection she had for him and gone into a relationship then not wanting to lose him? I am not an advocate of people going into a relationship with their decisions not being theirs.

I think the tap dance and how he pushed her after it had made me really sad.

Anyway let us place my despondent mind aside for now.

The recent chapters have taken the story to a rather interesting place.

It's in situations like these, people surprise each other. It's only tragedies and disasters that would tug in an emotional side of you that you don't even realize exists inside you.

Thanks for writing this story Mari.

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maansi25

@maansi25

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#628

Ch 52

Life is so unpredictable

A moment changes it

Years ago they had a chance to live the life they wanted

Geet unsure of herself

Did not concede

Now again a moment

Where they may not survive

To cherish it

Moments

That enlighten you

About

Kya khoya Kya paaya

That shows you its important

In the storm

When they are steps away from the end

With uncertainty

Are closer than before

Rememberance

And just one thought

A single assurance

I am with you Geet

Says all

Nothing needed

Brilliant writing

Thanks for the update

Sometimes our existence needs shacking

To come out of our hideous

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maansi25

@maansi25

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#629

Originally posted by: mayyo

Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it.
First of all, congratulations on the color change! 😃

As for your wish, no that's not much to wish for and consider your wish granted very soon. 😉

I am so pleased that somebody who has actually been to a waterfall could relate to the scenes. I have never been to any waterfall so writing the scene was definitely a big challenge. I feel relieved I could pass it!

Thank you so much for your comments. I always look forward to them!

Edited by maansi25 - 7 years ago

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maansi25

@maansi25

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Posted: 7 years ago

#630

Originally posted by: mayyo

Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it.
First of all, congratulations on the color change! 😃

As for your wish, no that's not much to wish for and consider your wish granted very soon. 😉

I am so pleased that somebody who has actually been to a waterfall could relate to the scenes. I have never been to any waterfall so writing the scene was definitely a big challenge. I feel relieved I could pass it!

Thank you so much for your comments. I always look forward to them!

Thanks again for the wonderful story

Whatever happened years ago

Had saddened Maan

He is transformed into an angry powerful man

What he lost years ago

Is in front of him

But as bitter past wouldn't let him take

What is being offered to him presently

Circumstances changes your outlook

Destiny has brought them together

Where Geet could have gone with the other colleagues

But