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Posted: 7 years ago

Sheen 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part-52
I don't know is it your narrative style or me being too emotional, i felt every emotion through out the update.
Surprising was to see geet being sticked to maan no matter how grave the situation & in the end end up opening to him about her pain of loosing her parents. Something i wasn't expecting.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Geet sees the man Maan has become so mature and responsible. Seeing things not in his control anymore has frustrated him. He feels responsible for his colleagues.
Geet has always admired Maan and now seeing his concern for his team has tugged her heart strings. I think situations like these make you vulnerable and having the person whom you like is soothing
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for updating!

Part 52

dynamic update! wonderfully written! the storm though expected was not expected so soon! admire that Maan wants to keep them all safe!

it was thoughtful of Geet to stay with him while the others left! liked her reply when he questioned her!

Geet will always be there for Maan!

will the storm bring them closer?

Loved how Maan consoled Geet when she spoke about her parents!

lovely moments

continue soon
Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update. Equation between Maan and Geet was already changing and with this storm episode, looks like Geet has crossed another block. Her inability to leave Maan behind is an indication of things changing. She being able to confide in him about her pain of loss and Maan offering her assurance of his support was another positive in their relationship. waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice
they stuck in this unexpected storm Maan was only concern about his colleagues safety
Geet liked how he worried fr them Geet came with him she can't leAve him
After reaching stadium Maan want to know about his colleagues and Geet called adi he confirmed all r safe maan Geet sat down and sharing their past Geet got emotional while talking about hr parent's
Maan consoling hr
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Posted: 7 years ago
First of all... thank you so much for updating...

Now coming to the update...

Definitely short (or so I felt 😉) in comparison to what we are used to getting from you ... But surely awesomely written as always...

And...

I am so loving ... This Storm... In fact the entire situation they are in...

This is what they exactly needed... These kind of circumstances were actually crucial to bring them both closer... A situation where they both have to stick to each other and not even think of going separate ways...

It's one of the turning points of the story according to me...

The way geet stayed by Maan's side... Her opening up with him... Sharing her most personal feelings... It's definitely a big step...

But what I loved the most was... The last line... where Maan said that ... I am there for you...

Oh... just loved it...

Eagerly waiting for the next part


Edited by its_me - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update!
Thanks for the pm
Hoping for a sooner next update😊
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Storm is causing quite a uproar, though we've just recently been hit with pest from the west and beast from the east (storm Emma) which resulted in a few incidents and casualties (I assume the elderly where hit the worst like any other winter) but the snow this year was something else, waist deep snow; we where literally snowed in. Last time we had it this bad was in 2010, but without the strong winds or the coldness so it wasn't as bad. However it was nothing like your story lol

This sounds typical but I'm scared of thunder claps like Geet and all Indian show actresses lol but it jumps me up big time. Geet thinking of family and Maan being in that list, atitally shows his position or value in her life, though right now she hasn't give it a thought but going by your last reply I'm assuming she will.

The word briefcase reminds me of my dad lol, he has this beige briefcase which he used and still has. That's the only man (or person) I personally know that has one lol, though my brother carries his own but it's more business/laptop bag ideally a briefcase lol but no one calls it that. So daddy comes to mind with the mention of geets briefcase. You might be thinking this girl has officially lost it lol

Maans care and responsibility towards his staff is to another level. I liked that, though it is the stupidest decision ever what good would arguing over the phone do; but Geet managed everything. I defo liked geets authority over Maan and him silently following her orders though reluctantly but still. For that reason only (and many more) I say that Geets the brain and maans the Beauty lol

The journey to the stadium and the whole buildup of the chapter reminded me of movies like 'the day the world stood still' 'world war z' and 'I am legend' like it's a national crisis type situation but very well written and the emotion and outplay was intense. Geets being the support and then breaking down all made sense and added dimension. Needless to say I liked Maan being there and being her pillar.

Gosh this whole update reminded me if a childhood dream of wanting my town to flood, especially my street lol so I can jump out of bedroom window and into the water to play with my friends. Obviously back then I didn't realise the implications of the work involved, all I knew was that out town was never going to be affected by floods since we lived at the highest point in the country which seemed unfair but now I'm grateful lol. I also didn't realise that with flooding water would seep into the house. How gullible was I?

Thank you for a great chapter and can't wait to read what the storm does for maaneet
Can't really say anything for Maan in this chapter other than he us a bit of fool and a hero embroiled into one but my Geet is a shining star


ThAnks Marium
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very well written
Love it
Life is been so unfair

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