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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#911

Originally posted by: dqno1
Chapter 23

wah wah our dev babu tho clean bold hue 😆..rab ne bana di jodi 😊
our maan babu tho wait karte rahethe hein ki kab geet mile aur kab he can make love to her.. his mind is only in one track 😉☺️
well dadi ma finally has announced and gave a fitting response to the reporters... but in the end all is well that ends well..😊

i am glad that tara is doing well for herself and thodi jealousy achi hein 😉😊

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#912

Originally posted by: dqno1
Chapter 24

so much dev had to undergo it would be sad for him that his mother actually could not speak out.. but in all this the happiest part is that dev accepted the fact that he loves Tara... 2 wounded souls in a way are now joined together.. I am glad that they understand each other and are supporting well.

in the meanwhile our maan babu got married... wow what a fairy tale wedding it was.. and not to mention that maan was eager to make geet his as soon as possible 😆😊
but finally alls well... and maan and geet are together with dadi as their support and dadi's family together 😊

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priyankadwivedi

@priyankadwivedi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#913

Finally they got married... Dev have everyone in his family but still he is alone atlast he got his solace too... Maan geet love is so dreamyyy...

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#914

Wow it was very nice beautifully written 👏. Finally devtara confessed 😊. Maaneet married in a dreamy way . They are one now in all senses 😊. Loved the song avi it just refreshed GHSP memories.

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Khushibloom

@Khushibloom

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#915

Thanks for the pm dear. Eagerly waiting for epilogue 😃

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#916

hi thanks 4 da pm n splendid update! wonderfully written! Dev family will nt accept Tara! bt they confess n r together! Maaneet married! fab wedding! terrific pics! sizzling hot SR! Maaneet become one! sorry 4 late likes n comments! update soon

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Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#917

Thanks for pm n pw. Part24 is very beautifully written. The finishing u gave to dev n tara relationship, the build up of trust n then testing point. If maaneet were not main lead then devtara have a strong story background n deserving place in each part. Their feelings n selfthoughts are so natural that sometime forgot to realise they are fictious characters. But if they were real or near to reality then they would be most strong characters as they tolrate much more then anyone.

Maaneet soulmates, made for each other n perfect match all these are made for maaneet only. Standing besides each other n supporting n feel the other as ur whole world are very little thing for them. Now they care only for smile of their love. Wonderful update. Will u give an epilogue of sher under sherni with their kiddos.

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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#918

Originally posted by: Risingsun626
Thanks for pm n pw. Part24 is very beautifully written. The finishing u gave to dev n tara relationship, the build up of trust n then testing point. If maaneet were not main lead then devtara have a strong story background n deserving place in each part. Their feelings n selfthoughts are so natural that sometime forgot to realise they are fictious characters. But if they were real or near to reality then they would be most strong characters as they tolrate much more then anyone.
Maaneet soulmates, made for each other n perfect match all these are made for maaneet only. Standing besides each other n supporting n feel the other as ur whole world are very little thing for them. Now they care only for smile of their love. Wonderful update. Will u give an epilogue of sher under sherni with their kiddos.

@bold: Thank you so much 😃
Yes epilogue 1 is written and part 2 needs to be written 😃

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mayyo

@mayyo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#919

Okay... kick me for beginning my comment for such a beautiful chapter with negativity, but... it hit me really really hard that the story ended. 😭

Let me become optimistic about this...

Both the couples have received the ending they deserved. While Maan and Geet were the leads of this story, I think Dev and Tara's part was equally, if not more, gripping for the readers. Felt so sad for Dev for having such a family. It's pitiful how his mum cannot stand up for him. I know there are weak women out there but as far as I know (from personal experience too) that a woman may fall weak but a mother fights for her child. I would never stay shut if it were my child anybody pointed a finger at, even if it was my child's own father. I don't take that sitting down, you know. Hubby gets pissed that I never listen anything against my baby, although I can differentiate between when she's the one at fault and when she's not. It makes me wonder how Dev's mum ended up with a man like him. Was she forced into it? Why didn't she try to get out of this marriage? What happened to Dev's father (did I miss it?)?

Anyway, I would like Dev's mother to stand up for him now more than ever. I hope she does come around and stand by him in the biggest decision of his life. And I'm so glad they way things have turned for Dev and Tara. Their story gives me a lesson. Life tests you the hardest when you're about to get the best thing out of it.

And so Maan and Geet became Manager and will forever remain so in our hearts. The truest thing that can be said about these two. ❤️ Let me take a moment to thank you for bringing an extraordinary story to us and telling it so beautifully that we couldn't help falling in love with the characters of it. You are one of the most gifted writers I have ever read. Thank you, really! ❤️

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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#920

Originally posted by: mayyo
Okay... kick me for beginning my comment for such a beautiful chapter with negativity, but... it hit me really really hard that the story ended.😭
Let me become optimistic about this...

Both the couples have received the ending they deserved. While Maan and Geet were the leads of this story, I think Dev and Tara's part was equally, if not more, gripping for the readers. Felt so sad for Dev for having such a family. It's pitiful how his mum cannot stand up for him. I know there are weak women out there but as far as I know (from personal experience too) that a woman may fall weak but a mother fights for her child. I would never stay shut if it were my child anybody pointed a finger at, even if it was my child's own father. I don't take that sitting down, you know. Hubby gets pissed that I never listen anything against my baby, although I can differentiate between when she's the one at fault and when she's not. It makes me wonder how Dev's mum ended up with a man like him. Was she forced into it? Why didn't she try to get out of this marriage? What happened to Dev's father (did I miss it?)?

Anyway, I would like Dev's mother to stand up for him now more than ever. I hope she does come around and stand by him in the biggest decision of his life. And I'm so glad they way things have turned for Dev and Tara. Their story gives me a lesson. Life tests you the hardest when you're about to get the best thing out of it.

And so Maan and Geet became Manager and will forever remain so in our hearts. The truest thing that can be said about these two. ❤️ Let me take a moment to thank you for bringing an extraordinary story to us and telling it so beautifully that we couldn't help falling in love with the characters of it. You are one of the most gifted writers I have ever read. Thank you, really! ❤️

ok so i am dead now 😆
Yes there is a story about his mother 😃
it is an avi thing that no one can be denied a mom and I thought that it would be more gratifying in the epilogue instead of writing DevTara's closeness 😆
I hope you guessed that it was my way to escape writing that intimacy 😆
Thanks for reading Mari.
It was quite sloppy and I did not have a story board or plan but I wanted to write a story about DevTara and explore the memory loss problem also so this worked out.
there was one song from the show that I had not used before and I will be using it in the epilogue.
guess which one it is?