O Saathi Re rewritten COMPLETED - Page 90

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I know, I know, I'm late again. Sorry!

Chapter 23:

Originally posted by: mayyo

Chapter 23:

Dev Tara part again was a very enjoyable read. Like I said in my earlier comment, I love the pace they're going at. And I'm so happy for Tara getting a job and beginning her own life...

Maan Geet's meethi meethi laraayi about her taking so much time to get ready and him not really having to be so done up and ladies' do is what me and hubby do every time we have to get dressed to go to a formal event. I always complain how men don't need to fuss over clothes and makeup and hair and jewellery and shoes and clutch. It's so easy for them!

It is good to see Savitri devi really making an effort and finally doing the right thing by her grandson. I'm so pleased Maan and will be able to make his dreams come true and run a charitable hospital.

The last scene with them both sitting on the swing is so peaceful. And only then I realised that the end is quite near. And that made me sad. Wish this story could go on longer!

Enjoyed the chapter, Avi! Thanks so much for this beautiful story!

PS: forgot to mention in my previous comment. I loved the way Maan called her "biwi". It's something my personal Maan calls me.😳

Haaye Allah 😳

Fab Update Avi Janemann 😃 😃
Love this late night treat.. Dev called Tara home to meet his mom n step pagal dad,, I read this scene,, but I love some extra added lines in this update 😃
How's Tara living her life and etc etc.. love this 😳 😃 I wish to see Sid getting beaten by ER head lol 😆
Finally the hottest couple in town got married and Haaye what a magical SR Avi chha gai tussi 😉 😳
Clap for Maan cz He did try to remain sane but the bhooka sher can't keep his hands of her lol 😳 😆
Love this update.. Waiting for next 🤗

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Fab Update Avi Janemann 😃 😃
Love this late night treat.. Dev called Tara home to meet his mom n step pagal dad,, I read this scene,, but I love some extra added lines in this update 😃
How's Tara living her life and etc etc.. love this 😳 😃 I wish to see Sid getting beaten by ER head lol 😆
Finally the hottest couple in town got married and Haaye what a magical SR Avi chha gai tussi 😉 😳
Clap for Maan cz He did try to remain sane but the bhooka sher can't keep his hands of her lol 😳 😆
Love this update.. Waiting for next 🤗

thank u 😃
sab ko pm bhejna bhul gayi but u and khushi since u were waiting 😆
i am bingewatching some show with hayat and murat 😃 that one of coworker recommended

Originally posted by: mayyo

I know, I know, I'm late again. Sorry!

Valentine's special:

I like the pace and development of Dev and Tara's story. It is soft, yet intense, still yet moving. I love the fact that they're both aware of each other. After all, awareness is the first step to any relationship. I also enjoyed Dev being possessive about Tara when it came to Sid.

Savitri devi's changed behaviour sure was refreshing to see. She certainly is making an effort and I'm glad she is appreciated for that. Hats off to Maan and Geet for having such big hearts to forgive her and love her so openly. It was cute of her to think of making something they both like.

Maan and Geet's texting was fun to read, especially Geet ka jawab.😆

But the huge thing about this chapter was his memory regain. I would've thought something would trigger his memories and they will return as a result, but ye tou sotay sotay aa gayi.😆

Anyway, how is not important, what's important is that he remembers everything, the beautiful past that they had, the time they spent together, all of it.

And I just loved the proposal. Maan could be the most romantic person on earth if he just wanted to! The way he proposed her, they way he told her about his memories, the way he'd set up the dessert for them. Just a reminder of why I love this man! ❤️

Wonderful update, Avi! Perfect for the occasion it was written for!

Raat bhar khwaab mein
dekha karege tumhe 😆
mere nahi Gulzar saab ke words hai 😆
roz aisse Geet tadpayegi toh neend main hi sab yaad aayega na 😆
so glad you liked it

Originally posted by: mayyo

Chapter 23:

Dev Tara part again was a very enjoyable read. Like I said in my earlier comment, I love the pace they're going at. And I'm so happy for Tara getting a job and beginning her own life...

Maan Geet's meethi meethi laraayi about her taking so much time to get ready and him not really having to be so done up and ladies' do is what me and hubby do every time we have to get dressed to go to a formal event. I always complain how men don't need to fuss over clothes and makeup and hair and jewellery and shoes and clutch. It's so easy for them!

It is good to see Savitri devi really making an effort and finally doing the right thing by her grandson. I'm so pleased Maan and will be able to make his dreams come true and run a charitable hospital.

The last scene with them both sitting on the swing is so peaceful. And only then I realised that the end is quite near. And that made me sad. Wish this story could go on longer!

Enjoyed the chapter, Avi! Thanks so much for this beautiful story!

PS: forgot to mention in my previous comment. I loved the way Maan called her "biwi". It's something my personal Maan calls me.😳

The swing is essential 😳
Locket main bhi tha
We end up there most summer evenings facing the rose garden.
thodi si meri kahani ghus jaati hai kabhi kabhi 😆

SS hai toh complete karni thi jaldi 😃

Dev I thought he has no one like Tara but indeed he had no one