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angelwords

@angelwords

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: kuhu18
thanks for pm but
sorry dear i cant read this till now
i am very busy till new year
but will read and comment after 10 days

No Problem i understand, Will wait for comments and like😃

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cutical

@cutical

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

part3 superb dear geet searching her parents in the whole house but unable to find them she reached a old house she saw a old man who sees her and mumbled something then died geet scared nice continue soon dear
plz don't say gave readers a time fir commenting hd a superb writer. I'm new reader. loving this story it's awesome. don't be dis appointment. continene soon

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angelwords

@angelwords

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: cutical
part3 superb dear geet searching her parents in the whole house but unable to find them she reached a old house she saw a old man who sees her and mumbled something then died geet scared nice continue soon dear
plz don't say gave readers a time fir commenting hd a superb writer. I'm new reader. loving this story it's awesome. don't be dis appointment. continene soon

yes, Hopefully the responses will increase... I am not quiting or anything just little sad...thank you for likes and comment😃😃.. Appreciated😊

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Nothing...go according to ur plans

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Awesome part

waiting for story to unfold😉

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Thanks for the note dear

I really love ur penning style

This story is interesting and intriguing

So never let your self to be sad dear

Looking forward to the updates dear

😊

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#87

i liking the story line

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#88

until now I don't think it is lacking something...

I love it...

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CRAZYCUTEE

@CRAZYCUTEE

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#89

superb update

who that old maan and what is he saying to her

and what is happing

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SweetestPari

@SweetestPari

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Wonderful story :-)

Veryyy interesting..

Read all the parts in one go..

Awesome suspense in the story..

I think Geet is living some incarnation life right now..

N has now finally come back to her previous life birth place..

N Maan is waiting for her in some form.. I guess..

May be as a devil or as an angel.. As u mentioned in the prologue.. ;-) ;-d

Very curious to read further updates..

Thanks for the pm for this wonderful story.. :-)

Hoping to get further pms too for this story ;-)

Continue soon :-)

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