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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: kuhu18

thanks for pm but
sorry dear i cant read this till now
i am very busy till new year
but will read and comment after 10 days



No Problem i understand, Will wait for comments and like😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
part3 superb dear geet searching her parents in the whole house but unable to find them she reached a old house she saw a old man who sees her and mumbled something then died geet scared nice continue soon dear
plz don't say gave readers a time fir commenting hd a superb writer. I'm new reader. loving this story it's awesome. don't be dis appointment. continene soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: cutical

part3 superb dear geet searching her parents in the whole house but unable to find them she reached a old house she saw a old man who sees her and mumbled something then died geet scared nice continue soon dear
plz don't say gave readers a time fir commenting hd a superb writer. I'm new reader. loving this story it's awesome. don't be dis appointment. continene soon




yes, Hopefully the responses will increase... I am not quiting or anything just little sad...thank you for likes and comment😃😃.. Appreciated😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Nothing...go according to ur plans
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Awesome part
waiting for story to unfold😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Thanks for the note dear
I really love ur penning style
This story is interesting and intriguing
So never let your self to be sad dear
Looking forward to the updates dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i liking the story line
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88


until now I don't think it is lacking something...

I love it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
superb update
who that old maan and what is he saying to her
and what is happing
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Wonderful story :-)
Veryyy interesting..
Read all the parts in one go..
Awesome suspense in the story..
I think Geet is living some incarnation life right now..
N has now finally come back to her previous life birth place..
N Maan is waiting for her in some form.. I guess..
May be as a devil or as an angel.. As u mentioned in the prologue.. ;-) ;-d
Very curious to read further updates..
Thanks for the pm for this wonderful story.. :-)
Hoping to get further pms too for this story ;-)
Continue soon :-)



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