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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Wait what was that!! :O

Why there was no one while geet was searching everywhere

N that old man was laughing n saying its happening :O

N now from where geet mother came!! :/

N that man died!! How :/ :/

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angelwords

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Note

Hello Everyone,

Actually there is a question i really wanted to ask you all..

Is there anything lacking in story or storyline or anything else?? The likes are not what i expected.. I really wanted to know if you all have any suggestion , complaint or anything else...please tell me.. i will really appreciate it.. I am not quiting or anything, just wanted to know... because i send over 200 PM ... and this is somewhat discouraging.. thanks all of you for your support always

so waiting for replies eagerly and next part coming in an hour

love Angelwords

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ns.1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

No nothing is lacking. Infact it is very intriguing and interesting 😊 the only thing is that its very mysterious and that can be sometimes confusing for the readers, so I will suggest make it a little simpler and less mysterious and that's it 😊

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angelwords

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: ns.1
No nothing is lacking. Infact it is very intriguing and interesting 😊

thank you so much😊

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angelwords

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: ns.1
No nothing is lacking. Infact it is very intriguing and interesting 😊 the only thing is that its very mysterious and that can be sometimes confusing for the readers, so I will suggest make it a little simpler and less mysterious and that's it 😊

actually the story is demanding so because what basic plot i have in my mind for it.. requires Geet to be confused and then slowly the things will start solving.. i am writing it in this way because i want you all to think how geet is thinking and when the thing will unfold you will get a thought "ohh that is why".. is that okay?

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

hi thanks 4 da pm n note! u r a wonderful writer! the story is interesting n different! do continue! wen will u update Gosh she is different???/

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

thanks for note

story is going very well

continue

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angelwords

@angelwords

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n note! u r a wonderful writer! the story is interesting n different! do continue! wen will u update Gosh she is different???/

Hi ,Thanks for appreciation... according what i have planned after updating 4 part of this story, i will Jump to GSID.. so i can say after this next update will be of it.. Hope you like it.. If any suggestion Plz tell me