~THE UNDOING~(MG) (UPDATING & Note-Pg 32)

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deep002

@deep002

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Scary update dear, is that a dream or something

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

that's interesting
I thought it was a dream

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@simi91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Nice update

omg her dad past away

Poor geet

Waiting to read next

Ur story interesting

Thanks sweety

Edited by simi91 - 8 years ago

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Lovely update still confused never been ever confused reading a story so this person I am assuming is geet got up to find herself all alone and was confused she tried to find her parents was shocked to find them missing getting scared started to look for them when she saw an old man who was cute scary and scared the hell out of her when she saw her mom and ran crying in her arms

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Madhu

@Madhu_31

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Geet was cared as she didn't fi d anyone near her or in their home
What did the old man say..
He died too!!!
I think Geet has connection with the mystery tale..
Can't wait for the nxt part
Plzz continue soon

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

what happened...

nice update......

thank u very much fr d update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Nyc update dear

Loved it!!

Geet woke up from her peaceful ambience and cozy sleep to find thyself late for her daily chores

She found her self alone in her home and paved way to the streets to find her parents and people to help her out

The streets showcased silence and marked by lacking in cheer and desolated with no companion like a lonely cactus in the desert

The thought of her being alone on the deserted road sent chill through her spine

Her dainty head cocked side ways when she heard faint voice through walls

The old man's murmered something with his wicked and evil grin and breathes his last

Geet's mom and the old man's daughter entered at the moment to witness geet's scare stiffen state and old man's death state

Looks like the thriller suspense of paranormal activities are welcomed in geet's life!!

😊😛

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Thanks for the pm dear

Will be waiting for the next update😊

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leena63

@leena63

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Scary update
She woke up late as per her mom's rules
& she didn't find any one at her home
She came outside the house but didn't find any oneon the road or at any neighbourhood
Finally she found an old man at one house
She didn't understand his language & he laughed scary
He whispered something in her ear & dead

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#70

hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing scary update! well written! Poor Geet! she panics nt finding anyone! the old man dies! Geet sees her mom n is relived! update soon