~THE UNDOING~(MG) (UPDATING & Note-Pg 32)

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@Endgame

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

nice update
this place is so mysterious... geet so scared that old man behaved so oddly..

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gurtimuskaan

@gurtimuskaan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#102

part 3
a bit scary kinda part

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gurtimuskaan

@gurtimuskaan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

part 4
geet is not able to understand what is happening around.. its really seems weird n mysterious.. weather changed when geet was feeling upset..
n now some new people are moving in nearby..

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

geet so scared...
and that old man said something.. that made her more scared...
her mom tried to console her
nice update

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Nyc update

Loved it!!

Geet was scared stiffen witnessing the not so pleasant happenings around her

Her mother consoled her but she was panic stricken and couldn't fathom to understand the situation

Strange and uncanny place and their tradition is strange as well

The people at the place drop themselves at Temple early morning and geet's mother to gave in to the custom and her dad left home vowing to his work commitments thus geet was left alone at home

Was the change of climate indicates geet's state and frame of mind!?when geet was scared the climate turned windy and fiery when she was abt to cry her lungs out after her strange encounter the climate abruptly turned cloudy and was abt to pour down as well.

The unheard words and evil grin of the old man made her traumised that she fell asleep

With unpleasant thoughts and conflicting mind

New arrivals next to geet's neighborhood and are from foreign land

😊😛

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Thanks for the pm

Will be waiting for the next update😊

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

story bit confusing geet scared hr mom consoling hr

someone coming in their neighbourhood

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

chap 4 nice part geet is feeling weird abt her surrounding the people anf now weather os also chanag ed nice continue soon superb going dear thnks fir the pm dear

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#109

hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! Well written! Feeling 4 Geet! she is so scared n the old man's words r haunting her! Her mom consoles her! update soon

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#110

this story is in monologues so until now we don't know girl's name... is it really a Maan-Geet story or some random story...

about the update--I was really very curious to know the reason behind disappearance of the girl's mother and father from house and whole neighborhood deserted...

but her mother told her the reason is that everybody went to temple... if it was so important for everybody to go to temple then why she left her daughter alone...but it is also true that how would she have known that something strange will happen with her in the mean time...

please give name to this girl so that I can comment with name also...while writing down comments many times there was situation when I want to write name but then I realized that until now her name is not disclosed...all 4 updates narrated as monologue by girl herself...and another problem is that I never read any character's story other than Maan-Geet...

thanx for pm...

Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 8 years ago