New SS: Sirf Tere Liye... Last Pt4/pg8, 10/12/2016

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Posted: 8 years ago
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...Just for You



Hi Everyone.
I am writing here after a long time.
I Hope you enjoy this.


Prologue


Maan:


Band aankho se tujhe dekhna chaha
Hawao me tujhe mehsus karna chaha...

Kaha hai tu... kaisi hai tu
Milne ki tujhse aas lagaye baitha hu...

Mil jaao bas ek baar toh dhadkane tujhse rubaru ho jaaye
Ishq-e-izhar karke ye zindagi teri mohtaaj ho jaaye...




Geet:


Dhadkane sirf meri rubaru hoyi tere liye
Mile toh the hum bas door jaane ke liye...

Ishq-e-Izhar toh hua par kisi aur ke liye
Zindagi teri mohtaaj huyi teri khushiyo ke liye...

Ek na ho sake hum toh kya
Radha aur kishan ka pyaar bhi toh aisa tha...



The story of two individuals who were destined to be together but still got separated for each other's happiness... Will destiny again play its role to bring them together or they will be separated forever..??

One is waiting for his love to start a new story and other is going far from this love JUST FOR HIM to start his new story...


Well this is going to be a poetic story with some words to explain the situation.



pls do leave your feedback.
they will really motivate me.

love
rituja



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Part 1: Below


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Part 1




Delhi University... Two individuals met to become friends and friends forever...



Geet:


Anjaan se sheher mein khud ko le aayi hu

Ghar se dur kuch sapne pure karne aayi hu...

Kuch dino main hi is sheher ne mujhe apna bana liya

Naye logo se milakar naye rishto ka sagar dila diya...

Usme se ek rishte ko mere liye khaas bana diya

Maan se milakar dosti ka naya panna likh diya...



Maan:



Sapne mujhe bahaut hai lagte pyaare

Kisi se jo mil jaata hu inke jariye...

Chehra uska dhundlasa nazar aaye

Dekhne ko pass jau toh nind hi khul jaaye...

Khawb toh saare mujhe bhi karne hai pure

Saath mil jaaye bas tumhara zindagi bhar ke liye...



Geet:


Dosti kar ke galti toh nahi ki meine

Khawb sun ke iske thak gayi hu mein...

Humesha bas sapno ke piche laga hota hai

Haqiqat se ye har waqt pare rehta hai...

Kaise samjhau use khawb dekhna chod de

Jo hai hi nahi use apna banana chod de...



Maan:


Samjhau kaise geet ko mere khawbo ki kahani

Mazak mein kehti hai pagal mujhe wo deewani...

Dost hai ya dushman mere ye in khawbo ki

Mil jaayegi wo pari jab toh khud hi humara rishta banyegi...

Geet toh mujhe mujhse jyada pehchanti hai

Uske bina zindagi ab berukhi si lagti hai...

Har mushkil main wo saath hoti hai

Dosti ki humare ab misaal di jaati hai...



Geet:


Deewana hai wo uska kaise samajh aaye na

Khawb uske samajh aaye fir kuch samjhe na...

Kash dhund ke la sakti uske pari ko mein

Kismat uski pari ke saath likh paati mein...

Meri kismat mujhse ruthi hai toh uski kaise likhu

Duao main bas uski khushi ka ab zikra karu...

Uski khushi pari main hai toh yahi sahi

Ibadat main rab ki maangu unka saath abhi...


...to be continued.

Guys, let me know if I should continue.


Edited by mishtiritu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations for your New story
and a new attempt😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Veeerrruuu!!!!!!!!😃 Welcome Back meri jaan🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗... So Good to see you back on Forum... Aap Aaye Bahaar Aayi😳... Haayyeee Can't Even Express how much happy i am to see my Veeru back🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳... Main to Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika bhi karne lagi... Ab mat jana kahi😭...
Wow Kya Surprise diya ha😃i... Aate hi Sixer maar Diya😉... Haven't read the story yet but will again come back with my comment😳...

Thank you Veeru For this Lovely Surprise🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗... Dil Garden Garden Ho Gaya
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... Love you loads yaar😳...
... But ab tu kahi mat jana😊... Tere bina Jag Soona Soona Lage😭... Hehehehe main aaj kuch zyada dramatic ho gayi😆...

Luv you loads😳... Will come back with comment👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

With Love
Teri Basanti (Aakriti)⭐️

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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi ..
congrats for new start ..

will this story proceed in a poetic manner ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tabby999

hi ..

congrats for new start ..

will this story proceed in a poetic manner ...


Thank u and Yes most probably it will be in a poetic manner only..
May be one or 2 updates will be with words.. Not sure though..
This is my 2nd attempt of poetic story.. Hope u all will like it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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read part 1..
interesting the way u wrote in poetic manner ...
maan thinks of his dreams and his pari where as geet his bestie wants happy life for maan ..i think she is in love with him but unable to express as maan talks abt his dreams and dreamgirl ...


thanks for update
waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome back sweety
Happy to see u here
Was missing u n your poems

So maan deewani ...khawaboo ki duniya mai rehney wala

Pari ko dhoond raha hai ..or pari uski sab se acchi dost hai

Loved it

Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congos
nice starting
cant w8 to read more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats on the new story! awesome banner! beautiful updates! wonderfully written

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