New SS: Sirf Tere Liye... Last Pt4/pg8, 10/12/2016

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Ritz!!! Amazing attempt! Very interesting n mind capturing!!

Totally loved the poetic way it is going! Hope aage bhi aise hi likhegi!!

Loved the prologue n part 1

Maan lost in his dreams while geet is being a realist here!

Waiting to see how the story progresses!!

Congrats once again 👏👍🏼

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Rituja

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Posted: 8 years ago

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@Endgame

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Thats beautiful geet left silently not before leaving maan with his pari but now the emptiness of geet is hurting him thnx 4 pm

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Res

Part 1

Good that you are writing. You need to write more woman!

First chapter was so sweet
they met. they became friends and Haiye deewana sa maan!
he has his own theory of his "pari" jiske baare mein pagal bol bol ke geet ko tang karta hain

and Geet is like- babji isko iski pari se mila do tho meri jaan choote😆
two cute crazy friends... i loved the entire thing.
you didn't miss out the impt stuffs amidst the stanzas.
Lovely one ritzz.
I am going to read another part and comment.

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

part 2

the subtlties of radha krishna and rukmini was tooo beautiful ritzz
i could almost feelt he pain of radha and rukmini both
Geet loved him lekin pagal tho apni pari ke peeche deewana tha
pari milli aur Geet chali gayi...
obviously with that broken heart how could she have stayed?
but janya understands... she knws now that she is just rukmini jisne kanha ko paa tho liya lekin kabhi radha jaisi priyasi nahi ban saki.

Wo Deewana toh mujhe kisi ke saath dekhna chahta hai

Kaise bolu use ki meera ke liya toh sab uska kaanha hi hai...

Radha hoti uski mein toh bhi uski saathi na ban paati

the most beautiful and my favorite lines <3
you have written this so beautifully ritzz
looking forward to read more

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Very emotional part

Kitni sahi see hstya hai teeno ki feeling ko

Really missed this style of story ritu

Love u

Now when maan got his pari ...he is missing his best friend ...

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CRAZYCUTEE

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

superb lovely update

geet went away from maan life after pari came in his life

maan n par r togther but they r not happy n pari know geet love maan so she want them togther continue soon

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

magar na radha kabhi mile krishna ko na meera...woh dono toh unke diwani hi reh gaye...abb kya honge iss radha ya meera ko...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! superbly written!

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Superb Ritu 😃
Welcome back.. missed your poetic stories 😃 😳
Love this storyline,, concept.. 👏
Geet loves Maan silently,, and he is after his pari 😲
I liked the character of janya so understanding 😃
Waiting for next