New SS: Sirf Tere Liye... Last Pt4/pg8, 10/12/2016

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

nice one ..

geet left maan coz maan got his pari ..he is said that geet left him ..ab bhi nahi samjha aapne pyaar ko ..

pari wants to unite maneet again

thanks for update

waiting for next

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Beautiful well written

Love it

Pls more eng me not so good with Hindi

Ur fascinating writer

Thanks enjoy reading

Thanks sweety

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Part-1

Not much into poetry but i love the way you depict their story like this.

Geet seems a very practical person here whereas maan is a dreamer who is waiting for his one & only.

So is there going to be a love factor b/w them? Because they both seems to be just friends.

Part-2

Oh so i miss the fact that geet loves maan silently but didn't confess it to him.

maan finally met his soon-to-be wife janya but geet left them once they were together leaving a void in maan's life.

Janya knowing the depth of their relation decides to make both of them meet together but this time forever.

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

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beautiful...beautiful...beautifull...
janya... haiye my heart went out to her.
to have her love with her and then letting him go is so heart breaking
but she understood. she is one beautiful soul.
Maan's Meera she is.. who for a moment got mistaken as rukmini...
The parallel story you weaved about kanha, radha,meera and rukmini is so beautiful ritzz
very overwhelming.

There is something about geet...kuch chupa rahi hain.
is she unwell? is she dying? ya kuch aur?
love love loveee her bonding with rohan.

Maan finally realizes that his destiny lies wth geet..
but there were a few lines that touched me so much...
I would like to put them here...

Maan Jaao Maan mein tumhari nahi

In aankho me jo pyaar hai wo mere liye nahi...

Ohh janya... you made me cry.

Kab tak aise khud ko saza dogi

Meri gudiya aise toh na thi...

the second line was touching...i could almost hear rohan's voice in my head,laced with concern, sadness, love and so much more.

Ek wo kishan ki meera thi aur ye maan ki meera hai

Wo apni bhakti me leen thi aur ye apne pyaar ke liye hai...

the best lines perhaps. it did something to me...

you touched the right chords of my heart ritzz.

now waiting for the next!

Edited by kawaii_geet - 8 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

hi thanks 4 da pm n magnificent update, excellently written! the feelings and thoughts of each character well portrayed!

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@Endgame

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Beautiful update..have to say maan is very lucky finally he realise his feelings and run to geet thnx 4 pm

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

fabulous update

every one is suffering n sacrifing for their loed one

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Part-3

Janya made him understand who his true love.

Is geet suffering from some disease?

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Lovely ... musical storyof maaneet ... maaneet r lucky that they got rohan n j ... who really understand them

Finally maan realising his feeling for geet

Poem story likh kar tune school ki yaad dila di...

Lovely

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