New SS: Sirf Tere Liye... Last Pt4/pg8, 10/12/2016 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Veerrruuu🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗... Main Aa Gayi... Main aa gayi... Main aa gayi... Aayi hoon to comment kar ke hi jaungi😉... Crime MAster GOGO ki bhatiji jo thehri😆
Ok enough of my filmi keeda😆... Coming to your SS... Yaar m just floored with the way you had penned down everything... Even though it was in poetic style yet i could feel and understand each and everything like it was happening in front of my eyes...

i am totally awed by the Geet's selfless love... The way she sacrificed her love so that Maan could be with his Pari is awesome... And Maan as always couldn't realize that he loves Geet actually he loves Geet only but he thinks hat he loves Pari i.e Janiya... Sometimes we couldn't differentiate between liking and love... He likes Janiya but he loves Geet...

But apart from Geet one character that stole my heart is of Janiya... It's very hard to let someone go whom you love so much... And as portrayed by you This time Rukmini has sacrificed her Kanha for Radha... i don't know what but something divine happened to me when i read Janiya's part... I couldn't explain in words actually...

Geet is hiding something i don't know what but what i can guess is that either she is sick or something as in some disease or may be her alliance is fixed with Rohan.. Will be eagerly waiting to know that...

Few lines that are my favorite, i would like to quote:

"Kaanha ki Rukmini mein ban toh gayi

Radha ko bas unse dur na kar saki...

Aaj Is Rukmini ko Radha ka haq use dilana hai

Radha Kishan ko ek saath laana hai..."


Like beautiful lines that gave me that Divine feeling and also one more:


"Vaada karta hu jo bhi ho ye pyaar kam na hoga

Ab tumhe Meera se meri Rukmini banna hi hoga..."


But my personal favorite was that of Janiya's... Truly Divine😳😳😳...


Thank you for presenting such a beautiful piece of work👏... Waiting for more... please update soon...😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Wow simply fabulous
Real my heart went out for
Poor she let go love of her life
Wonder what is wrong with geet she die or sick she kind of hiding something
Love it
Thanks sweety
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
chalo maan ko samajh mein toh aya...
lovely update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Welcome back ritu, after ling time
Nice prologue.
So geet sacrificed her love for his betterment
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
part 1 - both maan & geet became best friends. geet became his life, solving all his problems. geet was unhappy that he only believe in his drems about his pari who was not yet in his sight. geet tried to tell him about his futile attempt to find his pari. now only she can do is find his pari for him to make him happy. she started liking him but he was unaware about her feelings. Meri kismat mujhse ruthi hai toh uski kaise likhu" touched this line


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2 - So finally maan found his pari. Janya too noticed that maan was starring at her. She too liked him. She saw him with geet whom he wants to introduce her.

Feeling bad for geet that she sacrificed her love for maan's happiness .

Why janya was feeling lonely before maan entered her life.?

Oh maan wants geet too find her humsafar so both can spent the journey together. He was her best friend and still he could not see that she loves him .?

Oh...geet decided to leave him...

She left him and he felt that void in his life. He missed her though his pari was with him. Hope he can realize his real feelings for pari & geet.

Thnk god janya realized what place geet has in maan's life. She decided to unite radha & Krishna.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Part 3 - Jimya tried to explain him what geet feels for him. For uniting them she too left him saying that she is the one for whom his heart beats. Maan realized what jinya said. He was happy that both loved him equally.

Rohan was feeling sad for geet. He wanted to know the name so that he can bring him in front of her.

I liked the rohan calling geet as Maan ki meera'.

Why geet said that Ye zindagi kab saath chod degi mujhe bhi nahi pata...is she unwell..? what happened with her.

Finally maan vowed to bring her back. He only wanted her saath. Hope soon both gets united.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

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beautiful...beautiful...beautifull...
janya... haiye my heart went out to her.
to have her love with her and then letting him go is so heart breaking
but she understood. she is one beautiful soul.
Maan's Meera she is.. who for a moment got mistaken as rukmini...
The parallel story you weaved about kanha, radha,meera and rukmini is so beautiful ritzz
very overwhelming.

There is something about geet...kuch chupa rahi hain.
is she unwell? is she dying? ya kuch aur?
love love loveee her bonding with rohan.

Maan finally realizes that his destiny lies wth geet..
but there were a few lines that touched me so much...
I would like to put them here...

Maan Jaao Maan mein tumhari nahi

In aankho me jo pyaar hai wo mere liye nahi...


Ohh janya... you made me cry.



Kab tak aise khud ko saza dogi

Meri gudiya aise toh na thi...

the second line was touching...i could almost hear rohan's voice in my head,laced with concern, sadness, love and so much more.



Ek wo kishan ki meera thi aur ye maan ki meera hai

Wo apni bhakti me leen thi aur ye apne pyaar ke liye hai...


the best lines perhaps. it did something to me...

you touched the right chords of my heart ritzz.

now waiting for the next!



Doll... U r Awesome... how well u understood what I portrayed..
Luv u... Thank u so much... and without u it would not have been possible to write this story...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Veerrruuu🤗... Main Aa Gayi... Main aa gayi... Main aa gayi... Aayi hoon to comment kar ke hi jaungi😉... Crime MAster GOGO ki bhatiji jo thehri😆

Ok enough of my filmi keeda😆... Coming to your SS... Yaar m just floored with the way you had penned down everything... Even though it was in poetic style yet i could feel and understand each and everything like it was happening in front of my eyes...

i am totally awed by the Geet's selfless love... The way she sacrificed her love so that Maan could be with his Pari is awesome... And Maan as always couldn't realize that he loves Geet actually he loves Geet only but he thinks hat he loves Pari i.e Janiya... Sometimes we couldn't differentiate between liking and love... He likes Janiya but he loves Geet...

But apart from Geet one character that stole my heart is of Janiya... It's very hard to let someone go whom you love so much... And as portrayed by you This time Rukmini has sacrificed her Kanha for Radha... i don't know what but something divine happened to me when i read Janiya's part... I couldn't explain in words actually...

Geet is hiding something i don't know what but what i can guess is that either she is sick or something as in some disease or may be her alliance is fixed with Rohan.. Will be eagerly waiting to know that...

Few lines that are my favorite, i would like to quote:

"Kaanha ki Rukmini mein ban toh gayi

Radha ko bas unse dur na kar saki...

Aaj Is Rukmini ko Radha ka haq use dilana hai

Radha Kishan ko ek saath laana hai..."


Like beautiful lines that gave me that Divine feeling and also one more:


"Vaada karta hu jo bhi ho ye pyaar kam na hoga

Ab tumhe Meera se meri Rukmini banna hi hoga..."


But my personal favorite was that of Janiya's... Truly Divine😳😳😳...


Thank you for presenting such a beautiful piece of work👏... Waiting for more... please update soon...😳


Thank u sooo much Basanti... I love u...
I really liked your cmnt u know... It motivated me...
Thank u...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Madhuri Di: Thank u so much di... It really means a lot... Luv u...
@Maansi di: Thank u di for pestering me to write and come back on IF
@Aashu and Aakriti: Ur replies are on pg7.

@All : Thank u so much everyone for being there... For liking and commenting...
It means a lot... Luv u all...

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