New SS: Sirf Tere Liye... Last Pt4/pg8, 10/12/2016

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tabby999

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Posted: 8 years ago

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this is beautiful ...finallly geet got her maan back ..

thank u for lovely poem ..

thanks

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Madhuri

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Part 4 - Why geet was saying that mauth hi uski manzil hai. Oh...Someone tried to hurt jinya but geet took it on her and jinya was indebted to her. Jinya was trying hard to mend all things. She was determined to give geet her right place.Finally maan understood the imp of each person beside him, thanking jinya & rohan for helping him to get his radha. Liked this maan's line "Meera ho Radha ho ya Rukmini par ho toh tum is kaanha ki...Saathi hu tumhara jaise ye baasuri hai meri..." thnx for this beautiful poetic piece of mg story.

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Madhuri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Ritu add link of 'My Work Thread' to page 1

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Wow what a wonderful story...

Beautiful poetry... You are really very good at it...

Kanha aur radha ka intazar kahin to khatam hua...

Aakhir kar iss jahan me unka milan to hua...

I have no words to express... It was really mesmerizing...

Thanks for sharing it..

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sobia4maaneet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

hi ritu di

firstly i big bhagraa ...yeppiiieee u r back nana

n sorry for late comment i just logged into IF after 2 months

story is usual lovely

n ur poetry too

thank you for pms

keep rocking

luv ya

sobia

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Aakriti Srivastava

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Hi Veeru... Main finally Aa gayi... Now stop sulking... Ok coming to the story as usual i was spellbound... You know i really like the way you portray everything... As i said before it makes me travel to some other world... i mean it is so divine and pure that i find myself lost somewhere when reading it...

Poor Geet she has suffered a lot but one thing i am unable to understand... What poison are they talking about... first i thought that Geet is some kind of assaulted instead of Janiya but then i think there is something else but whatever it is I am glad that forgetting everything Geet decided to move on with Maan and with his love i m sure she'll get cure in every way possible..

You know i really like the conversation between Geet and Janiya... And more than that i like the relationship between Geet and Janiya as it depicts the relationship between Rukmini and Meera... Something very rare and never seen before and totally Divine...

As i said before Janiya is my favourite character in this story as she did what Rukmini couldn't do and her part made me travel to some different world...

"Mujhe kaanha nahi bas geet ka maan banna hai"... This is my Favorite line and i was totally struck over it😳 And also one more

Meera ko bas intazar tha apne kaanha ka

Wo khush thi intazar main pyar paake kaanha ka...

Rukmini ne aa ke uski zindagi badal di

Radha na paa saki jo wo meera paa gayi...

Akhir is yug mein uska intazar khatam hua tha

Meera ko uska kaanha jo mil gaya tha...

Also this one... You totally nailed it with this story Veeru... Thank you for presenting such a beautiful work 👏... I am waiting for more of your works now... Take care

Luv Aakriti😊